Vortex is someone I trust and a good player, but your app does not meet the desired expectations of a suitable one.
It is a shame that this is your case, so I will remain neutral but acknowledge that several grammatical errors have been made, your backstory is a bit confusing and that the way you intend to play is partially generic
I will wait for the feedback from other whitelisted before voting. I wish you good luck until then.
Man'sur, Cetanu's Al'nagara| Pedro 'Nescau' Heering
There is honestly no need as said before I am withdrawing this application
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Well, you've already heard it all already but its a subpar application.
I do believe you have the capability as a player but I'd like to see the application done a bit better. Particularly the story. Grammar should be easy to fix next time.
Since I know you are a trustworthy player with the capability, albeit you weren't able to show it in this application. I'm going to remain at a respectful neutral position.
With the way its leaning, better luck next time champ.
I'm sorry Vortex, but this reads like a paper submitted by a 5th grader who rushed to get it in on time without having thought any of it through.
Look, you're a great guy with good noggin on yah. Sit down for a bit and plan it out and go over it a couple of times before you submit it again.
Before you re-apply, I'd suggest having the current Yautja council review your application before submitting it.
I'm not going to criticize this app, only that when you write it next time, send it to me before you post it.
Withdrawn as of Jan 12th, 2019
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