Byond ID:Sagasword
Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Saga 'Chopper' Madrik
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Dteinou-Lar'ja (The Dark Messenger)
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I am and I memorize it perfectly.
Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
I've separated the story into 3 small chapters for easy reading. I recommend you read it whilst you're free and your mind is really into it, I hope it's to your liking.
Chapter 1: The Truth
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"I never knew my past, but it will always be somewhere in brain...Lurking...And one day I will find it. For now, let's just stick with what I know." Dteinou was the adjudicator of a great Clan, respected and honored throughout the history. Desperate to keep the honor of his Clan he trained the young with ferocity, inspiring them to become the best. His training showed no mercy because he felt like a small mistake could stain the honor of his Clan forever.
One day Agaj’ya, a Clan Leader, invited Dteinou to hunt in an ancestral temple on another planet, promising him that the Clan would be ok until they return. The Cheering Dteinou had from the Clan was great as he traveled with the Clan Leader to the far off planet. Dteinou prepared his soul and mind for it, because it was another opportunity to bring honor to the Clan.
They’ve arrived, the ship landed on the planet. Dteinou stood proud, his cape fluttered by the ship’s wind as he got out of it, he examined the temple’s gate before wearing his mask. Dteinou took out his Glaive, fixing it to the ground, then leaned on the Glaive with one leg while the other one behind him, twitching his legs, soon his unmatched speed would kick in that the fastest Serpents will never exceed him. His dominance in speed gave him power to sustain the lack of physical strength and so he learned to turn this into his advantage.
Rushing in as swift as the breeze, he made his way through the packs of xenomorphs charging at him, hacking and slashing, dodging and jabbing. His speed made it nearly impossible for the serpents even when in groups to touch him. Soon he reached the Ancient room where the Empress was, roaring at the death of it’s daughters, it charged with it’s Crown like head crest. Dteinou ordered Agaj’ya to stand down and let him fight the Empress whilst running at the Empress to clash in a fight so great the world will talk about for eternity.
The blood of the Empress carved the room's walls as the Glaive ran through it’s body, again and again, until the Beast’s leg got cut off. The Empress fell to the ground heavily flailing with pain, Dteinou was ready to deal the final blow before suddenly...The world turned blurry, his vision roamed in circles to the abyss, he heard words from behind him “I’ve finally killed you, you sly. After you took my righteous place as an Adjudicator because the Council favored you over me after all I did to satisfy them. Don’t worry, no one will know of what happened here, I will erase your mask’s recording of this incident. Farewell, Old Friend”…
The death of Dteinou made the Clan drown in sadness, the Council agreed to build a temple for him to honor his great deeds for the Clan, where he will be remembered there forever...
But deep down his temple lies a drop of his blood during the burial...And this blood will change the fate of Dteinou...For better or for worse when it was discovered by W-Y millenniums of years into the future...Soon, a new legacy would begin...
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>Sample scanned successfully
>Initiating DNA copying
>DNA copy was successful
>Initiating Clone Process
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>98...
>99...
>100...
>Cloning Process was successful
>Subject's name:Aaron
>Status: Alive
>Ejecting Specimen...
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"I opened my eyes slowly...The world was blurry and shiny for a second. I stood up, but my legs weren't helping. I cocked my head around with confusion, "Who am I? Where am I? Who are you?" words came out of my mouth with gibberish sounds and clicks. They were everywhere, men with white coats surrounded me, putting a half mask on my face to cover my mouth and nose...I spoke, and words came out of my mouth understandable...At least to them..."
"They called me Aaron, but that wasn't my real name. Sadly, I never knew it...They were polite to me at first, helping me understand, learn their language and ways, taught me the yautja tongue. They tricked me saying that I was a human like them with a fatal disease and W-Y saved me, but in exchange I turned into this reptilian form."
"They began experimenting on me. Sharp tools entered my body from time to time, injecting me with various stimulants and extracting pheromones from my body. These surgeries made me grow a temper, but sometimes I'd lose control...I'd grin creepily while walking, or punch the walls around me. I wasn't stable, they did this to me, but I forgave them because they tried to save me from my disease, to give me a new life...But that was just a fantasy in my mind..."
"Curiosity had bested me before I tried to sneak into the scientists' laboratory, and that's where I found the bitter truth...I wasn't human...I wasn't ill...Pictures of my ancestors' history has unfolded before my eyes on the computer. Soon I realized how much I was blind, but I could see the truth now...I inspected it and read it all, I learned my people's ways and I intended to keep it that way."
"Struck by anger I clutched by hands so tight blood came out of it, clicks of rage came out my mouth. I looked at the facility map which was in the room, two places caught my eyes instantly. The Artifact room and the Xenomorph lockdown room...I ran into the vents until I reached the Lockdown room. I saw the Serpents on the other side of the room behind the glass, imprisoned by the humans. Cocking my head to examine the room I found a console with beeping buttons and lights...I smashed it with all my might, breaking it into pieces and that's when I heard it...The emergency red light flooded the room as the Serpents ran inside the ventilation system that was in the opposite room. I ran as fast as the Serpents outside the room, shoving any human I see out of my way. Soon I reached the Artifact room where I've found a Wrist Bracer, I wore it without hesitation and took me no time to figure out how to unsheathe it's blades..."
"The main door was teeming with guards so I decided to run away using the roof...The small groups of guards I met while running to the roof tried to shoot me but they couldn't...Anger was in my veins and it gave me power, dodging their bullets like it was nothing and tearing them apart in a shower of blood and gore. I drew my message everywhere I went, I will strike fear in them every second I live...What was my message? It is simple...I...SEE...YOU"
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"I have finally reached the roof, then I took a moment to rest but no sooner had I stopped that I was lashed from behind to the floor by a Serpent...I stood up, but I felt like I was carrying a mountain on top of me. I faced the Serpent and began to ready myself for battle. The drips of my blood pierced the silence of the environment, followed by the growl of the beast...My legs twitched violently, the blood flew in my veins and I found myself roaring and sprinting at the Serpent like a bullet, colliding with it using my Wrist Blades I opened a giant hole in it's chest whilst throwing it away a few metres...Then another pain struck me, it was the Serpent's blood, slowly burning my arm. I roared with pain again and charged at the quivering Serpent, giving it a swift slash to it's neck I decapitated it..."
"I took a deep breath then looked under the roof, where I saw a river flowing near the facility..."It is now or never" I told myself as I jumped towards the river..."
Splash!
"I landed in the river, it carried me far away from the facility and threw me on it's shores...I had nothing except my Wrist Bracers and my Mask so I ventured into the forest trying to look for anything to help me survive..."
"Years have passed like the wind and It's been a while since I ran away from the facility. I scavenged anything I could find in the forest, animals, wood, stone. I made simple tools to help me survive but what really helped me survive was my Wrist Bracer, because the Serpents were out there trying to hunt me. Fortunately, I killed every Serpent that I faced, skinned them, and made armor and weapons from their bodies. I also made sure that I don't stay in the same place for too long because they tend to swarm my place the instance a Serpent discovers me."
"Most of the time I'd rest under a tree and think about who I am...Am I a disgrace to my kind? Should I kill myself? Why has god created me just to suffer and die?...These wild thoughts often ended with me almost killing myself, but I had a feeling in my body that I was born for something greater, something...Better...And one day, I've finally found you...A ship shimmered into existence from the sky as it ejected a pod which landed on the planet. I excitedly jumped and ran towards the pod that has landed, and that was where I met you...My old Friend, Dhi'rauta Bhu'ja...Try not to be disappointed by me because I lied to you all these years. I had no choice. You were a great friend and teacher of mine, and I'll always honor you even in my death."
Dteinou stopped his mask's recording and pulled the data chip out of his mask, exchanging it with a new one. He put the old one in his Armory room in a box which he named "My Death Will". After that he began arming himself with his favorite weaponry and went out of the room to meet with Dhi for another hunt...Together...
For my hunting style I intend to hunt groups of 2 or more but there might be some special cases that I hunt only one individual or so especially the first few days that I get whitelisted. This way I could bring as much fun and interaction with the predator as possible because I see that predators don't show up so often and when they do it's concentrated on interacting with one marine or a very small party. More so, before I hunt the group I will send them a calling card whether it's a piece of paper, drawings on the floor or walls or just warning them directly. Then I'd give them some time to prepare before I go after them.
For the apparel I will stick to light armor and concentrate my hunting technique on speed,hard hitting and straight forward fighting. I will also use my plasma caster in case the group that i'm hunting have heavy artillery (Like a SADAR or Grenade Launcher).
Why should we whitelist you?
I don't really have anything fancy to say but I know that the whitelist was made for people to have fun whilst sharing the fun with the non-whitelisted people and not made for someone to abuse their powers. Normally with great power comes great responsibility and it will be my first and foremost goal if I get whitelisted to make people have fun before I do. I always love cracking a smile on anyone's face I meet and it's a great cause for someone to follow.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Absolutely not.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Paradise station because I set someone on fire with napalm when I was young. This happened about 3 or 4 years ago.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes.
P.S:I want to thank Boltersam for helping me with the story by being my advisor and giving me his honest opinion about the story. He didn't write the story or anything but just gave me hints on what I did wrong and what I should change. Although he didn't really read the final product that is this Application so he will be giving his first expression to the story this time.
