NeverLoseHope's Predator App

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NeverLoseHope's Predator App

Post by NeverLoseHope » 07 Oct 2018, 20:26

Byond ID:
NeverLoseHope
Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Mozella White
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Vi'vid
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes
Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
Story Location: Jungle-planet with Aztec like ruins

Unknown Voice:"Wake up, get up its your turn young blood"
Unknown voice:"Get up! YOU MUST PROVE YOURSELF ARE YOU A REAL HUNTER?!"
Vi'vid awakens only to find herself being beaten upon by a fellow Yautja, her mind is still in a daze and the only thing she can seemingly remember was a harsh and brutal fall from above, as she try to recollect her thoughts the only thing interfering with that process was constantly being jabbed in the face by one of her own.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "Get off your sorry carcass young blood! THEY are COMING! it is time to prove your worthiness!"
He roared while at the same time striking Vi'vid with his harsh blows, it was only a matter of time before Vi'vid acknowledged his acts of discipline, she placed a grip on the arm in which the blooded Yautja held her by her neck, and then with the other she jabbed him back, strong enough to knock him both off her and on his back.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "About time young blood, i'm impressed with your strength no one has ever managed to put me off my feet heh, but lets put this new found strength of yours up to the test"
He pointed up and that's when she remembered, she along with her mentor were trapped in a very deep pit they fell into while previously holding their own against an army of serpents from above it, she was supposedly trying to get her first kill of a serpent but everything went wrong once that serpent alerted its queen provoking her to send more to its rescue, she along with her mentor, the one sent out to further confirm the details of her mission both fell into the pit together, thankfully they survived the fall but the serpents seek to finish the job as they all crawl down into the pit from the vines to the walls from the surrounding corners making their way down in an attempt to kill the two formidable foes.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "They are many young blood, with this many they are sure to prove a worthy challenge, but it isn't me they're after young blood which is why i won't take your glory, go! Collect their skulls!"
Vi'vid stands tall ready to face her challenge as they continuously make their way to the bottom of the rocky pit that fits an excellent battle area for her fitting, she activated her wrist blades as they were her favorite weapon to fight with, even as a child she was depicted as a brawler who would always stand above the younger yautja, where areas she'd always win no matter what in hand to hand combat.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "Put this on young blood, you're going to need it against this foe they try to defeat us using their infants that latch onto our faces"
He hands her a Clan Mask.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "And you'll need this, this will prove useful so that you don't have to always rely off melee combat, especially against this number of serpents young blood"
He hands her a Plasmacaster.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "You lost almost all of your gear from your fall, which is why i am lending you mine, take these smart discs as well"
Vi'vid becomes fully equiped with the gear her mentor gave her, and past that, she begins her battle with the opposing serpents as they attack her from all directions, this leads Vi'vid to recall another moment of her childhood where she admired the hunters that brought home their collective trophies to their clan, as a child she couldn't wait for the day she'd finally become one of them, she even tried to speed up the process with her foolishness by without permission taking a tribal sword that belonged to another hunter from out his tent.
Tribal Elder: "now where do you think you're going with that young'un?"
he looked down on her with concern.
Tribal Elder: "hmph, i see, so you can't wait eh? Very well ill have to keep an eye on you then"
He took the sword from her and placed a hand on her head.
Tribal Elder: "I sense tremendous potential in you young one, potential that id like to see myself, i will assign you one of my best personal trainers once you get older"
He laughs and picks her up and places her on his shoulder taking her back to her own tent, those were the days Vi'vid wanted to rush her life cycle in pursuit of her dreams of becoming an hunter, shortly after her mishap the elder notified her that her very motivation on becoming a hunter sheds light that she will someday be a hunter that will be known and recognized by not just her clan, but others rival or not, it is the reason she was born, she lives off battle.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "There you go young blood! your training over these years have truly paid off i am proud of you, soon this pit will be filled of over a hundred trophies, and their all yours so take them!"
While Acknowledging their honorable efforts, Vi'vid cut the serpents down one at a time as they surrounded her and as her mentor watched from a broken down pillar up above her, she sliced and diced her opponents reminding them of who and what she was during the process, her roar striked fear into their minds yet they all seek to destroy her, this was truly an honorable battle, even when they knew they stood no chance against a fully blood lusted hunter like herself.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "remember your training young blood, i want to see you using more than just those wristblades!"
Vi'vid deactivated her wrist blades and drew her spear to deal with what was left of the serpents, around her lie numerous bodies of the serpents she's slain, torn apart, gutted and incinerated, only a few serpents remained to oppose her, and these serpents as desperate as they were wanted Vi'vid to experience the worst for slaying their brethren, Vi'vid on the other hand sought to end their misery quickly, as she believed those who put up a decent enough fight, shall have a quick enough death.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "End this Vi'vid... it is time to go home you are already blooded as we speak to have slain THIS many of our greatest foe, there no use on further holding back on them as their numbers have completely run out"
As Vi'vid prepared to finish the job, the hairs on her neck stood with great intensity as a hellish screech that can be heard from across the planet can be heard, the remaining serpents scattered from the bottom of the pit making their way to the top leaving the two warriors for dead, Vi'vid then tossed her spear and took off her mask with great exhaustion, proud of what she had accomplished that day, her mentor then jumps down from his view distance to congratulate the warrior he witnessed in action.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "The elder would be proud of you, and to think that you'd be able to slay this many on your first mission, you are surely full of surprises"
Vi'vid looks at him with relief and clicks with joy, letting out a few roars in the process.
Strong Blooded Yautja: "hahaha, that's right let it all out child, now lets get your trophies so we can go hope and celebrate what you accomplished today"
Despite how many serpents she had killed Vi'vid only brought back one of their skulls and dismembered the rest to keep as her own personal trophies under the safe promise of her mentor to be kept a secret, she wanted to her clan to take the time to fully understand what she can do, how she takes her hunting to a whole another level and what her pride has gotten her through after all those years of training from a child to a full fledged hunter.

Years since that day Vi'vid became the strong well known hunter she is today, able to take on countless serpents and collectively bring back all their skulls as a result and widely remarked for a her hunting skills as shes often gave her prey the advantage to do her a great deal of damage, any hunting ground she entered she made it her personal playground causing trouble for both the smoothskins (humans) and serpents alike, a novice in setting traps and a genius in tactical combat especially against the smooth skins, although she doesn't mind working alongside her brethren she mostly hunts alone to make her hunts more challenging as she enjoys fighting more than one foe, hunting is more than what she takes pride in, it is what she lives for and she never failed to disappoint her now late Elder and even after his death she still strives to make him proud as she vowed that she will continue hunting worthy pray until she has met the same fate of the brave Yautja Hunters before her who've all died the honorable deaths as hunters.



How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
Vi'vid will always be on the hunt, as a ghost who appears out of no where, she will make herself visible to her target and make it very clear that shes chosen IT as her target. She will tend to cause trouble for the hive, as she will be destructively collecting their weeds, destroying their walls and fortifications, and hunting their sisters, for the marines Vi'vid will also try and intimidate them before attacking, she will use her tricks to get them to fight her and lure them into her traps, she will be stationed somewhere on the map where she'll take all the trophies shes collected so far and dismember them, she'll cloak around the map and look for whats to find and often spy on the ongoing warfare between the marines and the xenomorphs.
Other than that i choose to play my pred as ive seen others play theirs, ive often spectated predators for full rounds up until the marines defeat the aliens or up until the aliens take off with the alamo.

Why should we whitelist you?
im a very good roleplayer, as a matter of fact thats the main reason i LOVE this game, it maintains its realism and its roleplay theme, i've always wanted to try to play as predator, what stands out about me to them the most is they are the most complicated and fun roleplay class in my opinion, mainly because they have the opportunity to hunt both human and alien alike and their goal is JUST TO HUNT, while everyone else is fighting, their hunting and their unbelievably strong, i wish to be whitelisted because this class interests me more than anything else other than xenomorphs, engineering, specialists, tank crew, and i assure you i aim to be good at it and not to abuse it as a player who will follow the code of honor and work hard not to do ANYTHING that goes against it, im saying you should whitelist me because i aim to be a good predator and a true one to the code of honor.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
no

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
no

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes which is why ill be extremely careful

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Re: NeverLoseHope's Predator App

Post by Lumdor » 08 Oct 2018, 01:56

I'm gonna have to say you should re-read the currently accepted pred applications and re-apply when you can.

I'm not a person that likes to go deep into someone's story as mine was not the best, but yours needs some work.

If you can I'd work on this part, as it's the main thing people look at. Also get your name known in-game and try to get those people to look at your pred app.

At the moment I'm gonna have to go with a -1 on your app.
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Re: NeverLoseHope's Predator App

Post by NeverLoseHope » 08 Oct 2018, 13:25

Lumdor wrote:
08 Oct 2018, 01:56
I'm gonna have to say you should re-read the currently accepted pred applications and re-apply when you can.

I'm not a person that likes to go deep into someone's story as mine was not the best, but yours needs some work.

If you can I'd work on this part, as it's the main thing people look at. Also get your name known in-game and try to get those people to look at your pred app.

At the moment I'm gonna have to go with a -1 on your app.
I'll try harder

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Re: NeverLoseHope's Predator App

Post by Ghostdex » 17 Oct 2018, 11:57

I pretty much agree with Lumdor. Your application is basically a giant wall of text which hurts to look at and makes me not want to read and go over it. If this does get denied and you plan on applying again, format your app better as it goes a long way.

-1 from me.
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Re: NeverLoseHope's Predator App

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 17 Oct 2018, 12:29

The story isnt bad, but it's not formatted properly.
I have no idea who you are as well.

You gotta have a good reputation in this community to get onto this whitelist
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Re: NeverLoseHope's Predator App

Post by spartanbobby » 19 Oct 2018, 02:06

Lumdor wrote:
08 Oct 2018, 01:56
I'm gonna have to say you should re-read the currently accepted pred applications and re-apply when you can.

I'm not a person that likes to go deep into someone's story as mine was not the best, but yours needs some work.

If you can I'd work on this part, as it's the main thing people look at. Also get your name known in-game and try to get those people to look at your pred app.

At the moment I'm gonna have to go with a -1 on your app.
ghostdex wrote:
17 Oct 2018, 11:57
I pretty much agree with Lumdor. Your application is basically a giant wall of text which hurts to look at and makes me not want to read and go over it. If this does get denied and you plan on applying again, format your app better as it goes a long way.

-1 from me.
ThesoldierLLJK wrote:
17 Oct 2018, 12:29
The story isnt bad, but it's not formatted properly.
I have no idea who you are as well.

You gotta have a good reputation in this community to get onto this whitelist
-1

Echoing these fine lads, I can't say I've seen you in-game or out of the game I'd recommend trying to get a more active on the forums or if forums aren't your thing maybe hop onto the discord

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Re: NeverLoseHope's Predator App

Post by Imperator_Titan » 02 Nov 2018, 08:01

Weak application all around and I've never seen you around.

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Re: NeverLoseHope's Predator App

Post by Emeraldblood » 16 Nov 2018, 12:38

Resolved - Denied; we have a WL application help channel on our discord if you need help improving any future applications.
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