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    The tale of the vengeance blade

    POV: you are in the caves of Lv you are surrounded you pull up your Gernade launcher you see a hulking rav the light dancing opon the cave walls making harsh shadows the rav roared in anger and charged you fire a Gernade it thuds as it bounces off the Cave floor detonating near a throwing knife the knife is launched into your chest you feel your heart cut itself into ribbions as the rav pulls out your organs like stuffing from a pillow your last sight is the rav walking away smearing your guts on the stone floor.

    In the end Sargent Drake manwell didn’t make it out of the planet the marines were overwhelmed the fob fell the ship was slaughtered but in the end the xenos couldn’t escape fate another patrol ship showed eventually, its name “Golden sonata” a old ship yet faithful it’s crew knew the tale of the alamyer
    High command covered it up but it was too late the helmet footage got out after the golden sonata managed to get the alamyer back under control but atlas the almayer was too weakened she has served well but atlas just like her crew she also couldn’t escape LV-624 the Alamyer was rigged with a cargo of a nuclear payload she would serve one last time the xenos had survived they left eggs the planet was not entirely gone but the large area proved to much so the alamyer was cast into the hive’s last location as it burned up in the uncontrolled atmospheric reentry when she hit the caves where right before the moment of impact you could spot a helmet a standard issue Heavy Grenadier helmet it’s visor cracked and coated in blood the yellow paint faded from it the helmet was worn smashed down but like the the alamyer itself it had served the marine well so here lied Sargent drake manwell not a hero but a man who hadn’t escaped war. The explosion rocked the sky blooming outwards into a dark mushroom the helmet was gone but the nobility of the sacrifices of the alamyer will never be forgotten thrown into the pits of history

    God speed marines
    Drake Manwell the Trying Marine

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    Note didn’t change the title it’s name is actually “The caves of LV” but eh this was a half baked story I shat out on someone’s recommendation
    Drake Manwell the Trying Marine

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    pov, i'm reading this

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    Good one.

    Now make one from the time that idiot tried to throw a nade and managed to hit the back of my head, ending in a explosion that tossed my unconscious body in front of hungry praetorians.

    Or the time that bafoon saw a runner and emptied a mag on it, managing to FF no less than 5 marines in a few seconds.

    What about the OT guy making ANFO the first time without reading the small print about mixing limits, sending half of Almayer to Valhalla.

    Would love to see those.

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