Story was a bit all over the place to be honest, but I see you put in the effort and not everyone is a great writer, myself included. I see you tried to include the quirk into the story, but not enough for me to gauge how you would do it IC. The quirk itself is not bad, it could lead to something interesting.
Jasmine 'Life' Rose rings a bell, but I mostly only see you as a spec or some other combat role. Didn't really strike me as the RP type, but that might just be from lack of interaction with you.
How would you ICly show the emotion fear? Make up a ingame scenario that could happen, or show me the /me's, or something alike.
How would you ICly show the emotion anger?
Neutral for now.