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    Gear Retrieval - The actual story this time

    Well, through the power of spite I've gotten about 2000 words done and through popular demand (About 3 people), I'll be releasing the story in chapters.
    Premise: A sole Predator has to pull an OJ Simpson and break into somewhere and steal stolen crap back. Meanwhile, a group of captured marines do their best to try and initiate Operation GTFO.

    So yeah, have fun with a creative writing exercise made because I get bored, yo.

    Spoiler Spoiler:
    Usually playing as Darwin 'D.J.' Jefferson, PFC (Private: Flare Carrier), or Smartgunner almost always out of ammo. Occasionally an RO who yearns for death, dealing with rampant jackassery of his coworkers.
    Against my better judgement I decided to start making Youtube videos involving Colonial Marines. Channel

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    Buffer post for future chapters in case I figure out a way to attach docs in a way so the forum requirements don't throw a hissy fit.
    Usually playing as Darwin 'D.J.' Jefferson, PFC (Private: Flare Carrier), or Smartgunner almost always out of ammo. Occasionally an RO who yearns for death, dealing with rampant jackassery of his coworkers.
    Against my better judgement I decided to start making Youtube videos involving Colonial Marines. Channel

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    You should change the letters of the transitions parts I would recommend to make them black & bigger so they can be easily noticeable.

    The story is looking good!, you should re-apply for pred again with this hehe
    Captain Alyx 'Winter' Einzbern / Youngblood Yaut'ja Lurk'tar H'chak

    I used to play has a marine known has Jeff Jenkins a Axe Maniac.

    My Life on the Corps.
    https://pastebin.com/vfSX9bQB

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    Loving the first chapter, can't wait for the next one!

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