Charles & Arthur Edwinson
Synth Percival | Artyom
Yautja Kjhute Luar-ke
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I'm not going to lie, having a group that both the USCM and W-Y are likely not aware in wich every member can wipe the floor with a deathsquad member, wich is supposed to be a nearly unstoppable force of destruction, certainly feels Mary sue'ish. Unless they made a fantastic magnus opus tier breakthrough in genetic manipulation (wich would feel kind of off by itself since they'd need to have more advanced tech then W-Y) they won't top off a huge company who has the power to take down entire governments and pretty much rules humanity.
I honestly feel like more simple concepts such as the CLF should be added. They had been estabilished in the lore page, but their entire reputation was built through numerous events related to terrorist attacks and such, wich made them unique. Unless 917 has a pre-determined objective, i don't think they'll be as likeable as say, the futuristic, dystopian USSR, or a terrorist group who has been in war with the USCM for years.
Last edited by Jeether; 04-14-2020 at 01:56 PM.
make them some kind of pseduo philanthropic group dedicated to taking corrupt governments and companies like WY to task, maybe give them the directive of finding and capturing unethical/evil liasons, COs, and the like, while also having wy assets try and thwart them somehow, like a paladin that fights their way inside a highly secured pyramid scheme office
I'm still interested in developing the background and details of 917, but until further notice I will be discontinuing their use in events.
Charles & Arthur Edwinson
Synth Percival | Artyom
Yautja Kjhute Luar-ke
Record:
Spoiler:
Discord: forest2001#2001