This is gonna be a -1 from me.
Your quirk inherently negatively affects the morale of marines by putting them down, which in turn makes your synthetic a liability to the marines. Also, synthetics are expected to have near-perfect grammar, and your grammar isn't up to our standards.
Keep learning English, read accepted apps, read my guide, and try to think of a better quirk. Don't feel the need to be original; due to the nature of the whitelist system, there will be repeats in quirks, just make sure you own it as yours.