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    Dev Team BIgboyyo's Avatar
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    You have great potential but the application itself is lackluster at best, please take a look at other accepted applications if you get to making another application.

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    Heyo,

    The initial application post was pretty rough. The story was fairly short that didn't demonstrate your quirk enough to my liking. Ideally a good story should demonstrate your quirk a few situations your synthetic might find themselves interacting with USCM personnel. The responses to the skillset questions didn't negatively affect your application it didn't help either, if that makes sense. It definitely helps your application to list some of the important parts of each department that you know how to do.

    You have some people that have seen you in game so that's good. Keep up with the ingame activity and hone your skills so next time if you apply people can definitely vouch for you robustness.

    Your dialogue response to Jakk helped me get an idea of your quirk but i really feel you need to hone it down.

    Ultimately I'll still have to -1 this, but I think you are pretty close to a very nice application. I do hope you reapply in the future.
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    Nice, I like your dialogue! Keep up the good work on that track

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    I have to agree with the others here. The app just doesn't show us enough to make an informed vote, if you know what I mean. But you can get this. Take a look at accepted/denied apps and review yours, give some examples of things you'd do and for your story, focus on how it displays your quirk in game. Your quirk shouldn't stop you from doing your job, so having lengthy conversations might be hard to carry out.
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    Moderator & Synthetic Council Member Jakkkk's Avatar
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    This application is being denied. Read the accepted applications and compare them to yours, also your synthetic doesn't really have a quirk. That isn't a necessarily bad thing, you just need to be up front about it instead of "they're curious".

    Thank you for applying.
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    Thank you all for your feedback, I'll take your words into consideration should I decide to apply again in the future.

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