Yes, I didn't do too much with the dossier section, It was difficult for me to create a background that's lore friendly, original, and something I can actually be proud of (something that isn't cringe when I think about this in the future). I literally had like writers block for an hour thinking about what to write. So I looked up the most realistic road of joining the real United States Marine Corps as an Officer at a young age, added to that.
Also thank you for taking the time to read my replies, I do wish for constructive criticism on what you think should have been improved on my Application besides the last part about character. I also realize some of my answers could vague because I am not the best at communicating my thoughts (people say I talk like Kanye sometimes).