Destrok - Yautja Application

[Vispainius]

So, a few things I just want to point out on why I'm +1ing this application,

This covers it all quite well. Additionally, DommyGaming makes several good points. Because I tend to focus on the responses with Honor Code vs Hunts, I should also mention that DommyGaming is right. Not only is the Hunt vs Honor Duels correct, but its also a well-written and in-depth explanation of what it means and entails that covers the scope of it all without falling to the subtleties of nuance. Above and beyond. Between that, the story, and the other factors mentioned as well as seeing you frequently in Whitelist-Help with a serious attitude and good intent consistently to learn and check up check your understanding of the Code, I'm sure you'll be fine.

All in all this is an easy...

+1

[Destrok]

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Hey! I'm writing from my phone so excuse the poor formatting. I appreciate your feedback, I made sure that the hunt/duel answer was the most fleshed out since I thought that'd be the easiest way to show my understanding of the concepts. I'm glad it worked out and I won't let you down.

[Vispainius]

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No worries. The application is good and the hunt and duel bit exemplifies the nuances well. Top that off with seeing you showing understanding of nuance elsewhere.... it�s a above average app.

[Lumdor]

You showed you put effort into your application. Read it before this final version, and it seems you talking a lot in the whitelist-app channel helped you. Just don't be dumb when/if you finally get predator.

[Destrok]

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Thank you. I'll try my best.

[Banned User ID63]

For reference, I will be speaking for Simon and myself as we were in a council meeting during the time of writing of this review, and he agreed wholeheartedly with me --

The story was good, any problems I have with it are minor enough not to be worth mentioning

Your answers are good, and again -- nothing to complain about it.

Quirk, fine.

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[Destrok]

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I appreciate it, won't let either of you down. If it doesn't bother you I'd still like to know any problems at all with my story, since it was my first I'd like to improve if I ever make anything like it again. You can DM or PM me, it's okay if you don't want to though, or don't have time for it.

[ThesoldierLLJK]

Ok overall support, I've forwarded this to emerald

[Emerald Blood]

Welcome to the hunt.