Play more command role. I am not going to support your application for now. -1
Play more command role. I am not going to support your application for now. -1
Community Mentor
11-14-2019
Most of what needs to be said has been said, yeah. Your app's incredibly hard to read, badly formatted, and has wild grammar that overall has to make me squint to read it properly. Use spaces after periods, please.
-1.
App just seems really low effort and all over the place, and it's definitely something that, so far, paints the picture of me not having to want you as the commander of the ship. Not yet, at least.
Consider looking at our feedback and see what you can improve.
Major General / Colonel Samantha 'Sammy' Maverick
Colonel Chris 'Topher' Lawson
Synthetic Tara
CO Senator (as of 3-19-21)
̶D̶e̶v̶e̶l̶o̶p̶e̶r̶ Maintainer (as of of 3-23-21)
I'm just someone trying her hardest to not get everyone horribly killed.
im an artist too! see my works at my art dump below
//showthrea...aut-s-Art-Dump
There's no reason for me to leave anything but a -1 here
Everyone has given their piece here and all of them are valid and useful criticisms.
I do get a scent that this was a very quick application thrown together in like half an hour, which is not a good way to present yourselves to the Council or your fellow peers.
The EORG ban is also slightly concerning to me. I suggest keeping your record clean for the next few months until you put in an app again.
-1 for me. Come back again with a little more thought and effort towards the role you're trying to get.
Good luck.
Captain Chirs Mooris - CO Whitelist
Chris - Synth Whitelist
"CM without RP is CM without a soul"
My join date is a lie, I've been around since 2017
Trial Moderator: 02AUG2020 - 08SEP2020
Moderator: 08SEP2020 - 05NOV2020
I'll put the same amount of effort into describing my vote below as you did in your app:
No.
-1
Sorry mate, your app shows a clear lack of effort and I haven't seen you play command at all. Apply again in a month after grinding XO and writing a new original and creative app and I'm sure you will get this WL.
GL
-1
Captain Morgan Young
Charlie Squad Medic main and the worst nade Thrower you Will ever see.
You have good activity and from what I've seen know what's expected of a CO, but this just isn't a good app. There's some good feedback in this thread so I'd suggest taking the time to really dig into your answers and then asking whitelist-app-help on the Discord to read over your grammar and such.
-1 from me for now, but I encourage you to try again in a month.
Audrey Aulin, found (drinking tea) in various roles
Evelyn, the ever-helpful synth
Member of the CO Council. Feel free to PM me here or on the Discord @Retrokinesis#8332 with any CO-related matters.
Former Moderator, Mapper, Official Space Carp Developer, and Lead Burrower Apologist.
As Retro mentioned, there's some decent feedback here for you to look through and work on. You're on the right track, but at current, you're not quite there.
Denied, you are free to reapply in a month.
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