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Thread: Ray Leey - Synthetic Application

  1. #11
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    I am gonna say no. The story just doesn't cut it. It's very hard to read and I have no idea who's talking. You capitalizing every word, whether bypreference or whatever, is also not an acceptable way to write a story. Anderut said everything there's need to say. Make sure someone reads over your next story.

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    Yeah mate, as said above, there's nothing else to be said here. Try reading our accepted apps.

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    I think you know why, so sadly a -1. Hang in there and good luck next time.
    A small part of the Synthetic Council

    with Jakkk, AcuteCircle, Pedroca2lucas and Kineem

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    This has been denied, Please go to the Whitelist Apps or Accepted Synth Apps and see what you can improve on.

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