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Predator application

Post by Karlo123 » 20 Apr 2018, 16:06

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):Easton Haynes

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Lu'kdar


Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? yes

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):yes

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)? Smart
Why should we whitelist you? because i realy want to try predator because i like predators BEST LIFEFORM

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?flashbang

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?I dont play on other servers

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?yes i do

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Re: Predator application

Post by Sambalu » 20 Apr 2018, 16:18

I don't want to seem like I'm backseat moderating, but you literally just signed up and this is your only post. That alone is the reason this is likely going to be denied. Your character background is literally just "yes". This is not an an adequate description in any way. I suggest you read some of the accepted apps if you choose to try again in the future.
Your reason for being whitelisted is unconvincing too.
This app looks like it had barely any effort put into it, and I highly suggest being more active on the forums if you want to become a predator. Being well known in-game as a good RPer would also help your cause.
Overall, I'm going with a big -1 for now.
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Re: Predator application

Post by Avalanchee » 20 Apr 2018, 16:20

Pure masterpiece.
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Re: Predator application

Post by Gabe » 20 Apr 2018, 16:21

This application brought me to tears, you are truly a master of words. You use a little to say a lot, and that is powerful.

God bless you sir, I can't wait to see your predator in game.
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Re: Predator application

Post by MauroVega » 20 Apr 2018, 16:21

This is the part where i could say X needs work or X needs to be better, but in this case, EVERYTHING needs to be better

Yes, is not a character backgroun
cause you want to try it, is not a reason to whitelist you
Also this is your only post

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Re: Predator application

Post by Rikman » 20 Apr 2018, 16:22

There is no way this isnt a troll app.
Its going to be denied.

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Re: Predator application

Post by TehSpoderman » 20 Apr 2018, 16:28

accept this app so i can see what he will do with it please
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Re: Predator application

Post by Avalanchee » 20 Apr 2018, 16:31

Yes plz, accept his app for the next April Fools
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Re: Predator application

Post by driecg36 » 20 Apr 2018, 16:41

TehSpoderman wrote:
20 Apr 2018, 16:28
accept this app so i can see what he will do with it please
this but unironically
Some guy.

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Re: Predator application

Post by edda » 20 Apr 2018, 16:44

Definitely +1.
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Post by x31stOverlord » 20 Apr 2018, 16:48

I have never, ever in my history of reading, have ever read anything as awe-inspiring, this is pure poetry to the heart soul and mind.

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Re: Predator application

Post by DrPng » 20 Apr 2018, 17:13

This is obviously a troll app, put it in acid goop.
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Re: Predator application

Post by Alky » 20 Apr 2018, 17:41

Top of the line pred-app.

I wish you'd put more effort into your story and how it matches with your characters playstyle.

Please.

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Re: Predator application

Post by SaltyMouthful » 20 Apr 2018, 17:47

I've seen higher quality pred apps in acid goop.
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Re: Predator application

Post by Shyguychizzy » 20 Apr 2018, 18:08

Of mere experienced predator as myself. It took me a while to fully review it which was roughly several times within 5 minutes. Much stuff I am concerning is this a shitpost or an application that belongs among the wall of horrible denied applications. I doubt yah know what a predator be and highly offended referring to our accepted predators as stupid. How do you think we predators do? We don't simply throw our lives untactically or unbalance the round by slaughtering half marines and xeno side we play it smart so can't use smart as yer intention as many predators already play smartly. Yes is not in yautja lore or gives detail of yer background there isn't a known YES predator to CM or in Yautja knowledge.
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Re: Predator application

Post by Sargash » 20 Apr 2018, 18:18

+1 Every word has great, and deep meaning. No filler or fluff at all. I can tell you'll make it far.

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Re: Predator application

Post by TheMusician321 » 20 Apr 2018, 20:39

Dear god man, this is possibly one of the best pred apps I have ever seen during my time here on CM, look at it's majesty and how every word has meaning, no filler or useless flavor at all. +1
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Re: Predator application

Post by Redikalzip » 20 Apr 2018, 21:36

Karlo123 wrote:
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Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):yes
Yes, good joke. -1. Also read accepted apps and don't make meme applications in the whitelist forum, and I can recommend you read predator's lore and look at their history, good luck with it.
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Re: Predator application

Post by ArrancarX5 » 20 Apr 2018, 21:52

Gonna agree with redikal, I'm voting -1, despite the fact I've not been on in forever. but I may soon. I've had a lack of motivation there.

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Re: Predator application

Post by Dumblike » 21 Apr 2018, 03:09

I am wordless about your story, it is simply great. I am sure Jamie will accept your application in one day, maximum. +1
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Re: Predator application

Post by Kailey Prevatt » 21 Apr 2018, 03:29

This is truely a masterpiece and I will take this beautiful story into consideration when I make my own.
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Re: Predator application

Post by RobBrown4PM » 21 Apr 2018, 13:37

+1

This app inspired me to write my own Predator app at some point.

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Post by Artemis111 » 21 Apr 2018, 20:02

This... this.... is the most excellent pred application I have ever seen... People will talk about it for years to come.

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Re: Predator application

Post by Jakkkk » 21 Apr 2018, 20:28

I really want to give this guy the ability to play predator just to see what he would do with it.
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Post by NGGJamie » 22 Apr 2018, 07:08

I've been busy the past few days so this slipped past me.

Obviously denied.
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