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    Synthetic Council Member Jakkkk's Avatar
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    Only one problem with your story, you say "forcing" a smile, while synths don't really "force" anything. They lack the ability to be reluctant in a sense, so a synthetic wouldn't "force" an emotion, they're just acting like it,

    How can we trust you to play a synthetic on a regular basis if it took you 7+ days to write something that shows you understand how synths work?
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    Whitelisted Synthetic Unknownity's Avatar
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    How can we trust you to play a synthetic on a regular basis if it took you 7+ days to write something that shows you understand how synths work?
    I have known Synth behavior since I made the application and the issue was always been being unable to properly describe and/or express things which shows that I needed to make three stories to give you a clear view of someone's character. I can guarantee you that I know how Synthetics act as they do, I will just have a hard time explaining you with a story or a set script.
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    I am willing to give you a try based on how much effort you put into this and clearly learned along the way, your third story finally captures Kyra in how you described. You gotta put in effort to roleplay her as you wrote here. Also, another thing, make sure when you play as synthetic to proof-read your sentences as you write them. Other people on synth council were not a fan of your English; run on sentences and lack of proper grammar. Make sure you're understandable.

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