kjuhte vor'mekta (Void Stalker)

UDontKnowMeOo · Post by **UDontKnowMeOo** » 13 Sep 2016, 16:57

Byond ID:
UDontKnowMeOo

Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Corvex Mercer (I play alien and marines evenly)

Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
kjuhte vor'mekta (Void Stalker)

Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
Yes, I have read every detail as of 9-13-16

Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
I was separated from my two kin before an encounter with an ancient alien queen. The said queen and I fought to the death and she almost won, but I was faster than her and kept dodging most of her attacks. But since the Queen was very intelligent she cornered me and barely got me with a tail swipe, breaking my left arm. Once I ignored the pain I started to stab her in her weak spots, ultimately killing her. The only trophy I could grab was a piece of her tail before her backup arrived. I went to the closest river and washed some of my blood off as fast as I could. I shove the tail in a safe place and head off to find my kin.

After searching for 2 long hot days I found some purple alien weeds, and a Yautja spear and a trail of Yautja blood. The blood led to a small hive next to a lot of human looking buildings. I cloak and look around for aliens, making sure that I am alone and able to check for a possible body of ether alien or Yaujta. And that's where I saw two young sentinels an elite drone and one dead elite runner. Next to the runner was my fellow kin, both of them, alive. It was time to do a 1v1 for each of us, i was paired up with a young sentinel while the worn out kin was with the other young sentinel, which leaves the energetic kin ready to take on the elite drone. We fought and won against them all, taking our trophies and heading out to seek more challenging prey.

We spread out for one day to start looking for prey and we found this huge deserted human base with a small hive north of it and a small temple between them. We decided to stay there and start resting to rejuvenate ourselves for the future hunts to come. After all the resting we started to head out, one going to the hive and two going to the large deserted human base. The two at the base being me and my kin. We separated to cover as much ground as possible while cloaked. My kinsman discovered two survivors of the that cataclysm that must have happened at this base. While he is studying them I decide to find out if there are more and if its possible to find more. All I keep finding are Monkeys, Fawas, Stoks, two Corgis and a living mushroom? Although, it wasn't to long after I found the mushroom that I started to hear noises from the skies, and I see a huge space ship starting to land. I quickly tell both kin about it as soon as possible. And around the same time I hear from one of the kin that the hive has grown a lot and made a lot more aliens.
To be continued-

How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
After being through a lot of alien encounters, he tries to study alien and human alike. He first head to the first place he can set his eyes on and tries to study the current lifeforms in the area. If it doesn't seem worthy enough to be prey, he moves on, for he hunts for a challenge. If he finds a alien, he makes sure it is a t2 young or better, If it is a human he tries to make sure that it will put up a fight instead of being a coward. He will always study long enough to find weak points, and if none, tries to find a way to win through careful strategic planning. His main goal is to get trophies when the opportunity is right, but also solo.

Why should we whitelist you?
I am going to be a honorable Predator which mainly duels with ether side and even with my own kin if asked. But I am here to weigh the scale towards helping the aliens with their goal.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
I am unsure if it was within the month, but I was permabanned from MP. Other than that, no.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No I am not currently banned from any server.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes, I understand all the implications that come with being a Predator.

Also, I am not very active on the forums, and I understand that being very inactive doesn't help my situation, but I am quite active in game. I am just not very known to most people (that I am aware of). If I am required or highly suggested to be a lot more active on the forums, then I will try to check up on the forums and be more active as best as I can. If anyone has any good ideas for me, please tell me below, I am open to ideas. I also wouldn't mind answering any questions or trying to give more information where it is needed.

Helgraf · Post by **Helgraf** » 13 Sep 2016, 17:15

6. Your forum account must be at least 1 month old before submitting an app.

-1

UDontKnowMeOo · Post by **UDontKnowMeOo** » 13 Sep 2016, 17:27

I have a second account that i cannot remember the password or email to, I have yet to find it on the CM website.
I have looked for the username on all posts and have not came up with anything.
I have looked through both emails to find it.... and yet no luck.
I do understand you cannot just take my word for it though, I just wanted to make sure everyone understands the situation.

Shyguychizzy · Post by **Shyguychizzy** » 13 Sep 2016, 18:09

Going with -1.
1.As what was stated above
2.No idea who you are.
3. There is already a Stalker clan, must either have permission to use that clan name.
4. Permanent banned for MP, not a good thing to have and I may add for MP, which is a law abiding rules, in which can escalate and make good judgements according to law role on which is sorta what troubles me.

UDontKnowMeOo · Post by **UDontKnowMeOo** » 13 Sep 2016, 20:02

I was unaware of someone taking a name for a clan, for I just made a name from a list of Yuatja language. And could you provide a link to the clan?
And MP is the only thing i have been banned from, and I have played commander multiple times as well as MT, Marine, Doctor, Researcher, and CMO.
Even though I did get banned from MP I have learned from that and made sure nothing like that has happened again.

Shyguychizzy · Post by **Shyguychizzy** » 13 Sep 2016, 20:03

UDontKnowMeOo wrote:I was unaware of someone taking a name for a clan, for I just made a name from a list of Yuatja language. And could you provide a link to the clan?
And MP is the only thing i have been banned from, and I have played commander multiple times as well as MT, Marine, Doctor, Researcher, and CMO.
Even though I did get banned from MP I have learned from that and made sure nothing like that has happened again.

viewtopic.php?f=125&t=6579

UDontKnowMeOo · Post by **UDontKnowMeOo** » 13 Sep 2016, 20:05

That seems to be one person, and not a clan of some sort.
My apologies for my ignorance if there is an actual clan.

Shyguychizzy · Post by **Shyguychizzy** » 13 Sep 2016, 20:12

UDontKnowMeOo wrote:That seems to be one person, and not a clan of some sort.
My apologies for my ignorance if there is an actual clan.

The thing is they first claimed the name, for instance the Shadow clan ( In which I represent viewtopic.php?f=125&t=7878), generally they have the authority for them were the first to have it. IF say you wanted shadow, you'd have to ask me, for instance, though I am only one, it is my clan.

UDontKnowMeOo · Post by **UDontKnowMeOo** » 13 Sep 2016, 20:36

That is a weird way to claim something... if its just one person.. because I thought a clan is when someone (even if just one person) tries to make a group with a first or last name that they want to brand for other people to notice them for their name on the front or back.

(EDIT)Also, I understand what your trying to say, but I wouldn't call it a clan, but what is the problem if the two people don't play together at the same time? As well as... even if they do play together at the same time, whose to say I cant be a brother from the same mother, just separated.. cause even i have a personal IRL experience of that. (except its my father and not mother)

Post by **forwardslashN** » 13 Sep 2016, 21:08

The second half of the name does not indicate your clan, unless you SAY that it does. Do not assume any specific clan identification based on the name only.

I think we need some clarification, and that applicants should clearly state what clan they are from.

UDontKnowMeOo · Post by **UDontKnowMeOo** » 13 Sep 2016, 22:29

Thank you for clearing that up. Do you believe we should start a clan section in the forum so the clarification is there?

Post by **forwardslashN** » 17 Sep 2016, 00:30

I read through application. Aside from the account age issue, the background is sort of lacking. Doesn't really tell us anything about your character, outside of them killing an ancient queen and being an all-around badass. The section for how you want to play isn't bad though. But taken together, I don't think this will go through, so I'm going with a -1.

UDontKnowMeOo · Post by **UDontKnowMeOo** » 17 Sep 2016, 02:16

How does them two together not make you think this will go through and make your answer/input a -1?
And please tell me how I can improve it, I am open to ideas.

Post by **forwardslashN** » 17 Sep 2016, 12:05

UDontKnowMeOo wrote:How does them two together not make you think this will go through and make your answer/input a -1?
And please tell me how I can improve it, I am open to ideas.

It's not on par with the other accepted applications, or at least the majority of them. Your account age automatically disqualifies you to begin with, but on that point I can kind of give you the benefit of the doubt if you say you have another one. But since you can't provide any information on what it is, that's hard to verify.

In terms of how you can improve, your backstory should reflect an understanding of the lore and tell the reader something about your character that's at least unique. This is hard to do if you don't have experience writing, but you can just outright say what that is. Maybe they're very religious and like to incorporate that into their hunting. Maybe they're really obsessed with meat, and tasting different kinds. Maybe they like to terrify their opponents because they believe fear is the strongest weapon. Maybe they shun advanced weapons because they believe a true hunter must overcome his prey with strength alone. It's really up to you. As for understanding of the lore, that's hard to describe really, but read the wiki and try to figure out what makes a predator a predator.

Also, some more stuff about why you should be whitelisted would be great. There are a lot of people who want to be whitelisted, why should you be whitelisted specifically? Playing a pred shouldn't be all about your fun, for example. It's generally a 50/50, so you're having fun, and the other people who you encounter are having fun. It won't always be like this, but generally trying to at least make it interesting for everybody else is a must. Good luck.

UDontKnowMeOo · Post by **UDontKnowMeOo** » 20 Sep 2016, 00:31

Sorry for the long reply @ForwardslashN .
I thank you for all your input you have put in thus far, and when I read your reply to what I have said, I thought about it and considered that last example of being unique.

forwardslashN wrote:Maybe they shun advanced weapons because they believe a true hunter must overcome his prey with strength alone.

I would like to use that one as a basis for editing, or improving my story, but seeing how you have said it, I would like your permission to use it.
As for the other account, I have looked up names I would use as a account name, and looked through my emails twice to try and find it. As for this account not being older than a month, I guess the best option would be just to go ahead and deny me, or to wait till it is of the age, or for me to have it deleted so I can post with a better story with being more unique whenever possible.

Post by **forwardslashN** » 20 Sep 2016, 08:52

UDontKnowMeOo wrote:Sorry for the long reply @ForwardslashN .
I would like to use that one as a basis for editing, or improving my story, but seeing how you have said it, I would like your permission to use it.

I mostly took them from other people who have applied. That one in particular is a reference to: viewtopic.php?f=125&t=6851
Not that I mind if you use it. It was just an example.

Post by **Feweh** » 20 Sep 2016, 11:55

Denied due to account age

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