Predator application: Serth'Neta

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Killjaden
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Predator application: Serth'Neta

Post by Killjaden » 08 Dec 2018, 19:21

Byond ID:
Killjaden

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Jayden 'Support' Morales

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Serth'Neta


Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, I have read and understand them. Also you have to fix the url for this one guys! I fixed it in my post but the standard template uses the old forum link instead of cm-ss13.com

Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):

I ended up writing two, first one is more based around the Predator.
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How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?

If I would be whitelisted , Obviously I have to be the spooky laugh in the shadows. There is no playing Predator without being spooky. Gotta do it.

Though, Despite being mainly down there for the hunt of course, I would try to be more... In the back. Watch and observe. Interact and see if I can find any willing challenger.
My second objective would be making sure that, if another predator is around and found his prey. I would try my best to assist him, like keeping those that wish to interfere away. Trying to be mostly non-lethal, Preds ain't there to ruin the game for anyone. My main point here, I am really not here to go and kill somebody and be glorified about it. I want some fun situation. Not the kind that are simply fun for me but for others involved.

Why should we whitelist you?

This question always got me. To be fair, I play marines a lot. About 99% of the time by now. Either as a Squad medic or Doctor/CMO. I played xeno for a bit but it never struck me as fun. And at this point, I think that playing Predator for a change could be quite nice and offer something more than just working game mechanics and shooting. It's a great chance to get some rare RP you won't get as the usual roles.

I am not particularly robust at all. And I am not applying to be robust, I would rather enjoy some decent RP and funny situations.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

Nope! Clean note slate!

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Nope

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yeppers!

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Re: Predator application: Serth'Neta

Post by Karmac » 09 Dec 2018, 04:35

The story reads as if it were written by a 6 year old that had just discovered the full stop key, the content describes absolutely nothing relevant to your intended playstyle, additionally the only thing I find out about your predator is that he thinks predators are great and humans can't possibly be worthy prey. The only reason I bothered noting the last two points is because you explicitly and bluntly stated them in two sentences close to the beginning of the second story, which is pretty pathetic writing.

Uhhhhhh -1

Your forum profile picture is also immensely disturbing, I just wanted to say that, it didn't actually affect my opinion of your story or anything.
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Re: Predator application: Serth'Neta

Post by Survivor » 09 Dec 2018, 13:26

The story was.... oddly written. It really does look like a child wrote the story. Although I don't doubt you can be trusted, I'm going with a neutral.
Karmac wrote:
09 Dec 2018, 04:35
Your forum profile picture is also immensely disturbing, I just wanted to say that, it didn't actually affect my opinion of your story or anything.
Also this
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Re: Predator application: Serth'Neta

Post by Dolth » 09 Dec 2018, 13:37

-1

As Karmac said your story is very oddly written but more importantly I can't manage to understand any noteable quirk nor any specified way of acting beside maybe "Hide, laugh, assist other pred". I understand it is hard to make original predators but right now I can't find any personality bound to your more than regular pred-character.

Sorry bud, just my pov.
Also what's wrong with his pic lol?
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Re: Predator application: Serth'Neta

Post by Avalanchee » 09 Dec 2018, 14:32

Karmac wrote:
09 Dec 2018, 04:35
Your forum profile picture is also immensely disturbing, I just wanted to say that, it didn't actually affect my opinion of your story or anything.
Phillip 'Avalanche' Murray
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Re: Predator application: Serth'Neta

Post by Killjaden » 15 Dec 2018, 06:48

I may or may not have realized thast I copy and pasted the wrong thing.
Nonetheless, For now I just wish to close this and maybe reapply in a few months when I actually have a bit more time aye!
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Re: Predator application: Serth'Neta

Post by Emeraldblood » 15 Dec 2018, 23:03

Resolved - Withdrawn as of today
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