User Tag List

Results 1 to 3 of 3

Thread: mortaljacket - Yautja Application

  1. #1
    Junior Member
    Join Date
    Aug 2020
    Posts
    1
    Mentioned
    0 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)

    mortaljacket - Yautja Application

    Yautja Whitelist Application
    Personal InformationByond ID:
    mortaljacket

    Discord ID
    mortaljacket

    Marine Name
    Nolan "Oreg" Danewroth

    Character InformationName of the Yautja Character you wish to play
    Bloodfang

    Name and history of your Yautja’s clan:
    Chayta was a long lived clan of honor and ferociousnes. The later was its downfall as other clans seen its rise of power as a great threat as it could tople the fragile hierarchy ot the ruling clans.
    The elders of the ruling clans decided the clan has too many hotbloded young ones to trust and so the downfall of the clan begun. Several conflicts led to the exile of the emerging clan. Now there is very litle to none information remains. Yet there is sightings reported on the hunting grounds of young ones bearing the markings of a clan long lost. They are reported to be fearles maybe reckless but well trained and organised.

    Yautja Character Story
    Bloodfang this is the name beared by one of the recently blooded warior given to him by the Elder one who led his first hunt. The name originated from a wound where he experianced first hand the power and ferociousnes ot the Hardmeat. Its lost fang will be the reminder to newer underestimate the prey. A lesson he learned the hard way almost costing him his life. Blood still boils in his weins when he remembers his foolishnes. Yet he survived and learned now its his time to teach the young ones the lesson of the hunt. Move well and fast or die.
    Now he is set out to restore the honor of his clan, claim thropies, and earn a name hor himself.
    He heard of the so called Umans, Softmeat. All he knows is they are cunning, yet he itches to claim yet another thropy for his collection. Still the ultimate prey is the hardmeat for him.
    Another hunt, another chance to regain honor and to claim a thropy. Simple yet these are what matters to him, to a Yautja.

    ConfirmationsHave you read the honor code and do you understand that if you breach the honor code you may be subject to disciplinary action and have your whitelist revoked for a set amount of time?
    Yes

    Do you understand that any behavior that is unbecoming of a member of the community may result in you having your whitelist revoked? Such things include, but are not limited to: Racism, toxicity, excessive or malicious trolling, abuse of staff or etc.
    Yes

    Do you understand that you may face having your whitelist revoked, or other disciplinary action undertaken, should you be banned or warned on the CM discord?
    Yes

    Do you understand that you cannot advertise your application on any platform for votes. Do you also understand you may not edit this application 1 hour after it has been posted?
    Yes

    Do you understand that community members may report your in-game actions on the forums, and that you may be asked to defend your actions.
    Yes

  2. #2
    Whitelisted Predator ChainsawMullet's Avatar
    Join Date
    Jun 2019
    Posts
    558
    Mentioned
    1 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    So, I'll be honest, this one ain't got a chance of making it through.

    Your name "Bloodfang" isn't an acceptable name for a Predator, Yautja (on CM) tend to have more alien-like names such as: Tarei-da Thar'n, Ryl'ky Luar-ke, Shou'Nhon, etc.

    Both your clan story and main character are much too short for what is expected from a whitelist app. The ideal length for a clan story is about 1 page on a Google Doc, and for the character story you should aim for at least 800 words (for comparison, your submitted character story has 181 words.)

    There's two things I recommend you do from here:

    1) Make sure you're in the main CM Discord (the link is at the top of the forum, the tab called "Discord"), and then head over to the #whitelist-app-help channel, there will be plenty of people willing to help you along there.

    2) Read over accepted and denied Predator apps to get a better idea of what the council is looking for.

    Story isn't everything, it's kinda important that we know who you are, so getting more known and involved in the community will be a big bump for a future app.

    After all's said and done, I've got to drop a -1 on this app.

  3. #3
    CM-SS13 Host ThesoldierLLJK's Avatar
    Join Date
    Dec 2018
    Posts
    2,771
    Mentioned
    6 Post(s)
    Tagged
    0 Thread(s)
    I’m gonna save you the trouble of getting this application shat on by the community but it’s not up to standard
    I suggest you check out out discord server and go to the application help section.

    You can try again in 30 days.
    Unhinged retiree boomer man
    Get off my lawn you kids

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •