Apologies about getting to your app late, but I've been busy IRL.
Fortelian, back on 05-05-20 I told you this.
https://gyazo.com/b7104e09614e2e3ed22bb69087e6a7a8
"You must provide a general account of the clan in your own words. So be creative."
This is not unique. This is the original Bo'ytill story that has been modified to look slightly different.
Had I gotten to this sooner I would have denied this however, because I am late getting to your app I am going to give you a fair chance.
Write out another story about your clan. You can reference the original but the story must be unique from the original and in your own words. The story must fit the requirements set out in the application requirements, and fit within the established clan and societal lore. It must also not deviate from the existing religious lore.
Your character story is fine, so there is no need to re-write that.
The deadline for your submission is 06-04-20.
I am happy to see a positive reception to your app though from the community.