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    The Wanderer.... - Yautja Application

    Yautja Whitelist Application
    Personal InformationByond ID:
    The Wandering Knight

    Discord ID
    The Wanderer

    Marine Name
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    Character InformationName of the Yautja Character you wish to play
    Wurg-Rad'arg De'Rojok

    Name and history of your Yautja’s clan:
    Clan De'Rojok, the Coroners is Wurg-Rad'arg's natal clan.An obscure but old Yautja Clan, the De’Rojok Clan, also known as the ‘Coroners’ or ‘Record Keepers’ is mostly dedicated to S’ahul and The Literary Art. Unlike other clans, the Coroners are often seen collecting pieces of literature from other alien races, such as humans. These are more or less discarded shortly after a full read but on some rare occasions may find their place in the clan’s Library as pieces of entertainment or an analogical look at humanity’s psychological or anatomical make-up.
    The De’Rojok Clan’s warriors are known to use thrown weapons and often carry a combi-stick.
    While all Yautja Hunters take trophies, a member of the Record Keepers also carries along a journal and an incredibly sharp but durable pen. Using the back of the pen, the Yautja draws some of its own blood and uses it to write down his kill, it’s habits, any defining features, the time to kill and finally, the killing blow. This serves to remind the hunter that every kill takes blood and sweat, and to ensure the Yautja betters himself with every kill. Writing in the book is not an immediate action following a kill, but it is recommended to note the details down as soon as possible
    Writing a whole book is generally seen as a sign of great prestige and dedication, the book being quickly deposited in the clan’s library along with many others, in order to become lectures of youngbloods.

    Yautja Character Story
    Wurg-Rad'arg was born in the De'Rojok Clan.
    His family was standart predator's family.But his father died, fighting with Marines.So Wurg-Rad'arg doesnt likes humans at all, at least he doesnt likes marines.
    Today he awoken.Just an regular morning.Another day when he needs to go to altar for praying, or to planet for an little hunt....But, now an Elder is launching big hunt!Wurg-Rad'arg was ready to join hunt and wanted to test his skills.Finally!Elder launched an big hunt at an Ancient temple, where youngbloods can become blooded, after completing all rituals.Wurg-Rad'arg goes to shaman.Shaman, picks weird herbs and some blood, mixes them in bone mortar, and starts ritual.It meaned that shaman will smear him and other youngbloods with an ointment.Through ointment smells like shit, everyone is alive after this weird ritual...

    After, few youngbloods go to Starship, to land on reservation-planet.Wurg-Rad'arg with few hunters(one Elder,and few youngbloods) entered ancient temple.They didnt know how strong may be enemyes inside.But, after few minutes of clueless walking, they got ambushed by aliens.Sudenly, one crusher rushes at one youngblood, heavily damaging his legs.After that another youngblood tryes to kill crusher, but he got damaged too.Finally elder killed this alien with few plasma beams from shoulder cannon.Finally, remaining hunters reached deeps of hive.After, they got ambushed by few drones, hivelord and few runners.Drones ambushed Wurg-Rad'arg, he killed an drone by taking his head with an fast, powerful arm move, and thrown his head to another drone,stunning him.After, throwing an blade into stunned drones head.Elder killed hivelord.When runners ambushed elder killed one with his spear, one youngblood cutted runners head with claws, and third runner was punched to-death with claws.Elder asked hunters if they want to continue hunt.Everyone was agree.Finally they walked into deepths of temple till Queens room.Elder sayed that hunters can use shoulder cannons while fighting very strong enemy.An youngblood jumped on Queen and penetrated her head with spear.Queen dont died, instead picked-up him with hand and thrown away like an piece of trash.Wurg-Rad'arg rushed at Queen while shooting from plasma-cannon.Queen rushed too.He dodged Queen's atacks, so Queen hitted temple walls several times.Also Wurg shooted at Queen while it was stunned when hitting wall.After that, Queen gathered all her powers and made the last rush.She pushed wall with so many force, that it got destroed, and temple started ruining.Every hunter exited the temple.But Wurg managed to grab an bleeding youngblood, before temple collapses.
    While exiting hive, they found few marines at entrance.They looked hungry, and very upset, equiped with knives and guns with bayonets.When they seen predators, they runned away.Tired predators, understanding that it wont be honor act to fight marines, leaved them.
    Finally, new blooded predators leaved planet and teleported to Clan Starship.
    After, he was sent to USS Almayer for an great hunt.Currently, nobody knows how story may turn....

    ConfirmationsHave you read the honor code and do you understand that if you breach the honor code you may be subject to disciplinary action and have your whitelist revoked for a set amount of time?
    Yes

    Do you understand that any behavior that is unbecoming of a member of the community may result in you having your whitelist revoked? Such things include, but are not limited to: Racism, toxicity, excessive or malicious trolling, abuse of staff or etc.
    Yes

    Do you understand that you may face having your whitelist revoked, or other disciplinary action undertaken, should you be banned or warned on the CM discord?
    Yes

    Do you understand that you cannot advertise your application on any platform for votes. Do you also understand you may not edit this application 1 hour after it has been posted?
    Yes

    Do you understand that community members may report your in-game actions on the forums, and that you may be asked to defend your actions.
    Yes
    Last edited by The Wanderer....; 09-13-2020 at 11:19 AM. Reason: Making story bigger, to not be so snezzzzzz

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    10/10 application, this sets the standard for future applications. * has always been one of my favorite marines to fight with.

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    If this isn't a shitpost please look at accepted applications to see how this isn't acceptable
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    I know that characters names are weird, and text isnt so good as other two players that requiested whitelist....through it is first time when i write texts asking about whitelist.But i am ready to write and change article so many times as it will be required to become better!

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    Quote Originally Posted by The Wanderer.... View Post
    I know that characters names are weird, and text isnt so good as other two players that requiested whitelist....through it is first time when i write texts asking about whitelist.But i am ready to write and change article so many times as it will be required to become better!
    Clearly you do give a shit about earning this whitelist and you've put more effort in than most would at their first attempt.

    sadly this app doesn't meet the qualifications to be accepted (read this://showthrea...cation-process)

    at this point I'd suggest just withdrawing and trying again in a month after you've gained enough of a reputation to be trusted with this whitelist
    Nathon Stafford-Sunglasses wearing Delta L42 kiter man. Sometimes a Captain.
    Benedict-Praiser of Jesus, healer of marines, killer of Queens.
    Kahn'Ikesh-Blooded Hunter and great grandson of Gor'don Ram-sey
    (pfp by Manezinho)
    medals:https://pastebin.com/xiCJLuhz
    Mapper since 12/29/2020
    Had dev role assasinated on 8/2/21


    Synth Councilor as of 2/5/21 along with Jakk, Frogzeke, Yukonsnow, and Flpls
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    Now it should be better, i changed story.

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    You edited the application 2 hours after you posted this which is an application violation. Moreover you do not meet the forum membership time requirements for the whitelist.
    You are not eligible, you can try again in 30 days.
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