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    Operation Thunder Run II.

    Hey retards,

    An idea came up to my mind yesterday and I made it real.
    I've been trying to rewrite some military themed stories and bump them towards the CM lore, this is the first one I've -somewhat- finished, it's based on Battle of Baghdad [2003] and it includes characters like Chance Warden, Sanada, Jackson Dee and few others.

    Enjoy.


    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing


    Last edited by Avalanchee; 04-13-2019 at 08:11 AM.



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    Baghdad time
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    Coool. Waiting for my name in part 2. lol

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    About time bro,

    Smh write faster
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    This was pretty damn good. Great work man.

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    Good stuff
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    Pretty fun to read. Nice job
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    Excellent story. If you're not now, you should try writing short stories and getting them published. With the exception of a few grammatical errors, I can only suggest marking both a change in time, and a change in perspective. An hyphen between paragraphs at least. Otherwise, it's clear that you have experienced, or at least studied, contemporary Marine doctrine to include it in your writing, and it's very impressive.

    Keep going.

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