First thing I would like to say is that thank you for the feedback. Either good or bad it helps me understand what the issues may be and what good things I have already been doing. In this case i do understand that CO is a role that is very crucial to the game and it is very important someone competent to pick this role that is why the white list exists.
I have made my application with passion and enjoyment i do not like writing essays for example but this application was actually fun for me to write up because it was me, what I thought and what I felt about certain issues. I do understand and acknowledge my grammar is not the best but i am very fluent in english it was my mistake not to check my application more times I have simply thought it was good.
A Commanding Officer definitely should have good grammar and be able to communicate himself in the game even although i believe i am good at this i have failed to show it on my application which is why it is for.
I would also confirm that i have 1 (-1) in my application from a member of this community and he is 100% right. I have made mistakes when i first began but i believe i have understood and acknowledged the problem. Which will not happen again for example sending Mps to the field. I have read the rules many times to avoid certain situations.
I would like to say that i have been playing XO since i made an application when i was online in the game and have counted many hours i believe more than 20 this week alone and have learned many aspects of commanding and how certain problems occur and how to solve them. I am a progressive person i like to improve which i will as i get more feedback.
If i do get to become CO one day i will do my best to keep the virtues of the post intact and uphold USCM standards at all times. I say this because i wish to become a CO but at the same time i want to be a part of something bigger which in this case commanding a group of people does not matter how many, and provide the best experience possible to them during an operation both strategically and with my personality and role play capabilities.
Thank you so much for the feed back i will do my best to improve as i do admit i am not perfect