Okay, however the point still stands that your grammar severely hinders the app. Just watched your XO round on LV, and it was okay, but you left early sadly. I still feel the communication needs to improve immensely, and there are some functions you need to be more acquainted with in CIC, but you did decentish. However, more CIC experience is definitely needed, and you need to put more effort into the next application.
Like I said, please reach out to the discord channel for whitelist help. The -1 still stands for me