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Sailor Dave
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Mad Blood

Post by Sailor Dave » 04 May 2017, 06:04

There was a short mini-event a week ago or so that I think forwardslashn hosted. I've been drafting up a bit of a story for it, something of a mini-novelization of the events to practice my writing. I figured I would toss it up here in Art & Stories in case anyone was interested in reading it. I haven't really written a story before, so It's pretty rough/inconsistent, and it was very late by the time I finished it so I've probably forgotten some bits somewhere. Is it too long? Too short? (Probably not.) Anyway, here it is.
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Post by ShortTemperedLeprechaun » 04 May 2017, 14:52

Excellent story. I think you did a good job. Let me tell you, that scythe limb removal rng scares me now. ANyways, I think you captured all characters quite nicely, and you have a knack for writing. I look forward to you providing us another story soon.
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