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    Mh22nm - Yautja Application

    Yautja Whitelist Application
    Byond ID:
    Mh22mm

    Discord ID
    mh22mm

    Marine Name
    Rayner Chapman

    Name of the Yautja Character you wish to play
    Dhi'ki-de Paya (Death Warrior)

    Have you read the honor code and do you understand that if you breach the honor code you may be subject to disciplinary action and have your whitelist revoked for a set amount of time?
    Yes i have rode the code of honor both from CM-13 and avp wiki at least twice

    Name and history of your Yautja’s clan:
    Paya-Tribi (Warrior Tribe) is a known tribe in the yautja homeworld and follow the COH to it's core, they prefer to hunt with melee weapons and are cruel when killing their prey, their young blood's need to do their initiation alone to prove they're worthy of their clan name, they raise the young bloods with total discipline and consider those who fail their standards a full disgrace to their clan and exile them.

    Yautja Character Story
    Dhi'ki-de Paya Was born on Yautja Prime and was raised under the rules of the Paya-Tribi, he mastered CQC combat and his cloak system in his early days, he exterminated and hunted about thirty r'ka (xenomorphs) in his initiation.

    He kills the prey slowly and with cruelty, one of his strategies is to use some of his prey to atract other preys and he avoid being detected by his preys until the 1st and most brutal blow, he prefers to kill human preys as they suffer more than the lizzards, he also avoid to be seen by his preys.

    Dhi'ki-de Paya weapon of choice is the wristblades, he prefers to first tear the prey limbs and then proceed to finish them and take their heads as the trophy.


    Dhi'ki-de Paya has recently started to like ranged weapons, altought he is still mastering them.

    Do you understand that any behavior that is unbecoming of a member of the community may result in you having your whitelist revoked? Such things include, but are not limited to: Racism, toxicity, excessive or malicious trolling, abuse of staff or etc.
    yes

    Do you understand that you may face having your whitelist revoked, or other disciplinary action undertaken, should you be banned or warned on the CM discord?
    Yes

    Do you understand that you cannot advertise your application on any platform for votes. Do you also understand you may not edit this application 1 hour after it has been posted?
    Yes

    Do you understand that community members may report your in-game actions on the forums, and that you may be asked to defend your actions.
    Yes

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    I'm going to put it here as honest as I can be. This app isn't even close to our expectations. The history and story is written poorly and it doesn't even flow well. Short and not detailed enough to what we want.
    Your application is very low effort, your story and history is short, and this is not up to the standards of a predator application. Use the discord channel #whitelist-help, read other accepted and denied applications and then research a lot more before applying again.

    -1
    Last edited by Enyonggg; 06-04-2020 at 03:37 PM.

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    I'm afraid that I will have to give a -1. You have no activity on the forums, barely any activity on the Discord since December, and you have not met the hours in-game required to be eligible to apply. In terms of the application proper, I would only be repeating what Enyonggg has already said. Please use the Whitelist-app-help channel on the Discord, play the game more, and participate within the community more.
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    Zero effort zero anything. Just no.

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    Thanks for the reply, will become more active in both and will proceed to make a way better application, sorry for making everyone read this crap, it was my first try.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Mh22nm View Post
    Thanks for the reply, will become more active in both and will proceed to make a way better application, sorry for making everyone read this crap, it was my first try.
    Nothing wrong with learning bud. Can't learn without mistakes
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    God... Alright, first, name's kinda cheesy mate. Your tribe,it's standard, its bland, its plain.

    He mastered CQC and Cloak? Thats kinda mainstream for every yautja, it's like, six sentences the story.. Man.. I'm sorry but it's a big -1
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    The council have discussed this and have come to the following conclusions:

    1. You do not meet the activity requirements for the Yautja whitelist.
    2. Your application is not up to the standards we require, please go to whitelist-app-help if you require assistance in making a story.
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