KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

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KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by KaiserBlackwood » 14 Nov 2018, 16:49

Byond ID: KaiserBlackwood

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Andrey Rogovyk

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): N'jal He'tal

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, I am

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):

H'jal He'tal was born in the clan who strictly followed the Honour Code.
This clan has perfected art of stalking and scouting, alongside with melee combat and usage of smart disks.
They are perfect 'rangers' (They are good at surviving out in the wild) by the reason of the harsh landscapes and jungles of their home planet.

Compound

H'jal, as all of his ancestors, was sent to the compound to be teached the ways of Yautja combat and survival, alongside other Young Bloods.
The melee wasn't his best side, but he managed to pass to the last challenge by being swifter and more agile than his foes.
However being worse in melee than others didn't bring him respect. He wasn't unrespected, neither respected by Young Bloods.
But the Council saw him following the orders of elders without asking questions, so he was much appreciated by them.

Last Challenge

As his last challenge he chose to hunt down and kill a Xenomorph Lurker -- ferocious and hideous beast with sharp claws and agiluty beyond measure.
As Honour Code stated, he could use no cloak or plasma caster, so H'jal prepared some traps and his claws for action, not forgetting smart-disks for hunting it down, if it runs.
Young Yautja was practicing for 3 days before his challenge: melee, disks throwing, dueling with beasts and other Yautja. During this time he took some tips and hints from the elder Yautjas from his clan.
When the Hour X came, he was ready for the Hunt. When he knew that beast came, he knew he was spotted long ago. The Lurker dashed at him, trying to get his neck with its claws, but He'tal Young Blood dodged that hit.
In the answer, H'jal attacked Lurker with his claws, cutting the stomach of it, sprinkling himself in acid. However, that had not that much effect as he expected -- the Lurker was still standing ready for fight.
"This going to be very interesting", -- said Yautja and lunged towards beast...
After 3 hours of battling each other, N'jal has won, by cutting his foe's throat with smart disk. Exhausted and wounded, he tried to take a sit near the corpse, when suddenly one of Elders came out of nowhere.
Young Blood bowed as Elder came closer and said "I am impressed, you have improved yourself since Compound", -- then he marked H'jal's armor with some of the blood of the fallen Lurker.
"IT's a great honour for me", -- bowed Young He'tal. "I know it is, Young Blood, but the bigger Hunt still awaits us..." -- Elder raised his face to the sky...

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?

Mostly I would be invisible, scouting for getting more info about my prey, and such.
Because it's never enough intel.
I would fight honourably, sparing life for my worthiest prey, if they aren't xenomorphs, and killing those who were unworthy, or acted so.
Thought, I would do some things like protecting survivors, if they aren't armed of course, or dragging a marine corpse to FOB.

Why should we whitelist you?
I am willing to explore new roles on the server. I already tried myself as Tmod.
Also, I would love to bring some RP with preds for marines or xenos. This would be interesting and fun.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Paradise Station -- Rule 7(Self-Antagging)

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes I do understand.
Andrey Rogovyk — XO, Scout Specialist, Engineer, Unga, Mongoloid.
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Re: KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by Karmac » 14 Nov 2018, 17:27

This is just like, really bad.

Just sorta painful to read really.

The backstory seriously needs some work, all I can say is 'look at an accepted application and look back at yours' for that really. The play-style is somehow worse than I could've expected as well, there's no unique gimmick there or a defining personality trait.

I don't think I can give this any bigger of a -1 in all honesty.
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Re: KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by NescauComToddy » 14 Nov 2018, 18:05

Lackluster application, generic background with inadequate formatting, simple vocabulary and sparse in detail, plus the way in which you intend to play is something common that any predator is patterned to do.

You a month ago made a trial-mod application, you were accepted, and lasted 2 days moderating before being removed for lack of 'professionalism' and toxicity (I'm not sure of the latter since I don't remember every single post). I do not have anything personal against you at all, and I wish you good luck, but you chose the wrong time to make an app, and maybe before you try again, you should build a healthier reputation in the community.

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Re: KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by taketheshot56 » 15 Nov 2018, 01:01

KaiserBlackwood wrote:
14 Nov 2018, 16:49
Why should we whitelist you?
I am willing to explore new roles on the server. I already tried myself as Tmod.
Probably not the best to compare your desire to explore other roles with your trial.

Overall, not a great history and poorly fleshed out app. Go a few months with good behaviour getting known by the community then try.

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Re: KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by Ghostdex » 15 Nov 2018, 03:31

You were removed from the staff team not that long ago and to top that off this application was terrible to read through, -1.
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Re: KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 15 Nov 2018, 07:22

I think you were just over zealous before, and you did try with your trial mod, so I don't hold that against you. But your application is lack luster, and I think your reputation is a little bit stained still from before. You're not gonna get much trust from the community or the council with this main role.

If you want to explore new things, I say go for the CO and Synth whitelists first.

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Re: KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by KaiserBlackwood » 16 Nov 2018, 10:55

Yup, as I suspected, may I withdraw app?
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Re: KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by x31stOverlord » 16 Nov 2018, 10:57

You can withdraw it if you wish.
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Re: KaiserBlackwood - Predator Application

Post by Emeraldblood » 16 Nov 2018, 12:56

Resolved - Withdrawn as of today
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