Yeyin Thar'n-dha (Brave Strength)

[Lorenzo_The_Marauder]

Byond ID: Lorenzo_The_Marauder

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here): Katrina 'Autogun' Monroe

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): Yeyin Thar'n-dha

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor? Yes, i've also brushed up on the lore somewhat.

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background): Yeyin Thar'n-dha stands cloaked, overlooking the aftermath of yet another battle; he looks over the corpses of both sides.

"dha-viath" Disaster

This is the seventeenth battle he's observed, he pays great attention to every tactic, every formation and every strike.
He registers the outcome of every battle, thinking long and hard about what made said outcome possible.
A group eventually arrives to clear the dead and dying while one of their un-wounded and armed number wanders off, no doubt to see if any hostiles remain.
Yeyin Thar'n-dha follows the ooman closely for a short while, taking great care not to disturb his prey until the time is perfect.
He uncloaks, letting out a mighty roar, making certain that his prey is aware of his presence.

The encounter is short, the ooman barely has enough time to fire it's taun'dcha before Yeyin Thar'n-dha's wrist-blades pierce it's soft flesh.
He cuts up his prize, deftly slicing it apart starting with the limbs, then the innards and finally the head.
Another hunt completed, another trophy claimed; each hunt ending quicker than the last.
Yeyin Thar'n-dha lets out another roar before cloaking once again, hearing the screams of his prey's comrades echo in the distance.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)? Yeyin is a hunter and a killer, but above all else he is a tactician. He spends a large amount of time studying his prey, rather than simply stalking it. He also has a level of respect for beings that he can learn from; should his prey display something he hasn't seen before, he might give them a head start or avoid killing them until Yeyin decides that no more can be learnt from said prey.

Why should we whitelist you? Many people dislike predator rounds for reasons ranging from salt to bad predator roleplay, to unfair siding; I want to make people enjoy predator rounds. Instead of going "God damn it, there's a hunt this round" I want people to instead go "Holy shit, there's a hunt this round! Yes!" I want to make the game more fun for everybody involved. I know that i'm not the most well known person that frequents CM, but i want to at least give it a shot.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)? My most recent ban was 24 hours for improper escalation, not sure if that was more than a month ago but since i'm not certain i'm putting it here.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? Nope.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor? I absolutely understand.

[forwardslashN]

I think you need more forum activity. Your application is okay, though I wanted to know more about the character based on their background. Considering Dha-viath kills each prey "quicker than the last," that doesn't exactly leave a lot of room for studying them like you describe in the next section. I've seen you in the game before, but I'm not really familiar with your character. Overall, I think neutral leaning on -1 just because of your low activity. It's hard to really recommend someone to play a role where they are scrutinized by the community every time they play, when they're fairly new or unknown.

[Lorenzo_The_Marauder]

I think you need more forum activity. Your application is okay, though I wanted to know more about the character based on their background. Considering Dha-viath kills each prey "quicker than the last," that doesn't exactly leave a lot of room for studying them like you describe in the next section. I've seen you in the game before, but I'm not really familiar with your character. Overall, I think neutral leaning on -1 just because of your low activity. It's hard to really recommend someone to play a role where they are scrutinized by the community every time they play, when they're fairly new or unknown.

I understand, like i said i'm not exactly the most known person around.



As for the former comment, yeah i should have written that somewhat better. The idea is that he isn't learning anything new from his recent prey, usually it goes >See predator >Run away or fight back >Die or manage to not be considered prey anymore

Whereas the marines tend to display curiosity first, demonstrating aggressive tactics when the predator is considered hostile, and having an insane level of stubbornness when it comes to wanting it dead.

Which is something he hasn't exactly seen a lot.

[Scrat505]

(Note: NOT whitelisted, so opinion holds little weight.)

+0.5

I know you as a solid individual that won't do stupid shit, but your community involvement is a bit lacking. I'd say be a bit more active ingame and more active on the forums so that people would be more comfortable with you.

[LordeKilly]

Application isn't that good, combined with the sub-par activity. You just need more time to get your name out there and work on the story more.

-1.

[Shyguychizzy]

Going with a -1, I am unfamiliar in who your player is or who you are in general, I may not be whitelisted, quite aware you aren't well known but seriously, I have no idea who you are, nothing personal.

[Feweh]

No idea who you are, low community activity and meh application.

Denied.