Though the rest of your app is well written and thought out (with a few grammatical hiccups here and there), your BE response is lacking. It fails to differentiate a BE and a standard execution, as per ML SOP. You are also not specific enough on your approach to dealing with insubordination since you give a one-size-fits-all approach to every department.
I'll ask you a couple of questions before I give my verdict:
- How exactly does a Battlefield Execution differ from a standard execution, and when should each be utilized?
- How would you deal with direct, vocal insubordination from Requisitions and the Military Police?