Kha'Seekar'Sai - Greenfire0215's Predator Application

[greenfire0215]

Byond ID: Greenfire0215

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Mark 'Expendable' Poley.
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Kha'Seekar'Sai.
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I have read the Honor code several times throughout my time being in the USCM community.
Character background (An ADEQUATE description and story of your predators background):
"I am Kha'Seekar'Sai, known by my clan as a respected brother in hunts and duels. I seek only those worthy of equal skill and will, with my traps and tools to enhance my hunt, I rarely use them as a whole, only to practice and hone my skills in close combat against my next prey."
"I can remember my Young blooded hunt, it was only 38 years ago with my brothers off of Yaujta Prime, we had set course for a planet with a dangerous beast with its hide and talons extremely thick for our weapons to pierce, and block. Our only way to kill this foul beast was with brute force, with both of us holding it down, our brother would attempt to strangle it every chance we got. we have all gotten our share of scars, with mine nearly cutting my left arm off. Luckily I had not been deemed unworthy for future combat as my wounds healed after the hunt was over. After which we had all chosen a part of the beast we shall keep with us till our end times, with my brothers choosing its teeth and leather, I had chosen its claws as a reminder of the only beast to nearly incapacitate me."
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator)?
I intend to play as a passive aggresive predator at the beginning of the round without killing xenomorphs that accept the challenges as a mean to keep them busy without them being bored for the first 30 minutes of the round.
Why should we whitelist you?
I have seen and played almost all of marine side roles in my time of USCM with the exception of CE and TC, and have found the marine gameplay a little bit stale. That's not saying i don't enjoy my time and RP in it, however, I think it'd be time for me to have that moment where i can be amazed by the limits and fun again as a predator.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I have not.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I am not.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
I completely understand that those that break the rules and cause the round to be disrupted for all should be taken out of the whitelist.

[Avalanchee]

Alright okay, few big red flags.

• The name

Not sure what you we're trying here but 'Seeker' doesn't really fit.

• The formating

Spaces.

• The story

compared to other apps it's really weak, nothing about your pred, "big enemy" syndrome, very short and uninteresting

• The Playstyle

you're saying that you will do something with xenos before marines deploy and then.. what?

Also only 2 forum posts, never saw you ingame.


Sorry chief,
-1 it is

[Imperator_Titan]

Weak story, uninteresting playstyle, never seen you Ingame

-1

[Sambalu]

First off, the name seems really unfitting.
Your forum activity is EXTREMELY low. Like, as of writing this you only have one other post. You should be more active on the forums.
I haven't seen you on the server either.
Story is uninteresting and doesn't tell us much about your pred, and the playstyle isn't really anything that stands out. It's what's supposed to make a predator unique, but killing xenomorphs is pretty much a thing every pred does.
I reccomend reading some of the accepted apps the next time you apply. Better luck then.
-1

[simonset55]

I don't even have to read this to see that no effort was put into it

-1

[Audi_Gzz]

Alright. You put 0 effort in this story and app bro. The lore inconsistency, the formatting, the general length, and the name. Its all bad just due to the fact in a hunt if a yautja is hunting just one animal or w.e the fuck you put your Yautja to hunt, Yautja's dont ask for help or none of that shit for just a singular animal. Formatting is horrible i'm pretty sure you can see this. The length of this "story" is the length of how many times I would have to write "I will not yell in class." 25x in elementary school. Just withdraw this app and come back in 3 months with a better pred app and read up on the lore and shit. -1.

[Karmac]

it's very bad overall

your second ever post

could this be a joke?

-1: A Haiku by Karmac

[ThesoldierLLJK]

I suggest you use our discord and use the white list application help channel for the next time.
-1

[KingPhilipIII]

Name is bit of an issue.

No attempt to format was made which isn't a great sign of effort.

Forum activity is too low and it's to my understanding you were recently banned from the discord, which while that isn't a disqualifier to me is a bad sign.

I've seen you ingame, but only ever with the unga dunga delta rush, which is not a good place to be associated for an application about roleplay.(I know the jokes about "haha pred whitelist is write a story to be above the rules", but if that's how you usually play it's a bad idea to hand you a plasma cannon and wrist scimitars.)

Your story is lackluster, a novel isn't required but there's something to be said for setting a scene and immersion.

Finally your playstyle is mildly concerning to me as a frequent xenomorph player, since it's extremely common for xenomorphs to avoid predators prior to the marine landing since losing your combat castes before your opposition has even arrived is not a good way to last longer than ten minutes.

-1 chief, sorry.

[Ghostdex]

I recognize the character but nothing stands out from my recollection, otherwise everything else is generally not good at all, the name is also pretty bad. -1 from me.

[spartanbobby]

I suggest you use our discord and use the white list application help channel for the next time.
-1

-1 Chief, Like soldier said you should use the #whitelisthelp channel on discord for your next go around. Better luck next time

[Emeraldblood]

use the #whitelisthelp channel on discord for your next go around

Resolved - Denied