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    Ray Leey - Synthetic Application

    Synthetic Whitelist Application
    Byond ID?
    Joe Loyd

    Marine Name
    Ray Leey

    Other Whitelist Applications
    Pred App

    Name of the Synth Character you wish to play
    Ray

    Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines?
    Yes

    What are some scenarios that you can perform combat in? Give us a brief example.
    a threat to the USCM: a Marine Started Shooting The RO. I'm Going to Flash him and Restrain him
    -a threat to me: a Marine Started Shooting me in the head I'm Flashing him and Restraining him

    -a threat from a Hostile: a Xeno Is dragging a Marine to the Darkness .im going to Rush the alien And Start Stabbing him Till I Save the Marine and Let the alien go (IF HES STRONG AND TRIED TO FLEE)

    Synthetic Character Story
    The Facility: USS Almayer
    Date: March 30-2519-12:30

    -A Speech Between an LT And a CL
    "Hey CL do you think this is a good one for the almayer?"

    "Of Course You Dumbass This is One of the Finest W-Y projects, It got The Power of 10 Marines, Can Operate Machines From Multiples Places, It Does a better Surgery than a Highly trained USCM Surgeon, the best Builder you've Ever Seen,Well, in Conclusion, its the Evry Job on this Ship but in one Perfect Piece of Metal. This One got the Abilities of an RO, an LT.Engineer.Doctor.But W-Y had One Issue with it. The Lack of Being good at Chemistry, While it has Instruction on the head its just Transfers Slowly. But Effective"


    "Welp.Got Some Of those W-Y Smokes.i want Some ...."

    "Over my Dead BodieI'm Faxing the Company if you Ask me about This Shit again!"

    "Well, When We are Receiving this Metal Shit?"

    "Tomorow. Stay Tuned!"


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    Facility: USS Almayer
    Date: 31-2519-12:00


    "Oh it is Here CO I'm Excited About Seeing this Synth"
    "Huh. Exited?. I mean W-Y Got Some Good Shit but i can't believe it till I see it


    -the CL Comes to the CIC Bringing the Synth With him

    "It is Here"

    "FINALLY"

    " Ray Say Hello to The CO "

    "Hello"

    "Oh Shit He's talking"

    "Huh. This Piece of Junk Can do Anything?"

    "Yes"

    "Well"

    "Do you have Fellings Ray?"

    "No. But I can Emulate Some!"

    "Huh, Good one. So what are you good at?"


    "Anything you could think of.Building.Surgery.Patroling.Anything!"

    "Welp. Hey CL Can you Just leave the CIC.im talking With Ray about Something Important"

    "Uh. Okay... I guess it's okay"

    -The CL leaves the CIC.

    The CO Tells Ray to Follow him to the Conference room

    "Ray...."
    +
    "Your Accepted.Welcome to the USCM Boy"

    "OH YEAH THANKS CO ...THANKS"

    "Ray We're Waking you Up When you're needed. Good Night"

    The CO Shut Ray automatically

    The CL Came to the CIC Telling the CO

    "it got Few Languages...The Whole Galaxy is in his head"

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    Facility: USS Almayer
    Date: April 15 -2519

    The CO Turn on Ray from the back of his head

    "Hello. How can I help you, Sir?"

    "Ugh, We got bad news, we've got a Distress Signal from W-Y Research colony. I'm Sending My Troops There. I know You Would Help us

    "I'm Going to do Anything you Wish me to do"

    What is your Synth�s quirk and personality?
    Ray Always Acts Friendly.He May Sacrifice himself for the rest of the Crew. He likes to Explore More things and Communicate with more than One Language Over the Whole Galaxy

    Overall He's a Synth Wich means no Felling but he Can Emulate
    and I guess Helping Without Talking is a Good Choice


    Overall You Will find him Useful.he Will give Advises Evry Single Time You Meet Him

    How familiar are you with Engineering?
    Good at it

    How familiar are you with Command?
    Meduim

    How familiar are you with Medical?
    Good at Evrything Unless Chemistry

    How familiar are you with Requisitions?
    Good at it

    Why do you want to be a synthetic/why should we whitelist you?
    I Like Playing ShipSide Roles and i like the Roleplaying Opportunties the Role Gives you.And of Couurse .Cuz the CL Slot get Stolen From me Evrytime

    Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason? Do you have any active jobbans?
    EORG-No Job Ban

    Are you currently banned from our Discord, and if so, why?
    no

    Do you have anything else you would like to include about your application?
    I Like Roleplaying Roles Like CL, Researcher, Synth And Cuz the Slots get Stolen ALWAYS .i would like to Play as a synth

    Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?
    Yes

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    "Disclamer" the "OH YES THANKS CO..THANKS"Thats The LT not The Synth

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    No offense, but this application will be not accepted. I may have not the right to vote for this whitelist but this is a big -1 from me and for sure to them.

    Use discord next time. Sorry and good luck.

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    Yeah Thanks for the Feedback.Now Tell me what this app needs to be accepted?

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ray Leey View Post
    Yeah Thanks for the Feedback.Now Tell me what this app needs to be accepted?
    Go look at accepted applications. They will tell you.
    Charles & Arthur Edwinson
    Synth Percival | Artyom
    Yautja Kjhute Luar-ke

    Record:
    Spoiler Spoiler:



    Discord: forest2001#2001

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    Hi! I'll tell you how you could make a better Synth app in about 3 months!

    - Make yourself much more known in SUPPORT roles. I've honestly never seen you play Medic/Engineer/Req, and saying, and I quote you, "Meduim" experience in Command won't help us get a good idea of your skills! Plus, try to expand those categories and tell us exactly what you know. Look at other approved apps!

    - Regarding the "Combat Scenarios" part; It is frowned upon to go chase an alien in the dark and go stab it, even if its' dragging a marine. The good thing to do is to get some marine support; you're putting yourself in too much danger going off alone! Most likely the alien is NOT alone.

    - The story is, frankly, boring and doesn't really show your quirk. Regarding the quirk, it's okay but a bit generic to be a simply-friendly helpful Synthetic. I do have an overly-friendly Synth and I find it frankly boring! Try finding something more interesting!

    - I don't have English as a first language either and perhaps I shouldn't comment on this but you should improve your grammar. The Synth role is a HRP role and you're expected to have good grammar. Please do put some effort in improving your English grammar!

    - Saying that you want to play Synth because the CL role is stolen from you isn't a valid reason to play Synth. You're an expensive machine designed to aid the USCM in its' duties and preventing all kinds of harm to the USS Almayer and the brave men and women of the Falling Falcons, not a replacement for the CL role! You should RP as a Synth but, more often than not, you will not be used for RP.

    This might be a -1 from me, sadly, but I am sure you'll improve your app in the future! Good luck!
    Claire O'Reilly, the vitriolic Corporate Liaison!
    Cassie, the helpful Synthetic!
    Kre'Zuhl, the self-declared greatest worshipper of Thardha!

    HRP Main to the Bone

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    Thank you Anderut for the instructional post.

    Follow my guide, read the accepted apps, and take some English classes.

    -1.
    Synthetic Senator

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    Thanks Buddy.im Working on making Better Apps in the Future


    -Always Playing Supportive Roles: MT-CT-

    Doctor Somtimes
    Last edited by Ray Leey; 08-20-2019 at 10:22 AM.

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    Your capitalization is bananas and not even consistent sentence to sentence. Are you doing that for emphasis??

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    10 out of fucking 10

    +1 mate

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