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    Quote Originally Posted by Vampmare View Post
    I delayed my response a bit, to see what others had to say first and the time has come.

    I've seen you in game play doctor and MT, so you have that covered.

    The story works, its fine. I will repeat that you have to be careful not to make the quirk a gimmick, but I think you got that, so all clear. Your "Why should we whitelist you" was rushed a bit. I liked your answer to Pedroca a lot more.

    In the end, I think it comes down to a +1.
    I can't thank you enough Vamp.


    I will be really careful about the quirk not becoming a gimmick on accident and such.

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    +1, Vamp essentially summarized my feelings towards this application.

    Starr has always been good to me too, you talk to people whenever you get the opportunity.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Jakkkk View Post
    +1, Vamp essentially summarized my feelings towards this application.

    Starr has always been good to me too, you talk to people whenever you get the opportunity.
    Thank you!

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    As someone who often plays Command and Support roles, I can personally vouch for C.R.Y.P.T.E.Ks in game ability and it always makes me feel less tense when I see him in the CiC with me, or in requisitions. For what it's worth, I'll throw in my +1.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Viperious View Post
    As someone who often plays Command and Support roles, I can personally vouch for C.R.Y.P.T.E.Ks in game ability and it always makes me feel less tense when I see him in the CiC with me, or in requisitions. For what it's worth, I'll throw in my +1.
    Thanks a lot, glad I am able to help you be less tense xD

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    Overall a decent app and good replies to questions asked of you.

    The story was a bit odd in how it went but I don�t expect everyone to be a master of writing and it shows what I expect in a story. Decent grammar, an actual plot, and it shows off your quirk and how you may use it in a given round.

    As others have said you need to be sure not to make it into a gimmick or joke but I�m sure you understand that and stick to the guidelines for synths.

    I�ll give this a +1
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    Quote Originally Posted by Aceluke View Post
    Overall a decent app and good replies to questions asked of you.

    The story was a bit odd in how it went but I don�t expect everyone to be a master of writing and it shows what I expect in a story. Decent grammar, an actual plot, and it shows off your quirk and how you may use it in a given round.

    As others have said you need to be sure not to make it into a gimmick or joke but I�m sure you understand that and stick to the guidelines for synths.

    I�ll give this a +1
    thanks a lot for the +1.

    And yeah I will make sure to stick to the quirk and not go 'rogue'.

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    Yeah this is p good fella. Just don't fuck up surgery on Jakkk on your first week playing and I think you'll do great. +1

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    Quote Originally Posted by SolubleWhenWet View Post
    Yeah this is p good fella. Just don't fuck up surgery on Jakkk on your first week playing and I think you'll do great. +1
    Great.. My plan goes down the disposals unit! I told you not to say it here!

    But yeah, I won't and thank you for the +1.

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    Competent support player, decent RPer, meh story.
    I have seen you around a great lot, mainly as CT and other support roles. You pull your weight snd you have been around for some time.
    I like your quirk. Its not over the top, and the idea is original. I think someone already has something biblical related, but that hardly matters.
    Story feels tacky and 'cut' in certain parts, but it shows your synths demeanor and quirk enough.

    All in all, good app, here is my +1!
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