I am going to be extending the deadline for the final review of this application until 05-25-20 as I would like to see more input from the community, and, I would like you to answer some questions of mine.
1) Is English your first language? While I will never bar someone from gaining the WL if their mother tongue isn't english, certain parts of your application seems as if it were filtered through google translate. I am asking this as you will be expected to interact with the community in meaningful RP while in-game.
2) I'm a bit confused by some of your characters back story. Was he from an entire clan of Trade workers? Because clans made up entirely of the trade caste do not exist. Members of the trade caste do not hold any social rank within the clans, which means they cannot lead clans, though they are honored in a myriad of ways for their work.
3) Explain to me what it was that made Elder A'Ko ho adopt your character as not a lot of detail is given.