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    ILikeToGammon - Synthetic Application

    Synthetic Whitelist Application
    Byond ID?
    ILikeToGammon

    Marine Name
    Terrell Laurenzi

    Other Whitelist Applications
    I have no other Whitelist Applications.

    Name of the Synth Character you wish to play
    Ethan

    Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines?
    Yes

    What are some scenarios that you can perform combat in? Give us a brief example.
    Ethan when engaged in combat, will subdue the target then turn him into authorities. If Ethan is punched and the offender runs away, Ethan will not pursue but will inform the Military Police of his actions.

    Synthetic Character Story
    "Ethan, You online?"
    "Affirmative."
    "Alright then go fix up the tank for the tank crewman."
    "Command Received, performing task."
    "Ethan you done with that task?"
    "Affirmative."
    "Well then hop in the Tank and assist the tank crewman."
    "Affirmative."
    "Yo you know how to run this Iron Lady?"
    "Affirmative."
    "Alright then can you set her up, I need to head to briefing."
    "Alright."

    What is your Synth�s quirk and personality?
    Ethan is a Humorous Synthetic, but its humor is a very dark one. Although there humor is dark, Ethan still loves to obey any task given by anyone in command. If someone engages a conversation with Ethan and asks a question on how he was made, his response would my brain came from a farmer that had been hit by a truck, etc.

    In the event that someone attacks Ethan is still attacking Ethan, he will proceed to subdue the assailant due to his self-preservation law always coming first than all other laws.

    How familiar are you with Engineering?
    I know how to:
    -Setup the reactor and repairing the reactor
    -Basic Piping
    -Basic Wiring
    -Repairing APCs
    -Hacking(mind you it includes vendors too)

    How familiar are you with Command?
    I know how to.
    -Remote launch both drop ships.
    -How to lock down the hangar, CIC, and Armory(just in case)
    -Raise Security Levels

    How familiar are you with Medical?
    I know how to.
    -Surgery.
    -Basic First Aid.
    -How to use the Sleeper.
    -How to deal with dead Marines and SSD ones.

    How familiar are you with Requisitions?
    I know how to.
    -Send Supply drops.
    -Order Crates.
    -And not being an ass when taking orders.
    -And how to make a semi-efficient FOB

    Why do you want to be a synthetic/why should we whitelist you?
    In this server, I usually don't play as the men that goes guns blazing into the LZ, I like to be the man that brings them there, or be the man that gives them the Intel to lower the Defcom. I usually enjoy a laid back role but from time to time I play as a marine for the joy of it.

    Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason? Do you have any active jobbans?
    No

    Are you currently banned from our Discord, and if so, why?
    No

    Do you have anything else you would like to include about your application?
    Nope

    Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?
    Yes

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    Check previously accepted synthetic applications and compare them to yours. -1

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    So right off the bat I can say that this app is low effort and is denied. Why? Because it fits on the entirety of my screen, with story included. I can't even call it much a story. Just a very short exchange between your synthetic and some people, that tells me absolutely nothing of your synth. Ethan says only 2 things, both of them agreeing to a task, which every synth says once in a while when they accept an assignment. People or person? talking to Ethan in this very short exchange have more personality than Ethan does.

    Your synths quirk and personality are not shown at all in that very short "story". So to have any chance at being accepted you need to write a story that shows your synth's quirk and how he communicates or preferably how he responds to situations.

    Look at accepted apps and also come to discord. We have a channel dedicated to help people with whitelists. Use it.
    Former staff, also former Synthetic senator.

    Now just a shitposter and lurker.

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    What Acute said, story is just way too short.
    Max Judge, the 45 year old slightly fat man with an unfitting action hero name.

    Fred, the worrisome synth.

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    Read the accepted apps, read my guide, and try to get more wellknown ICly. Also we already have a synth named Ethan.

    This is getting automatically denied.
    Synthetic Senator

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    Acute put it bluntly, but it is what it is. Try properly again later.

    -1
    A small part of the Synthetic Council

    with Jakkk, AcuteCircle, Pedroca2lucas and Kineem

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    This whitelist application wouldn't even be acceptable if it was to play a souto machine. Denied.

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