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    Predator Whitelist Application

    Predator Whitelist Application
    Byond ID:
    Akamurun

    Marine Name
    Alex 'Clover' Jordan

    Name of the Yautja Character you wish to play
    Kirdan Ka'uran

    Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
    Yes

    Yautja Character Story
    Kirdan was born on one of the jag�d�ja and all his childhood was trained in the art of hunting. When Kauran grew up, he had to undergo an initiation ceremony and get kinde amedhah, with which he did an excellent job, slaughtered the xenomorph with a spear and brought his head as a trophy. After the Predator showed itself, he often went hunting with his relatives, collecting trophies and killing various creatures, especially the people with whom he would fight most often, and soon collecting a collection of heads, he went to the �bloody� class, that he was given a plasma gun. For several years, Kirdan flew with his brothers in different systems, hunted, collected trophies, performed the will of the elders following the code of honor and for all merits, received the title of "warrior", in which he arrived on the planet in order to once again collect the trophies of the Marines and Xenomorphs .

    How do you intend to play your predator?
    I'm going to devote myself to roleplay. I will tune the translator and eavesdrop on the marines, waiting for them to lose the heaps of their soldiers, and from this heap of survivors look for a worthy opponent. But since the soldiers will not attack immediately, they will have to entertain xenomorphs. In order for strangers to have strong units, I will try to get the surviving and stray marines into their hive, using traps and flashing in front of them, and in the end, when the hive gains strength, the gathering of heads of strong opponents will begin.

    Why should we whitelist you?
    Because I know LORE Predators well and this is one of my favorite races. I used to play a lot on different servers of the space station, but I liked the marinas most of all, where, despite all the advantages, there is one big minus - a canon that almost died because of Aliens, who behave like meat and marines running alone on the hive and now, having received the role of the Predator, I will try to fix it with all my might, trying to bring back common sense and cause not only role-playing emotions among the players, but make them really feel the whole atmosphere of the game.

    Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason?
    I was recently given a jobbian for a specialist, but they immediately took me down for a fight with a tankman.

    Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
    Nowhere not banned, like.

    Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
    Yes

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    Gonna be real with you bud.

    This is your first forum post
    I�ve never seen you before
    Your story is pretty underwhelming and generic.

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    Short and bad story, no idea who you are. Overall a bad application.

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    For this whitelist my man it's one of the toughest. I'd suggest getting yourself known well by playing marine a reasonable amount; show people that you can roleplay. Also as much as I hate to say it applying for Yautja is like writing a story for an English teacher. It shows us that you can put in the effort required for us to trust you, and tells us about your predator's background and how you're going to play.

    I'd suggest going into our Discord and asking in the whitelist-help channel for help on your story or application in general.

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    Soldier indicated the problems with your app. Your name isn't recognized enough yet, this is your first post in the forums and you have not applied the effort we look for in a background.

    I wish you good luck in future applications. -1
    Man'sur, Cetanu's Al'nagara| Pedro 'Nescau' Heering

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThesoldierLLJK View Post
    Gonna be real with you bud.

    This is your first forum post
    I�ve never seen you before
    Your story is pretty underwhelming and generic.

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    Soldier summed up what I was thinking very nicely. Coming from experience, this is not the way to getting the whitelist my man. Build up a reputation for not being a shitter in the community, maybe try for another whitelist before going for this one. But before making any applications, I suggest looking at others accepted applications to see what we look for in an app, as well as denied ones so you don't fall for the same mistakes. Ask in Whitelist-help on the discord, or get a friend to peer review your application before posting. Heck, I, or any of the dudes that commented on this would probably be happy to help if you asked nicely or snuck me a cookie. But at the moment, this is gonna be a


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    Never seen you around, extremely short and low-effort application. -1

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    Never seen you before and almost zero effort put into your story. I'm going to -1 this. If this is denied I recommend seeing the whitelist help channel on discord when your next able to apply.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Frans_Feiffer View Post
    Soldier summed up what I was thinking very nicely. Coming from experience, this is not the way to getting the whitelist my man. Build up a reputation for not being a shitter in the community, maybe try for another whitelist before going for this one. But before making any applications, I suggest looking at others accepted applications to see what we look for in an app, as well as denied ones so you don't fall for the same mistakes. Ask in Whitelist-help on the discord, or get a friend to peer review your application before posting. Heck, I, or any of the dudes that commented on this would probably be happy to help if you asked nicely or snuck me a cookie. But at the moment, this is gonna be a


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    yeah what frans says, is true, though this still better that frans first app

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    Above comments sum it up well.
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