theflyingflail - Yautja Application

[Survivor]

Would Itz-Coy'otl (eatz-koi-ohtle) work?

Coy'otl [Clan name] is fine I guess. You make one name, then the clan. The first name should not be unnecessarily long.

[TheFlyingFlail]

Yes as the others said, my advice would be to immediately withdraw the app to give you less time before a re-application.

If I were to withdraw it now how long would it take before I can reapply again? As for the name Coy'otl Bo’ytill will be the name I used based on feedback. Apologies for the earlier name.

[TheFlyingFlail]

Not even gonna lie, expected more outta you seeming you're deving for survs. This comes off as a shitpost for real.

Are there any recommendations you have to improve upon the application? This is the first time I'm applying for a WL.

[MrDadMan]

Go ahead and dm at Frog#6006. I'll be glad to help you through your application process!

[TheFlyingFlail]

1. Your story is to short

2. Your name is the same as your marine.

I'm sorry to say this but this app LOOKS like a shit post to me. or at least you did not enough effort into at all. this app will be denied.

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Hey Joe I appreciate the feedback. Do you have any recommendations as to improve the application to make it appear less like a shitpost or low effort? I looked up the clan culture, pred lore, and honor code prior to writing the app.

[TheFlyingFlail]

Go ahead and dm at Frog#6006. I'll be glad to help you through your application process!

Much appreciated!

[TheFlyingFlail]

Yes as the others said, my advice would be to immediately withdraw the app to give you less time before a re-application.

Looking at the feedback given I'll have to withdraw my application at this time to craft a better one. Thanks to everyone that contributed to the app!

[Joe Lampost]

look at the wikis pred lore page and look at the others accepted apps stories and base it around that