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    noahkeepsake - Yautja Application

    Yautja Whitelist Application
    Personal InformationByond ID:
    Cupcakedevil

    Discord ID
    #6053

    Marine Name
    Ceaser Warren

    Character InformationName of the Yautja Character you wish to play
    Boi-Tik

    Name and history of your Yautja’s clan:
    Clan Luar`Ke
    they are the shadow walkers
    the predators have some of the most advanced tech in the land
    but what happens when it falls into a xenomorph or a human thats where
    this clan steps in they get a seeker and call the seekers and provide the circumstances and what is surronding the stolen gear when the seekers go in to get the stolen gear once they get in the either retreive it or destroy it then once they retrieve/destroy they call the seeker interimary for delivery to the clan that lost its gear

    Yautja Character Story
    Me and the other members of this clan went to destroy and piece of equipment not yet self destructed little did we know how much pain we would have to go through we entered the planet and the station when we entered we noticed it was abanded strange we carried on and we got to the east side and we saw them the xenomorph we killed them and went on we where only 10 meters away now then we treked in the hive one of us got acid blasted on his tech and couldint use it we treked on we fought a hard battle one of us died then we reached the gear we set the timer and ran and ran we i got injured and the other almost died we got back to the ship in the nick of time as the station exploded
    i went to sleep in a pod and heard we had another objective we had to retreive one of the hunters lost equimpent in the temple when a abomnation killed him we went into the temple and got the gear looked easy but the abomnation got to us and jumoed one of the hunters we got it off but not untill a facehugger got that predator we killed the abomnation and threw the hugged hunter into a clive and went back on the ship

    ConfirmationsHave you read the honor code and do you understand that if you breach the honor code you may be subject to disciplinary action and have your whitelist revoked for a set amount of time?
    Yes

    Do you understand that any behavior that is unbecoming of a member of the community may result in you having your whitelist revoked? Such things include, but are not limited to: Racism, toxicity, excessive or malicious trolling, abuse of staff or etc.
    Yes

    Do you understand that you may face having your whitelist revoked, or other disciplinary action undertaken, should you be banned or warned on the CM discord?
    Yes

    Do you understand that you cannot advertise your application on any platform for votes. Do you also understand you may not edit this application 1 hour after it has been posted?
    Yes

    Do you understand that community members may report your in-game actions on the forums, and that you may be asked to defend your actions.
    Yes

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    Senior Member Spetr's Avatar
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    +1, Meets the standards for Luar'ke


    (For Real, -1, The Grammar is horrible, and the story is very short with a lot of gramm, go check other apps and ask for help in #whitelist-app-help on discord)

    Good Luck !

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    They'll fit right in with the clan

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    Thank you for the criticism I will take some time and make a long story and improve the grammar in the story and in the application

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    also thanks for saying i fight right in with the clan
    Last edited by noahkeepsake; 03-23-2021 at 03:23 AM.

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    Denied

    The reason is rather obvious.
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