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    GenericUsername - Yautja Application

    Yautja Whitelist Application
    Byond ID:
    BIgboyyo

    Discord ID
    What#3954

    Marine Name
    Nathon Stafford/Synthetic Benedict

    Name of the Yautja Character you wish to play
    Kahn'Ikesh

    Have you read the honor code and do you understand that if you breach the honor code you may be subject to disciplinary action and have your whitelist revoked for a set amount of time?
    100% yes

    Name and history of your Yautja’s clan:
    Name: Ikesh

    History: https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing

    Thanks to Fortelian for revisions

    Yautja Character Story
    https://docs.google.com/document/d/1...it?usp=sharing

    Thanks to Survivor,Forest,Novacti, and Furbnus for revisions

    Snippet:
    The following is a journal previously owned by PMC Specialist Nathon Stafford found after a mission on Ice Planet LV-755 where a team of PMCs were sent following a lack of response to multiple checkup signals. The team consisted of 10 non-specialized, 1 medic, synthetic “Washington”, specialist armed with m56 ‘Dirty’ smartgun, and Team Leader Angelo Rodriguez. Only the Synthetic was recovered, lightly wounded, and carrying the journal.

    January 18th, 2190

    “Right, the boys up at Royce sent us down here to see why the colonists have been mute for awhile and TL thought it’d be a good idea to jot down anything that happens. So far we’ve landed and the place is a goddamn ghost town, no colonists and no signs of Xeno, UPP, or CLF interference and the only thing we have to go off of is broken shit everywhere and random IDs lying around belonging to the colonies sec team, no bodies or anything though yet. Mission director just told us to hunker down in the bar since a snowstorm is coming, looks like we’re gonna be here for a few days”

    Do you understand that any behavior that is unbecoming of a member of the community may result in you having your whitelist revoked? Such things include, but are not limited to: Racism, toxicity, excessive or malicious trolling, abuse of staff or etc.
    Yep

    Do you understand that you may face having your whitelist revoked, or other disciplinary action undertaken, should you be banned or warned on the CM discord?
    Yes

    Do you understand that you cannot advertise your application on any platform for votes. Do you also understand you may not edit this application 1 hour after it has been posted?
    Yes

    Do you understand that community members may report your in-game actions on the forums, and that you may be asked to defend your actions.
    Yes

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    Right, I've got one or two gripes about the story, I like it, its interesting. But the thing is, why? Why would a PMC Team from W-Y investigating, suddenly go rogue over a TL reminding them he's the TL and in charge? Especially a medic? Even if they did have a reason to go rogue, I have no doubt the TL would've been shot dead, or fatally injured depending on the fact, the renegades would've had to set the time and place, and likely been able to cut down the TL before anyone else had a chance to turn and say "OH FUCK BAD!" The synthetic might've been able to be taken down too, since it seems, 14 - 2 = 12. After the engagement, five remained. 12 - 5 = 7 Members going rogue and attacking, all with likely very W-Y weaponry. They very likely could've been able to take down or severely wound the synthetic aswell.

    Second gripe, the armory was pried open, and from my understanding, the armory was connected to the room the PMC writing was, with the synthetic aswell. Would they not have heard (even if it was a bit away) the metal doors being forcefully pried apart?
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    Quote Originally Posted by JaioAcex View Post
    Right, I've got one or two gripes about the story, I like it, its interesting. But the thing is, why? Why would a PMC Team from W-Y investigating, suddenly go rogue over a TL reminding them he's the TL and in charge? Especially a medic? Even if they did have a reason to go rogue, I have no doubt the TL would've been shot dead, or fatally injured depending on the fact, the renegades would've had to set the time and place, and likely been able to cut down the TL before anyone else had a chance to turn and say "OH FUCK BAD!" The synthetic might've been able to be taken down too, since it seems, 14 - 2 = 12. After the engagement, five remained. 12 - 5 = 7 Members going rogue and attacking, all with likely very W-Y weaponry. They very likely could've been able to take down or severely wound the synthetic aswell.

    Second gripe, the armory was pried open, and from my understanding, the armory was connected to the room the PMC writing was, with the synthetic aswell. Would they not have heard (even if it was a bit away) the metal doors being forcefully pried apart?
    eh, I'm the not a very good writer and that's perfectly fair but I'll give a rebuttal I guess

    1. Personally in my experience of CM people tend to lose faith in their leadership pretty fast, that's probably not true IRL but I'm writing a story in CM universe so I took from my experience. Along with that, I meant to imply that some people sided with TL and ended up getting killed aswell with the "Medic and some grunts" and also synths are pretty tough when it comes to bullets and damaging humans (Telebaton does 45 damage base, humans have 200 hp with past 100 being in crit, do the math and its around a 4-5 hit kill)

    2. Yea that's fair, should've established it was a different room and far enough that he couldn't hear the prying if I had the chance to rewrite that part I'd probably change it so he was waking up to the TL getting merked and couldn't save him in time.

    Thank you the criticism man
    Nathon Stafford-Squad Leader/Captain aboard USS Almayer and Anti-Cadehug man
    Benedict-Synthetic here to tell you about our Lord and Savior Jesus H. Christ, sometimes killer of Queens
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    He'll turn my city into a glass floor if I don't +1 so please give it to him.

    Nathon is a fun guy, he'll do good with the WL.
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    I have known Nathon for a lot of time now. He's competent and a good roleplayer. No doubts on how he'll do with the whitelist. Stories are fine for me as they show to me how you intend to act and play as your character.
    Even though this doesn't matter in the future, here's a POSITIVE vote.
    I play as Viktor 'Beer' Kleiner, Matthaus and as Var'dqi Bo'ytill. I have other group of german characters that I am too lazy to put here.

    I am currently a CO Councillor. If you have any questions regarding the whitelist, feel free to DM me.
    Discord is Axyinious#3635

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    Everything is well done, out standing app and fantastic player of the community so here is your +1!
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    Okay im fighting a new pred uh. +1 good luck, bud. You got two WL and if ever you got this WL, be humble always and help everyone.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Jonathon Granger View Post
    Everything is well done, out standing app and fantastic player of the community so here is your +1!

    Quote Originally Posted by Axyinious View Post
    I have known Nathon for a lot of time now. He's competent and a good roleplayer. No doubts on how he'll do with the whitelist. Stories are fine for me as they show to me how you intend to act and play as your character.
    Even though this doesn't matter in the future, here's a POSITIVE vote.
    Goodluck with your apps guys


    Quote Originally Posted by ChengChan View Post
    Okay im fighting a new pred uh. +1 good luck, bud. You got two WL and if ever you got this WL, be humble always and help everyone.
    Ofcourse Sensei.
    Nathon Stafford-Squad Leader/Captain aboard USS Almayer and Anti-Cadehug man
    Benedict-Synthetic here to tell you about our Lord and Savior Jesus H. Christ, sometimes killer of Queens
    (Epic pfp by Manezinho)

    ^This medals pretty cool but I have others: https://pastebin.com/xiCJLuhz

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    I'll be sliding a +1. The stories are good, and the guy is a great RPer. Let him have his third toy.
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    Right, it makes some sense, but still a gripe. Overall, stories great, imo your rp could be better, with some encounters. Other than that, here ya are.+1
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