Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

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Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by Trollarch » 25 Nov 2016, 05:50

Byond ID:
Trollarch
Marine Name (so we know who you are, if you play alien mostly, state that here):
Tony Guido
Name of the character you want whitelisted (The name your predator will use. This must match your in-game predator name):
Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath
Are you familiar with the Predator Code Of Honor?
I've read it once before and have spoken about it a couple of times in dead chat
Character background (A very BRIEF description of your predators background):
Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath was a loner in his clan, spending most of his time honing his physical skills and training his ability to strike fear into prey through hit and run stealth tactics.
How do you intend to play your predator (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your predator. This will weigh HEAVILY and frequently breaking from this MAY result in removal)?
I would at first wait for each side to meet and "greet" eachother and do a bit of observation on which side has taken the most damage and maybe listen in on the humans to find out if they had anyone notable that might be worthy prey. If I join late I would do the same, unless there were other predators I would ask them for information on the current events and maybe co-ordinate to take out multiple prey at once.
Style: I would try to be stealthy for the most part and do hit and run tactics, as long as it doesn't violate the honor code. I might sometimes come out of cloak and give the marines a quick spook then run back into darkness. I would also try to make an example of a marine in a Honor duel.
Why should we whitelist you?
Not trying to glorify myself (maybe a little :blush: ) but I have been around on CM since the second week of it's release and still find great joy in playing both marine and alien. Since the start of the server I was always wondering if they would add preds and androids and they finally did so I made this account. I would also like to try and RP with both Aliens and Marines instead of just going around shooting up random loners.
Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
No I have not.
Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
I have been banned on Paradise Station for almost 2 years after I had gone into the bar and attacked Punpun and fought back against people trying to murder me.
Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or disobey the Predator Code of Honor?
Yes as we all agree to the rules when we apply.

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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by LocalizedDownpour » 25 Nov 2016, 05:54

I would recommend putting alot more thought into your app as far as a story goes as the people that judge it will want a decent read to get an idea of how you RP.

Secondly. You need to be more known around the forums...though that's not really a factor for me as I know your name, not well but I know it.

Neutral leaning on -1

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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by Renomaki » 25 Nov 2016, 08:17

I'm sorry, but making a forum account just to make a predator application is heavily frowned upon.

Not only that, but you really need to put more into your background than a single line of text. How long did you even work on this?

I'm afraid I'll have to give you a -1, mainly due to the fact that you need far more time before you can attempt to apply. Just because you been in game for months doesn't mean you are allowed to apply. You also need to have an active forum account as well.
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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by Boltersam » 25 Nov 2016, 10:44

First post, no effort, and I've seen how you act before. It's not good.

-1.

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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by Monoo » 25 Nov 2016, 12:06

Yeah, your three major problems are these:

1. This is your first post. You need to be very active in the forum and community before you should consider making a pred app.

2. You need to be known. I don't recognize your marine name, and even though you claim to have been here awhile I can't recall having played with you any.

3. The story is short and bland. Lengthen it up and show off your RPing chops.

Otherwise, the app was pretty good... but for those reasons I have to give you a -1.
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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by LordeKilly » 25 Nov 2016, 13:00

This is terrible. To anyone looking to apply; Do not make the application your first post, ensure you're established in the community, be able to create a story that has elements from Yautja lore and finally constructing something that people can read.
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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by Mook476 » 25 Nov 2016, 19:34

-1 Sorry mate don't wanna be a hater but your story is kinda lackluster and I've never seen you on but that's just me
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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by Casany » 25 Nov 2016, 21:09

-1 for reasons stated above
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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by Scrat505 » 28 Nov 2016, 12:18

First forum post, short and poorly formatted application/story, and have never seen you ingame.
-1

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Re: Gahn'tha-cte Halkrath (Ruthless Shadow)

Post by Feweh » 28 Nov 2016, 12:51

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