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    Ray Leey - Yautja Application

    Yautja Whitelist Application
    Byond ID:
    Joe Loyd

    Marine Name
    Ray Leey

    Name of the Yautja Character you wish to play
    Hil-Khu

    Have you banned in the past month or are currently banned from other servers?
    Yeah EORG Reasons:Soo a the end of the round i was training at the firing Rang area

    Thena PO Just Got on The Shooting Plateform and i shoted him

    Then i realised that im Doomed ..I TOLD THE PO: Soory.Then BAM : got banned

    Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
    Yes

    Yautja Character Story
    Blood Evrywhere.The Colony was Destroyed by The Xenos Horde.A little amount of Humans Survived the Infection.....



    2 Hour Before The Outbreak Started....

    Hil -khu Was Scouting For a Worthy Prey .With his Brothers in hunting of cours.He Was Telling the others that He Spoted Something Moving thru the vines.He ignored the Sounds.and Started Hunting......



    20Minute Before the Outbreak.....

    Hil-khu.Likes to Search Caves.And Likes to Do it With his Brothers .He saw somthing realy Weird .Like Somthing big.Black.with Claws.Hes Curiosity got him .But he was a Brave Hunter Soo he Continus Searching at the cave.He Found Some Weird looking Eggs..he Just Left them.


    When The Outbreak Started....

    THEES SMART ANIMALS.SPREAD THYR HIVE TO THE COLONY .Humans Got Captured .And Killed.HE SAW EVRYTHING.He was was Studying his Oppenant Before Fighting it....Its Up to him And his brothers to hunt Or Study Thees creatures ....He prefers To Explore With the Group But Somtimes He May Hunt Aloon but its Rare..to find him Doing it

    Describe how your Yautja acts, and how you intend to play them
    Supportive...Intaractive .and Use his Honor at Evrything.Fighting.hunting.Scavenging.

    Im gonna do the best To make Sure Evryone Alive

    In your own words, describe the difference between an honor duel and a hunt
    Honore Duel: Yautja VS a Worthy Oppenant

    Hunt:Whene the Yautjas Stick toghter and go for hunting a Worthy Prey

    How do you intend on interacting with other predators during a round?
    Im gonna be Intractive.And a Source of Motivation.And Treat others

    Why do you want a predator whitelist?
    I Realy Like the atmosphir of beinga Pred .And For Roleplaying.And Cuz i like The Preds Life.And The Roleplaying about the preds.Wich makes evry round Intressting

    Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
    Yes

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    The story is difficult to read and the random capitals really put me off from reading it. However I continued reading.

    I'm going to put it here as honest as I can be. This app isn't even close to our expectations. The story is written poorly and it doesn't even flow well.

    The answers to the questions aren't that much better. Short and not detailed enough to what we want.

    Use the discord channel #whitelist-help, read other accepted and denied applications and then research a lot more before applying again.

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    Medic/Doc : Nick 'Bitter' Sweetwater
    Predator : Aenth An'th

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    REALLY hoping this is a meme app, but in the case that its not -1 this is nowhere near a passable standard and i dont even need to read it to see that. Use app help on discord and read some accepted apps and come back in a month if youre serious
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    Okay im gonna To Check Some Accepted Apps

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    -1 you can do better.

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    This is a masterpiece!

    A masterpiece of shame.

    #whitelisthelp next time

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    Oof, sorry for the slow response.

    Accepted as Elder, you will lead us all to a brighter hunting future with this amazing app
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    Bancrose is currently on a Leave of Absence. To save you further embarrassment as most of the council has voted negatively against you, I am denying this and letting Bancrose know.

    You can try again in 30 days from 7/29/19.

    Your application is very low effort, your story is short, and this is not up to the standards of a predator application.

    Please come to discord and use the whitelist application help channel in the future

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