Played as Bravo SL under Kirie; was a pretty decent up until I got capped and I left.
Just a point to work on is probably giving marines a lot more motivation as what I saw was marines hanging back and being L42 NPC plinkers which is really painful to deal with.
The application itself is fine; the BE answer while generic is correct, but the part which details BEing enemy officers doesn't sit right with me due to the usefulness of captured officers however that's more of a IC thing. Story is fine.
Does your Captain have a quirk or something?
+1 for now, also just ignore the drama