Mizolo - Kha'bj-te Jehdin (Reckless One)

[mizolo]

Byond ID:
Mizolo


Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Anekcahap Volkov


Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Kha'bj-te Jehdin


Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes I am, I have also been looking at the extended predator code of honor here

http://avp.wikia.com/wiki/Yautja_Honor_Code


Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):

Training:

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He was slammed to the ground, breath knocked from his lungs.
He put the training stick to the back of his neck ... dead.

"and that's you as a trophy" his trainer said.

He sighed and said "cjit" as he got up.
His trainer pulled him up, and he got ready to go again, but his trainer stopped with his arms and training stick lowered.

"Are we going again sir?" I asked

"Depends on whether you think you are ready" He responded

I looked at him, confused.
"I am NOWHERE near ready" I said

"Good, then let's go again" my trainer said
I sighed and got ready for another ass kicking.
He looked at me, and I paused, he said.



"You see, that's the attitude that gets you killed, expecting defeat is your first and biggest mistake, because you think that, you get lazy, slacking in your moveme-"
He suddenly stopped talking and swung at me, something he had never done before, surprised, I instinctively used my training and deflected with my stick, then pushed him off-balance with force, such that I had never DARED use on my trainer, he was knocked almost completely off his feet ... AND FELL TO THE GROUND!!!

He stood up ... and to my surprise ... dazed!
"Do that again" he said

"You alri- what?!?!?! you want me to push you with THAT much force AGAIN?!?!?!" I asked incredulously.

"Yes, now what I want you to do is concentrate, don't let anyth-" He suddenly stopped talking and swung at me again, this time a different stroke, but this time I knew he was expecting the push, so instead of blocking and pushing, I dodged and counter-attacked with a very powerful blow.

I heard a *THWAP* as I hit my trainer, practically with all my force. To my surprise he clutched his right shoulder where I had hit him, he was in PAIN!?!?!?!

"Alright alright, no more games for you young one, time to beat you again" He said, as he swung with more force and speed than I have ever seen, and the deepest part of me knew EXACTLY what to do.

I did a risky move. I grabbed his stick mid-swing, stinging my hand, and PULLED him towards me, where I then pushed off to gain momentum before I slammed into him. HARD.

He grunted as he careened back, still on his feet.
"But he's a master at un-armed combat" I thought "How in the HELL am I supposed to best THIS!?!?!?"

Before I knew it he charged me. As I stepped to the side, he out-streched his arms to grab and tackle me to the ground. I used this to my advantage, as he came close to grabbing me, I grabbed his arm and swung around him using centrifugal force, swinging me practically 120 degrees around to the right.

But since he was going so fast, his own momentum caused him to tumble to the ground. Shocked and a little dazed, I turned back and pounced on him.

He tried to push me off, but I had him in a pinning position. I smiled as I returned the favor and said.
"That's you as a trophy now"

He replied "Well well, i'm actually impressed, do you feel ready?"

"I feel ready, now that you've taught me not to accept defeat" I said as I pulled him up from off the ground.

"Alright, the ship leaves in a couple of minutes, i'll be there with your gear" He responded

I nodded and headed off towards the ship, where I would have.

My first hunt

The first hunt:

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I boarded the ship, soon after my trained boarded the ship with me, along with the box of gear.

We took off and went to a jungle planet, UGH, I hated jungle planets, but if I was going to prove my worth, I would do it.

My trainer approached me and opened my box, he then said something that almost knocked me off my teeny little feet.
"Pick 5, basics are not included in addition with your 5, choose wisely"

I was taken aback and looked at him kind of with a "wtf!?!?!" face.

"You heard me, choose quick, your pod is almost ready"

I stood there, dazed by what my trainer just said, I picked the bio-mask of course, but the rest ... I didn't know what NOT to bring, there was so MUCH I relied on. I picked up medi-comp, wristblades, and combi-stick next. I had one selection left.

I debated between cloak and sonic mines. I ended up choosing sonic mines, hoping I wouldn't regret it later.



The Drone:

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I got into my pod, and my trainer wished me luck, I responded "I hope I don't need any".

I went down to the surface and hopped out, instantly regretting my decision to not bring a cloak, or armor for that matter, I felt exposed ... and alone.

I started head from tree to tree in the jungle, heading towards the temple. I then spotted a drone, the weakest one of the hive, I didn't like these drones, they were too ... easy, I jumped in front of it, and somehow ... didn't surprise it.

It hissed at me and lashed it's tail at me. I dodged and took out my wrist-blades and slashed it across it's sleek head, it roared and scrambled away, but I let it go, hoping it would return with friends.

Unfortunately, little did I know, it came back with a lot more than I expected.

The waiting part of hunting prey:

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I sat in wait, waiting for the "reinforcements" to come back, as I knew they would. It was then that something hit me in the back of the head, furious, I spun around and came face to face ... with a monkey. I sighed and retracted my wristblades as the monkey laughed, then scampered away for some reason.

"Ugh" I thought, I never liked waiting, hunting, more like waiting to be honest, it was the most ... interesting experience. Little did I know, that about 8 xenos were coming over the hill.

About 10 seconds later I brushed myself off, still annoyed at the stupid monkey that made me panic, and turned on my EM vision, and to my horror I saw at least 8 xenos were over the hill. I knew I had to run, but where? the xenos will just follow me.

I had to make a decision, FAST.

I had heard from my trainer that xenos draw off of the acid in their blood. It was what basically powered them. I made the decision to fight. Though reckless, I didn't really have a choice in the matter, since they were determined on killing me, and they could run forever, and I could not.

The little ones:

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I dropped down and took out my combi-stick, I had spent some time making sharp edges on the forward 1/3 length of the stick out of rock from the jungle while I waited, so that I could slice when in combat, unfortunately I knew that they would be short lasted, since they lacked the semi-acid resistance of the spear and wrist-blades.

The first xeno came up to me, and pounced, a simple mistake for a young runner like itself. I impaled it with my combi-stick as it came near me, acid sizzling as it cried out ... dying. The same with 2 other runners happened, though a a black one sprinted behind me as it tried to slash me with it's tail as it sprinted past me, I dodged easily.

I looked up and saw 4 hunters surrounding me, thinking to myself "cjit" as 2 from opposite sides converged, I ducked, but left my combi-stick there, as both the hunters crashed into one another, spilling acid all over my UNARMORED body, AND the bladed combi-stick. They bled acid, sizzling away the edges I had quickly. I turned and extended my wristblades, just in time to stab the hunter there right in the ... neck? I didn't have time to debate, It died, and I turned to the recovering 2 as the 4th on the other side pushed the middle.

I charged and slashed the two hunters on either side, killing them, and I let the 4th one pounce me. I immediately struggled to get it off, but without success, panicking, I kicked with all my strength in my legs, and to my surprise, made the hunter practically fly off of me.

I got up quickly and slashed the hunter twice, killing it. Little to my knowledge, slowly dissolving my wristblades.

The Duel of Lives:

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I turned to the remaining 2 xenos, and I was horror-struck. One was a crusher, and one was a fucking ravager. I immediately started running in fear, but quickly began to realize ... it was no use. I silently dropped a sonic mine set for 2 seconds, the lowest detonation timer, and closed my eyes and turned the bio-mask to anti-sonic mode. I heard a slight bang, and turned around, the xenos were stunned!

I wasted no time, and charged the ravager first, as he was the most agile and quick to change directions, I impaled it and almost cut it's neck, but it's chitin armor saved it, enraged, it swung it's tail and claws wildly. I then slashed at it's legs, making it bleed out to death as it screamed. I turned, but not in time as the crusher had already recovered, backed up, and charged me.

I dashed out of the way, but not in time. It hit my lower left torso and I felt something utterly SHATTER in my leg. Screaming in pain as I crumpled to the ground, face first, I hate crushers. I got up and faced the crusher, left leg crumpling under the weight as I fell again to the ground and the crusher charged. I got up and jumped up and extended my wristblades to slash it.

Nothing came out of the wristblade sockets except for a bunch of sizzling hot metal as the blades themselves, detached from my wrists. I was once again, horror struck as the crusher charged me again, this time, I made a dash for my combi-stick.

Grabbing it as the crusher narrowly misses me, I crumple to the ground in pain, just inches from my combi-stick.

"No" I thought "No, this is NOT HOW I WILL END!!!" I crawled to the combi-stick, and grabbed it. The crusher then ran me over, breaking my left arm.
"CJIT" I screamed. It hurt ... so much. The acid, the broken bones, the pain. Then something inside me started filling me up with hate ... something I had never felt.

I crawled to a futile position as I braced for the next charge, holding my combi-stick clumsily. Something broke free inside as pure rage engulfed me, pain almost completely gone ... though unable to get out of the way, I held the combi-stick with my right hand, it being the only one not broken, and braced it not against me, but a rock that was firmly in the ground.

The crusher ran straight into the combi-stick as I rolled clumsily to one side. The crusher then broke my right leg, sending searing pain once again through my already pain-stricken body. The crusher stopped dead in it's tracks, I heard no more stomping or running. I rolled over, only to see the dead crusher's side right up against my face. I crawled about 5 feet away before I stopped and took a breath. I needed one.

I pulled out my medi-comp, so glad to have brought it, and administered sedative to my body, it never felt so good. I had to work quickly, as it would wear off expediently. I noticed that my left arm and leg had open wounds leading directly to my bone, I started on them first. Healing, mending, and repairing bones, scars, and acid burns. Then turned to my right leg, and healed it, quite painfully.

I got up, and took my time with each of my trophies. I turned to the crusher last, I had a time with this one ... I slowly removed his skeleton and chitin, working carefully, more so than the others. Unfortunately the only remains of my combi-stick was a hilt. I took it as a token of rememberance.

I then went back to my pod, ready to go home.




When I got back to the ship, my trainer said he saw everything, and that it pleased him well. Then the other un-blooded, now young-bloods, congratulated me. Then an elder walked into the room. We all immediately went to our knees in respect and lowered our heads. He then spoke.
"Many of you today have become young-bloods, though some more reckless than others, you all have achieved the rank and deserve it."

We waited as he exited the room, before he went out of sight, he said.
"Oh and well done with the group of serpents ... kha'bj-te jehdin ... but do better next time, because next time you won't have the luxury of young crushers and ravagers."

I froze and thought "Those ... were YOUNG?!? I almost died!" and nodded as he turned and exited the room.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I intend not to get into suicidal situations, but tough situations, the thrill of the hunt comes from challenge and competition, not from easy prey kills like a single hunter or drone.
I also intend to ... bait monkeys, and use them as a trap to get a xeno, or get more than one.
To clarify the first one, I won't be super stupid, but I will be (as my name suggests) a tad reckless.
Play my predator as one would call it "gentle but firm" principle


Why should we whitelist you?
I believe I should be white-listed because I want to bring a more ... equal change in the essence of predators, because I think right now, predators kind of fall into 2 categories:
way too reckless and get killed or murder-meme marines
way too passive and safe, and don't get as many trophies or have as much of an impact in the game.

I intend to be the predator that is between them.
(sorry if I offended current predators)


Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Yes, I have recieved a 24 hr ban for being a researcher and not knowing that you had to ask LOOC if I could keep someone locked in a containment chamber. I did not know this rule and was never informed of it, I won't do it again, I cannot deny that I did it, but I CAN say that i'm sorry.


Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I am not CURRENTLY banned from any other servers, I have been banned from other servers because people tampered with my lawset and I followed it as intended, not rule/law as written.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
I completely understand, bad bloods are not allowed on this server, nor will they ever.

[Sleepy Retard]

-1 generally a bad roleplayer/player, really don't want him to be a predator...

...If you could improve your history, sure, I'll give you +1

[shyshadow]

Hmmm, I see you tried a lot of with this one. It's long, but not very well thought out. Taking a first person route for a backstory can sometimes end badly, if not executed correctly. In my opinion, you did not execute the way it should have been, you use extremely odd language, I get you're not writer. Probably...the point I'm getting to is there is little to no actual reasoning behind his clumsiness, is it because he's filled with self doubt? Because he's just not as bright as the rest?
Not to mention, that his extremely reckless nature manages to kill four Xenomorphs? By himself? That's not quite realistic, maybe 2. But four? How does someone that is known to be clumsy, fucking manage to do that. Especially for his first time.

Another thing I'd like to add, is how absolutely ridiculous your predator is. You literally put full caps for some shit, and I get you're trying to make a point, but it's not necessary. Your predator's dialogue, is just fucking. What? You're a Yautja, a member of an extremely competitive race which forces you to kill and hunt for the sake of honor, and you act like a fucking 15 year old guy on the internet.

As nice as I usually am. This is not an application I can sugar-coat. I'm not in any way accepting this as, a minimum of acceptable. This is extremely sub-par, your playstyle? Bland, your reasoning? Bland. You're mostly here just to be an Edgy XD Predator, there is little to no actual knowledge about predator lore, in my opinion I see very little of it.

-1, Apply again the future, and work a lot on improving. If you need insight from Predators. PM Whitelisted players on the forums. They're usually there to help....usually.

[mizolo]

Hmmm, I see you tried a lot of with this one. It's long, but not very well thought out. Taking a first person route for a backstory can sometimes end badly, if not executed correctly. In my opinion, you did not execute the way it should have been, you use extremely odd language, I get you're not writer. Probably...the point I'm getting to is there is little to no actual reasoning behind his clumsiness, is it because he's filled with self doubt? Because he's just not as bright as the rest?
Not to mention, that his extremely reckless nature manages to kill four Xenomorphs? By himself? That's not quite realistic, maybe 2. But four? How does someone that is known to be clumsy, fucking manage to do that. Especially for his first time.

Another thing I'd like to add, is how absolutely ridiculous your predator is. You literally put full caps for some shit, and I get you're trying to make a point, but it's not necessary. Your predator's dialogue, is just fucking. What? You're a Yautja, a member of an extremely competitive race which forces you to kill and hunt for the sake of honor, and you act like a fucking 15 year old guy on the internet.

As nice as I usually am. This is not an application I can sugar-coat. I'm not in any way accepting this as, a minimum of acceptable. This is extremely sub-par, your playstyle? Bland, your reasoning? Bland. You're mostly here just to be an Edgy XD Predator, there is little to no actual knowledge about predator lore, in my opinion I see very little of it.

-1, Apply again the future, and work a lot on improving. If you need insight from Predators. PM Whitelisted players on the forums. They're usually there to help....usually.

Ok, advice taken, but in this situation I made it so that there was little to no choice in the matter of facing the xenomorphs. As they would just outrun him. I do see your point in being confused about the predator's reason for recklessness. For me it's the challenge of being reckless that brings him the thrill of the hunt. For him he was expecting a maximum of 4 xenos and a miminum of the drone returning and a hunter ... not an entire army of xenos.

[shyshadow]

Ok, advice taken, but in this situation I made it so that there was little to no choice in the matter of facing the xenomorphs. As they would just outrun him. I do see your point in being confused about the predator's reason for recklessness. For me it's the challenge of being reckless that brings him the thrill of the hunt. For him he was expecting a maximum of 4 xenos and a miminum of the drone returning and a hunter ... not an entire army of xenos.

No, no, no, the problem is that he didn't die. No Young-Blood should have been able to survive such an encounter. Not even an actual experienced blooded hunter could've survive a 1v4, at the same time. Maybe even it was at separate times and he was in a hunting ground he knew with his heart. But no, you're hunter just sits there. Like a child, like also a fucking idiot instead of I don't know, setting up traps, scouting his surroundings, so that he can have the edge when it comes to waiting for his prey, you're a fucking Yautja, yet you act human marine. This is a life or death scenario that you've been training your whole damn life for and you're just going to sit there? I thought you liked the thrill of the hunt? Instead of hunting for suitable game, you instead sit around instead of I don't know hunting? I know hunting is suppose to be sometimes sitting and waiting, and yet you don't actually set up or scout your surroundings? I feel like you did no actual fucking research, considering it's in a first person perspective, I totally skimmed over the fact, you refer to them as Xenos. When it should be serpents.

Also, you make your backstory to be extremely, extremely game related to the CM server, which in my opinion. It shouldn't, it should technically exist as it's own entity, as in you shouldn't apply "Young" "Mature" Etc. To your backstory, it's just not realistic. Or at least realistic to the point where it's acceptable in the AvP universe. I can say for certain you are NOT ready. I stand by my -1.

[mizolo]

No, no, no, the problem is that he didn't die. No Young-Blood should have been able to survive such an encounter. Not even an actual experienced blooded hunter could've survive a 1v4, at the same time. Maybe even it was at separate times and he was in a hunting ground he knew with his heart. But no, you're hunter just sits there. Like a child, like also a fucking idiot instead of I don't know, setting up traps, scouting his surroundings, so that he can have the edge when it comes to waiting for his prey, you're a fucking Yautja, yet you act human marine. This is a life or death scenario that you've been training your whole damn life for and you're just going to sit there? I thought you liked the thrill of the hunt? Instead of hunting for suitable game, you instead sit around instead of I don't know hunting? I know hunting is suppose to be sometimes sitting and waiting, and yet you don't actually set up or scout your surroundings? I feel like you did no actual fucking research, considering it's in a first person perspective, I totally skimmed over the fact, you refer to them as Xenos. When it should be serpents.

Also, you make your backstory to be extremely, extremely game related to the CM server, which in my opinion. It shouldn't, it should technically exist as it's own entity, as in you shouldn't apply "Young" "Mature" Etc. To your backstory, it's just not realistic. Or at least realistic to the point where it's acceptable in the AvP universe. I can say for certain you are NOT ready. I stand by my -1.

Ok advice taken, asking this to be pre-denied

[Feweh]

Denied