re'lathcea chi'ytei-h'dlak (Embrace fear)

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re'lathcea chi'ytei-h'dlak (Embrace fear)

Post by Recounted » 08 Sep 2016, 22:14

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Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):Ray Dubi

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name): re'lathcea buelata

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?Yes I am

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):Some days its as if there is no challenges for the mighty
re'leathcea buelata to hunt big trophys for all the exotic he has haunted down. Sadly none of them has given him satifactory of the kill.Today is the day Re'leathcea will be going far, far into the wild of the world to look game. A game so great so challenging to bring Buelata heart pumping to claim the prize,bring it back to his clan to restore them to higher glory they held once before. For they have fallen in the grace of the yautja kind being lazy,showing off trophys even a initiate could claim without much effort. No higher shame than another yautja stealing game from another yauja. A absolute disgrace has brought the blood trails to a rank lower than they have had to uphold. Many of the warriors in the clan began to wonder if they would be able to catch game. Game bigger,and much more challenging for a good prize to uphold. Re'lathcea wanted to be the one to do this. Be the Tribesman to claim the toughest game of them all.

How could Re'latchea catch such a good prize that would be a distance dream for any tribesman,catching game that would make him wonder if he could even fight against such a beast.all to be standing atop a foe who put a fight so difficult to kill and claim to bring the blood trails to greater glory? With this much anticipation,R'lathcea began to search far and wide for game to be fairly matched to his agility,strength and dare to say..technology that is equal to his measure? Such a hope to find this prize to return for his tribe to be the one who has made his tribe climb back former glory. But most of all is for re'lathcea to be a legend.

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?I will be watching both the marines and aliens to see if they prove to be a worthy foe,If they are deemed worthy I will do a laugh emote then fight them to the death/

Why should we whitelist you?I'm always open to be having a watch over the battlefield there can be many situations in which I can intervene in and that I have been playing on the CM server for a while and wanted to give this a go.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?I haven't been banned but warned by SLC97 for doing something as commander

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why? Not banned from any other server or have been.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes I am aware.
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Re: re'lathcea buelata (blood trails)

Post by Shyguychizzy » 08 Sep 2016, 22:21

Going with a -1, this app is very short and felt like a breeze, a very short one to be exact, as well as a tad generic app. Your name it seems like it but sorta seems random and not in the yautja language, care to explain on this?
Edit: As well as it seems not much effort was put into this App.(I did forget to include this part)
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Long time ago, I, Ka'Torag-na Halkrath, Skilled Master Hunter Of Prey, Unleashed an unspeakable evil upon Xenos and Humans! But a foolish Xeno Hunter wielder of robustness stepped forth and opposed me. Before the final blow was struck, I tore a gate of Salt of Solitude and flung em into the world of CM, and took out their Facehugger Capabilities! Now, this Xeno Fool seeks to return the favour, and undo my evil reign and of many other predator predecessors!

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Re: re'lathcea buelata (blood trails)

Post by Recounted » 08 Sep 2016, 22:29

I guess I could look more into it I'll just take this down
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Re: re'lathcea buelata (blood trails)

Post by Recounted » 08 Sep 2016, 22:31

Shyguychizzy wrote:Going with a -1, this app is very short and felt like a breeze, a very short one to be exact, as well as a tad generic app. Your name it seems like it but sorta seems random and not in the yautja language, care to explain on this?
Edit: As well as it seems not much effort was put into this App.(I did forget to include this part)
Never made a yautja name before so I gave it a go on this one
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Re: re'lathcea buelata (blood trails)

Post by Recounted » 08 Sep 2016, 23:05

updated background story

Gave a bit of a update on the name since it was slitghty random
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Re: re'lathcea chi'ytei-h'dlak (Embrace fear)

Post by Feweh » 09 Sep 2016, 00:29

Nowhere near our current standards for Pred apps.
Look at the accepted category.

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Re: re'lathcea chi'ytei-h'dlak (Embrace fear)

Post by Recounted » 09 Sep 2016, 17:13

Feweh wrote:Nowhere near our current standards for Pred apps.
Look at the accepted category.

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I have not made many app before can I know whats wrong with my app? I gave a good reasoning for wanting to play pred,gave a bit more background story for him also made sure I understood the code of honor?
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Re: re'lathcea chi'ytei-h'dlak (Embrace fear)

Post by Boltersam » 09 Sep 2016, 17:52

Recounted wrote: I have not made many app before can I know whats wrong with my app? I gave a good reasoning for wanting to play pred,gave a bit more background story for him also made sure I understood the code of honor?
Grammar. Spelling. The list goes on.

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