Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

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Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by mizolo » 21 May 2018, 17:28

Let's try this ... again.


Byond ID: Mizolo

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Anekcahap (various nicknames) Volkov

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Ohanko Actaeon

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, as well as extended lore.

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):

Childhood:
► Show Spoiler
Ideals:
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Training:
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The Hunt:
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I'd be lying if I told you I'm not going to play like "Any ol' predator". However, I WOULDN'T be lying if I told you there were some ... kinks, or quirks to my predator.
I intend to make RP situations with other preds very ... weird to say the least. My character is INCREDIBLY blunt, and that also leads to dis-respect sometimes which is NOT OK, hence why he as a character is trying to restrain his blunt-ness and dis-respect to the best of his ability. He also tends to get VERY angry VERY fast as part of this quirk.

Why should we whitelist you?
I have played CM for a very long time, over a year in fact. I also realize that my reputation with some of you is ... not great to say the least.
You should whitelist me because I think I bring a predator to the table that is very ... un-orthodox in it's ways because of his social skill level with other predators. Not to say he'll just out-right dis-respect elders, NO NO no no no that won't happen. But fellow ranked? That is where you'd get some ... awkward conversations.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No, and I also have not received any warnings either. Though I do have an INCREDIBLY scary note-list, that was in a dark-age long past with my ... well ... most of you know my blow-up of 2017 November, so I won't continue.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No, I am not currently banned from ANY other server.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
I understand that my white-list status can be revoked at ANY time if I break the code of honor, or dis-obey server rules.
I also understand that if needs be, it can be revoked for some reason other than the stated or otherwise implied.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by ComradeCorbyn » 21 May 2018, 18:19

You seem like a great guy, and I'm really not the person who should judge apps, but this kind of seemed short and cliche. Your active and great, but maybe expanding the backstory might help you in the future. I'll go neutral on this, just maybe update the backstory.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by mizolo » 21 May 2018, 18:21

Yeah, I seem to have the most trouble with the back-story.

To be honest I don't want like A WALL OF TEXT for you to read for 9 fucking hours, but it feels like it's either that or a 2-sentence paragraph.


I deliberately cut out SO MUCH SHIT to make this short. Trust me, there was a LOT MORE to this.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by Karmac » 21 May 2018, 20:20

It's a no from me.

minus one.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by Sulaboy » 21 May 2018, 20:32

You got back from two months of inactivity yesterday. -1
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by Ghostdex » 21 May 2018, 22:11

Karmac wrote:
21 May 2018, 20:20
It's a no from me.

minus one.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by Kavlo » 22 May 2018, 03:01

Karmac wrote:
21 May 2018, 20:20
It's a no from me.

minus one.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by RedsPro » 22 May 2018, 03:16

Karmac wrote:
21 May 2018, 20:20
It's a no from me.

minus one.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by TheMusician321 » 22 May 2018, 08:38

Karmac wrote:
21 May 2018, 20:20
It's a no from me.

minus one.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by Lukey111 » 22 May 2018, 08:39

Good amount of posts
Known player that (I think) can roleplay
The pred name is a bit weird
No one really reads the backstory, they just look in there to see how long you made it. Though, I would make it halfway decent, as a few people will read it.
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I think I can give a neutral leaning towards VERY LIGHTLY towards +1. It would be easier for me to judge if I did see your notes, though.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by Kerek » 22 May 2018, 08:46

Well since I’m able to get to this now, I haven’t seen you in game often lately. You said you’ve been playing for a week after what 2 months of being inactive? The grammar is screwy as all hell, iirc Elders don’t train unblooded and an unblooded sure as hell wouldn’t be able to beat a highly skilled elder super easily. You also said in there your yautja views serpent and machines as equals, and thats just plain wrong. Yautja are super xenophobic and only view something (excluding xenos) as equals if they best them in combat and spare them. You’re also very prone to being dramatic and salt-filled. You need to be active for more than a week to display a difference in attitude. I don’t think this app is up to standard. -1
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by Karmac » 22 May 2018, 09:33

There's honestly too much wrong with this to bother posting genuine criticism, the one thing I will say is that your backstory looks like your dossier, and not an actual backstory.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by Ghostdex » 23 May 2018, 13:28

Instead of my feedback just being a quote i’ll attempt to explain the reasoning behind it.

Serpents are prey and therefor never equal in status to a Yautja, and to move on to the other species, the entire species wouldn’t ever be considered equal only an individual if they defeated a Yautja in combat. The story wasn’t easy for me to read all the way through and was almost comical at times in regard to the grammar, which needs to be worked on. Although Kerek covered most of this.

I haven’t interacted with you much ICly but I have watched you except since you were inactive so long I’m unable to remember anything definitive. OOCly you get extremely salty which in my own opinion is not something I would like to see from a whitelisted player, I believe you said that you are changing that though, so I’ll keep an eye out.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by mizolo » 25 May 2018, 11:59

I see your guys' points. I also see why you think I haven't been active for the past 2-3 weeks, even though I HAVE.

I completely understand the backstory situation, though I've always had trouble with that, I'll do better in the future.


Thanks for your guys' input.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

Post by mizolo » 28 May 2018, 12:54

If you guys have no more +1's to add, I'll probably just say ...


Actually, I'll try again later, pre-deny this.

I need to work on a bunch of stuff.
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Re: Mizolo's Predator Application (Ohanko Actaeon)

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