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    DarkShinigamiX - Predator Application

    Predator Whitelist Application
    Byond ID:
    DarkShinigamiX

    Marine Name
    Irmina "Corey" Blum

    Name of the Yautja Character you wish to play
    Dahrou A'kub

    Have you banned in the past month or are currently banned from other servers?
    No, And I have no plans on being banned either, particularly from this server.

    Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
    Yes.

    Yautja Character Story
    Dahrou A'kub's Personal Log: Yautja Prime, 2XXX

    Dahrou Is Leaping Calmly and Quietly along the Ancient, and Long Honored Forests of Yautja Prime, Rumbling to herself in clear thought "I've had Little Luck Scavenging Artefacts of our Culture, from the days of old, But, I thank S'ahal, Goddess of Wisdom, For I have managed to Locate a Fallen Youngblood." as she lands with a stop before a fallen youngblood, she kneels and honorably rubs his bio-mask, clicking in respect
    as she held out her Wrist Computer, utilizing it's 3D-Scanning Feature and she rumbles "Preliminary Injury Analysis From my Wrist Computer Scans show he Died in his Blooding Ritual, But, He was not gifted a standard Issue Medicinal Shard, but instead, an Ancient Medicomp!" and with a swift flick of the wrist, out of a hidden compartment emerged a pair of wrist blades, her unmasked face glancing into the dark forest, she taps quietly, Before Putting on her Bio-Mask, opening her wrist computer, and shifting her vision mode on her bio-mask to suit her situation, She saw what looks to be a Xenomorph Serpent, But in actuality was a Vy'Drach
    Glancing Back, and Carrying herself with calm, un-nerving composure,and with gleeful clicks, She Quietly Removed this device, as she heard the roar of the serpent rapidly Approaching, and she Rumbles to herself, all while setting her Fallen kinsman's Bracer to overload, she fled the scene, her prize in tow, Passing by the ancient pyramid as she left
    She could NOT wait to get back to her village, and her laboratory, and she rumbles lowly to herself, clearly in thought "This is the first relic of My People, an Ancient Device used in the first hunts, I can't wait to get this back to my Laboratory in the village and start studying the relic immediately!" soon enough, she came to a skidding stop, startling several young yautja pups, clicking silently to their parents
    as they wonder in silent reverence as to what Dahrou has discovered, and several cycles later, she has a startling revelation about the medicomp, which has been dissassembled, and re-assembled perfectly several times already, as she rumbles joyfully to herself "I've Finally Cracked The Puzzle! The Blue Solvent, Which is Capable of Dissolving Any Injuring Material, Whether it Be an Energy Flechette,A Serpent's Strike or Toxic Blood ,or a Human-Made Bullet!" she calms herself, and she rumbles further, holding up several of the various surgical tools made by her people
    and she quietly rumbles, as she records this into a personal datalog on her wrist computer, she rumbles aloud to herself"Also, The Variety of other Surgical Tools appear to have been Designed Specifically to treat and bind Yautja Flesh, Starting from the Syringe, This Syringe appears to be capable of Injecting the Regenerative Sludge, which is a Very painful thing when injected into an open wound, Second, This sludge is injected after the offending material is removed and burned away. the entire treatment process is rough and painful"
    as she Rumbles and stares at the surgical staplers next"And it is Because of this glaring weakness, Naturally Our Hide is too Tough for Surgical Needles to be bound Properly for healing, The Surgical Staples appear to be a pain-laden alternative, The process is finished by injecting a Stimulant shot, which re-focuses the patient on their sacred hunt." as Dahrou clicks calmly and stares at her mother with trust and love, she'd hear Her mother rumble something calmly, "it is time for you to head back to the proving grounds, youngblood." As Dahrou nods with Respect for her blooded mother placed the Medicomp on her artefacts rack, as she would head for the proving grounds immediately, taking advantage of the terrain to get there quicker.

    Yautja Prime, 2XXX


    Dahrou A'kub stood before the elder hunters, in respect, as she stood in the pit, victorious in her honor duel, as she roars in triumph, as one clicks, beckoning her up, as it rumbles "I wish to show you something, Acolyte of S'ahal." And he beckons Dahrou to follow, as she Rumbles in Response "What do you wish to show me, Elder Hunter?" Curiousity coursing through her veins, and despite her youngblood rank, She heard the Elder Hunter Roar out "It is time for your blooding ritual."
    The Two, and all her fellow Youngbloods stood in Awe, as Dahrou A'kub stood before one of the ancient yautja locks, all she had to do was unlock it with her scimitars. Her blades sprung from their hidden compartment, her hand quivering with excitement, a chance and an opportunity to learn many, many new things, considering the long, storied history of her people, maybe she could even meet her mother's ancestor.
    She Inhales, and finally inserts her wrist-blades into the slot, as she would hear a click in the ancestral stones, as a doorway opened, as the Elder clicks to Dahrou, Whom nods in Understanding as she hears these commands "Within is a hive of Serpents, you are to slay one honorably, and return with a trophy of your choosing. once this is done, we shall elevate you to the rank of blooded. and then you may join your brethren in sacred hunts off-world. far from home." as Dahrou's heart soared at the thought, and she rumbles "I will do as you ask, Honorable Elder." and with an agile leap into a stone elevation, she soon departed within.
    The Ancient, Stone Temple Doors sealing shut behind her, she was on her own, but thankfully, the elder hunter was kind enough to provide a Healing Shard in need of an Emergency, she thought to herself, she was centered, and calm, as she rumbles, her wrist-blades extended and at the ready, as she says "All I've got to do is study, stalk, and hunt an honorable prey...sounds easy enough." and after many hours of cloaked following, and cleansing many unworthy prey, she held the second mouth of a slain, worthy Serpent
    and when she emerged, she was hailed by her fellow youngbloods, as she was elevated to blooded status, and sent away with her fellow blooded, to claim greater glory on far-off worlds, but her primary objectives in the hunts, is to learn, and study the varied cultures of unknown species, in which this information shall be fed back to her hunt brothers and sisters, to better prepare them for later hunts, if need be.
    Humans, Serpents, It Matters not, all will feed her quest for knowledge in S'ahal's Name.

    Describe how your Yautja acts, and how you intend to play them
    She Is a Scientist by nature, She prefers to use what she has learned so far, to better assist her hunt brothers and sisters, and grant them a slight advantage as they stalk their chosen prey, she often speaks with respect, and holds S'ahal in the highest respect.

    In your own words, describe the difference between an honor duel and a hunt
    An Honor Duel is a Match in Single Combat, Where the Victor Remains Alive, and the Defeated are usually Slain in battle, it is Sacred in this reason, as it brings Honor to either side, regardless of the other's intent.

    A Hunt, on the other Hand, is Sacred to many Yautja, Often times based on what the other hunters intend to claim out of these unknown, strange worlds.

    How do you intend on interacting with other predators during a round?
    To Grant Them Advice, Help them better understand the lay of the land, and have pre-emptive information on their chosen prey when the time comes. she often stays out of a chaotic situation, as it derails her singular focus: the pursuit of knowledge, this might offend more thrill-of-the-hunt based yautja, but she has learned to cope with it.

    Why do you want a predator whitelist?
    To Break up the tedium and Monotony of being denied a USCM specialist round, and to allow me to have something fun to do between attempts at being a colonial marine.

    Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
    Yes

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    Story is short and sweet and tells me about your Character.

    My roleplay experiences have actually been pretty good with you before.

    +1 I think you're a pretty solid player.

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    The Story lacks of combat in my point of view, especially in your blood hunt trial.

    I'm Remaining Neutral until more feedback

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    You have a lot peeps vouching for you in the background saying you're a good RPer etc... but your forum account is new, and I do not know you.
    Your story is pretty good, although like Edgardo said it could have used some combat stuff.

    Since you are more of a scholar predator, I have some scenarios for you


    You are hunting on LV426, and you locate a Generation 1 Synth, how would you interact with it?


    You are hunting on LV426 and a marine has entered the small sand temple. The marine challenges you wearing armour and brandishing a machete. You decided to use your fists and begin to pummel the marine, but they pull out a shotgun and shoot you. How would you respond?


    While hunting on Big Red, you come upon two Intelligence Officers and one of them sees you and says "Hello?" How would you respond?

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    To Answer Question 1 Concerning LV426, I would begin asking the Gen 1 Synth, Considering that Synths would be termed Innocent Prey according to the Yautja Code of Honor, They would mostly be left alone, as long as they tell me what they need to know.

    Question 2 Answer: I would Immediately Re-classify my Intended Target as Unworthy Prey, and Immediately start to purge their existence from the Hunting grounds, once this is done, I would immediately cloak and proceed to find a more worthy target to hunt

    Question 3's answer: I would Respond somewhat positively, but mainly, I would attempt to study them further, learn their actions, if they are hostile, I'd make my decision then and there, but ONLY if one of them proves to be a threat to me and my hunt

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    Im less concerned about the lack of combat in your story even if combat is literally the foundation of yautja culture, Frankly its new, undone before and there would have to be nerd preds somewhere out there RnDing all the fancy gear. Background vouchs have taken you a long way though, but they come from people whos word i trust around here. +1 Take this and remember writing a story is one thing but i expect the uniqueness in character to stand you apart from other preds, Good luck friendo
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    I like your story. It has similarities to the one I'm writing too

    For what it's worth you have my plus one. Good luck on reaching the hunting grounds nerd.
    Charles & Arthur Edwinson
    Synth Percival | Artyom
    Yautja Kjhute Luar-ke

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    Based on responses I�m gonna give you a yes.

    This reply bought to you by +1/-1 is stupid crew

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    A'right your answers were good and the nerd pred playstyle looks really strange To be honest I can't see how it really fits with the role but I'm curious of how it would work.

    If you someday wanna try to play has a teacher, please teach these tards about how to be robusts, literally 420 & Boomer are able to get themselves killed by a young drone


    Edit : forgot to add my +1
    Last edited by edgardo; 06-19-2019 at 01:35 AM.

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    No idea why you capitalized random words throughout the story. Story is more about your character then actually hunting which I liked. People that are my friends have vouched for you so you aren�t brain dead stupid. +1

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