I appreciate all of the feedback, guys, thanks for weighing in. I wasn't sure how lengthy it should be, prior to applying, and I didn't want to go overboard. I was under the impression I'd be able to expand on it after submission if requested, which is why I erred on the side of shorter rather than longer. I'll definitely be sure to go more in-depth with the story, especially in regards to personality.
While I have just started playing again within the last three weeks or so (and created my forum account ~2 weeks ago) I've been playing SS13 for years and years. I took a break for a while after adminning on /tg/, and just recently got back into things. I actually played on CM when it first started! I'm definitely new in the sense that I'm new to this community, however, so I totally understand if the whitelist council is wary about that.Originally Posted by edgardo
I wasn't trying to show my Yautja in a good light, that was the point. I wanted to create a character that was a disgrace, and committed to redeeming himself. I thought it would be an interesting take. I understand that people want to see more, however, and I'll definitely take that advice into consideration.
I would like to clarify that I was not, in any way, arguing that my app was acceptable in the whitelist help section. I did not once state that I believed it was fine and should be accepted in its current state. I was eliciting my frustration with the fact that if you go through the 'Forms' section of the forum (which is the first thing I found on my search to apply for a Predator whitelist), you do not get alerted to the fact that you cannot edit your application after submission, or that you have to wait a month to reapply. I'm well-aware that despite my long history on SS13, I've only recently started playing again, so I fully understand if I'm denied on the basis that you all would like to get to know me a bit, and I can appreciate that. I don't honestly mind waiting a month either, all things considered. I just wanted my frustrations to be acknowledged instead of being condescended to and treated like I should know better, despite that information not being given to me during the application process.