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    Hey, I wanted to comment on here since I have seen you as XO enough to share what I thought. I think most people will agree that you have a lot of experience as XO and understand the meta and know how to run an OP. I'd say you fall more on the gamer side of the CO approach to a round with how you run an OP. To be fair having time to RP as XO can be tough but I have seen you show enough for me to be happy (medium role play seems to be the standard for COs currently). You have in the past spiced up a brief with a little RP about what is going on and not just giving orders to dismiss. You also did a good job of playing various roles that help you understand the ship from multiple perspectives (CMO, MP). You also seem to be committed to the server from your multiple unsuccessful whitelist applications that has not discouraged you.

    As for what I think you could improve on or I didn’t think was good. I have seen you make some LRP announcements typically with netspeak. I think you need to hold yourself to a higher standard in roleplay and be consistent with it. I honestly think you should take a step back and stop grinding yourself to death on XO. I really don’t think anyone is going to call you out for not playing enough XO. Although my vote will be based purely on what I've personally seen from you I do know that your biggest issue is your behavior from what others have said about your application.

    I do have a question for you if you choose to answer it as I think it may help people understand your perspective. Regardless if you agree or disagree with the notes you have received for behavior, what do you believe is the reason you have taken things too far in the past (anger/frustration, genuine misunderstanding of the rules/ limits, your characters personality, fatigue or something else)? The question is meant to allow the applicant to address what I feel is an important discussion on this application, by no means do I feel they need to answer this question.



    As I said my vote is purely based on my personal experience with the player and does not include rounds that I did not participate in. +1

    Tyrus ''Shoeless'' Jackson

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    Quote Originally Posted by LynuahSororitas View Post
    I recognize my mistakes and I will capitalize on them, as a XO, I usually hold a standard roleplay level besides that one case and I have people to vouch for me in the RP part. Will stand clean from now on and take it more serious, besides these incidents in the last week, I think I am above average to hold the role of Commanding Officer.

    Proceeding to your questions:
    1. Two MPs kidnap the CMP by drugging him to sleep, then kidnapping them to the execution chair as a prank. They're the only MPs on the ship besides the CMP. What is your course of action?
    If CIC is full and well manned, I would either deputize one of my SOs or even the XO for limited time to replace the MPs and assist the CMP, and both MPs would be arrested for Illegal Confinement and Neglect of duty.

    2. It's been a 2 hour round going back and fourth what is your idea of breaking the stale mate?
    If the round is in a stalemate, which is quite frequent sometimes, when none of the sides steamroll, I usually tend to play around DEFCON to break it through Spec Kits, OB warheads to incentivate a push or even the nuke as a last resort. I inform the Platoon about terminals that need to be made, weak enemy positions and everything they may need to end the operation, even with low numbers. As a CO, I would try to head down to lead our forces into a offensive if possible, a thing I cant do as XO alone.

    3. You deploy and the XO gets assassinated by a bunch of unga delta's what are you going to do?
    I would return to the Almayer immediately as the deck cant be left without a proper CO or XO, have him healed and the criminals arrested in case of a improper action of the Delta marines, returning to the field after everything is nominal. Althought, if the Delta marines killed the XO because he was doing a mutiny, I would have the XO healed back and arrested for Sedition or set up a proper execution according to the law, the marines would receive a pardon as they acted to protect the Almayer and the operation against a mutiny, after that I would stay in the Almayer to command the operation from the deck.

    4. A bunch of deltas and an IO the Alamo at 12:18 without asking you and without the PO. What will you do?
    If the IO asked for a earlier scout mission with some escort before the proper deployment, and I authorized, I would have no problem with it. But if the IO insisted on launching the dropship with no proper PO onboard against orders given to him, I would ask him to standown once, if denied, I would get the MPs to remove him from the Alamo and make a proper arrest. About the Deltas onboard, it is a common thing and somekind of culture for some marines to skip briefing and I dont see no problem with it, forcing them out would also cause problems, they could stay there as long as the Alamo stayed shipside and without no unauthorized departures before briefing, if the SL wasnt included of course, as I see that every SL is essential in a briefing.

    Standard Trijent Dam briefing:
    ''I am Captain Elzbieta Brygida, first in command in this dettachment of the 4th Brigade, 2nd Battalion ''Falling Falcons'', your last Captain is K.I.A and the last Platoon conscripts were replaced by you, USS Almayer was severely damaged and cut down on supplies since last operation, so let's make it worthy. Me and the current Executive Officer, Connor Anderson, will proceed with briefing.

    Remember that we arent here only to enforce peace but also to estabilish a foothold in this wild planet for the sake of the colonists that build it with their sweat, and of course, the hegemony of the United Americas and our fleet. This vessel and operation will request the best out of you, let's proceed with briefing.

    We are operating with both dropships for the first deployment to distract any enemies from our main foothold and a faster deployment.

    Alpha, Charlie and Delta will take LZ1 and scout West, repairing the Engine Room in the way, that way powering up the colony and giving us more DEFCON assets, after that, moving to clean the stormlocks, the Eastern Laboratories and if everything is empty, check the Hospital to the South.

    Bravo will depart on Normandy, our main dropship and set up our FOB there, where all squads shall retreat if necessary, Alamo will take CAS duty after the first deployment.

    That is it Squad Leaders, dismissed.''

    This would be a example of a organized briefing in CIC's Conference Room with only the SLs.

    Standard Debriefing after planetary evacuation:
    ''We did our best today and sacrifices were made, not in vain but it turned down the operation didnt ended well by any means, you inflicted heavy casualties in their forces and crippled a good part of their numbers but it wasnt enough for our Platoon to achieve victory today, we suffered enough for one day, it is time to standown.

    I sent a distress signal to the nearest flagship in the sector, according to my sensors, USS Alabama, it is a remote system and it may take time for them to come to us, with a long ETA like that, we are going back into our standard Cyro procedures until the reinforcements come and we can retake the planet to our hands for once.''

    Debriefing example before xeno hijack.
    I just realized who you are a little too late memory is going out to college but regardless fantastic answers i remember you being a fantastic XO under me and when i spectated you as SEA the only problem i had was when you cryo half way in each operation when i was CO but i won those rounds with ease and im sure you had your reasons to Cryo your RP could do with improvements in some aspects but over all you have my +1 sorry for not remembering you right away lol
    Retired CSM Jonathon 'Ghost' Granger


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    Thanks for the constructive feedback, I think some of the slips I made would fall under frustration/fatigue as sometimes I would roll XO even with it on Medium while not in the mood to play the roll.

    I am watching myself more since I got the complaints and as Klaus said, mistakes are made when you are a constant in certain position, people will realize them easier, which is not a bad thing at all, I always strive to fix myself everytime and will continue doing so, as seen from the last application. One thing that I dont do or plan to do is giving up.
    Captain Elzbieta Brygida




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    No worries man, always a pleasure to have you commanding or being commanded by me, hope to see you around.
    Captain Elzbieta Brygida




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    yeah college has been killing me lately and hope to be back officially soon either way Goodluck and bring glory to the USCMC!
    Retired CSM Jonathon 'Ghost' Granger


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    Quote Originally Posted by Swagbag View Post
    IE notes, are one of the biggest redflags as noted by 50rem. This being that IE shows that the player has a temper. A temper is never a good thing to have as a whitelisted player, especially when it comes to CO having a tool to remove players out of the round permanently. That being said, you are a fine XO IC, but there is a huge list of issues I've seen ICly mainly ranging from simply just being a shitter.



    And this after being arrested, last round where you shot Connor Anderson for hitting you with a wooden baseball bat once, with a full SG burst, before launch, bringing him down to orange health.



    Lastly, there is this (denied) report.
    //showthrea...ritas-2-3-4-12

    I won't explain much on this, but it boils down to choosing a popular character's last name which is a non generated name and acting like a shitter ICly and reportedly throwing bad nades, flaming a SL and spec, and just doing other LRP stuff in general.

    -1
    I'm going to support Rigga. -1 and it seems you are not ready yet.

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    The thing that worries me is that you say that a lot of your anger issues come from fatigue or playing XO when you dont really want to yet I dont really see that. I've interacted with you several times over a long period of time and most of the time you seem annoyed or rather hostile to those around you. A recent example would be a prison round a few days ago where you were a medic. There was another medic that was continuously overdosing patients. Not massive overdoses, iirc just minor tram and bicardine, but your response to this happening was pointing at all of the medics around you and denouncing them as being bald. You were extremely zealous to find whomever did that and therefore accused all of us without any real proof or investigation. My fear is that if you did have the whitelist in that situation you would've just gone and BE'd medics because one of them was bad.

    You are a good XO, albeit annoying for always going SD but if that's your gimmick then power to you, but the way you act in roles that aren't XO give me the feeling that you struggle to take the blame for wrongdoings and are very eager to find a scapegoat when things go wrong. I dont think that's the type of person that should have the ability to execute marines on the spot. Eventhough my vote probably doesnt count I dont support your app -1.

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    I was neutral entering this thread, however after seeing the comments from Swagbag, I must lean towards a - 1.

    We all slip up from time to time but this seems to be somewhat common with the low roleplay behaviour and some anger issues that I think will cause some issues for yourself in the longrun.

    I advise you take some time to readjust things and show people that you can be an example to the Marines under you.

    Once again, - 1 for the time being.
    <::The Provost is always watching.::>

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    When I see Elzbieta Brygida as XO, I know that we're gonna deploy at a reasonable time, requisitions will do their job sending down mats and ammo, orders will be clear and said multiple times so everyone knows what their orders are.

    The grammar on your story is a bit iffy but I'm gonna assume that English is your second language and I can still tell that you put effort into it. I can't really speak on the answers to the questions since I haven't read many CO WL applications and I haven't played a command role yet but you're a pretty competent XO and I think you're ready for XO. The only thing I want to comment on is your character's gimmick, or lack there of? I can't tell if Brygida's thing is saying just what needs to be said; there isn't much that sets her apart from other XOs other than being competent. It's up to you if you want to do anything about it or not though.

    Good luck on getting CO,
    Bob Vancleave

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    You're a frequent XO and although it lets me know that you're motivated enough to get the WL by spending many rounds being the shadow of the current round CO, it also hints me that you've been burnt out a lot after your grinding (hinted by your easily irratable actitude)

    I will judge you fairly from what I've experienced and in all fairness you're a decent XO, the kicker is that many are let down by your actitude and by what swagbag has showcased you're making me feel you'll shove anyone down the BE path for the slightest mistake they commit which can tell me a lot for someone who is in charge of a bunch of marines with possible mental discapacities

    I'll make a trust fall on this one, by trust fall I mean, that you WILL improve your behaviour during this app and you'll keep in mind the feedback from the rest of the people who posted here

    +1
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