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Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Lil Mayo » 09 Aug 2018, 17:03

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Marine Name:
Lynn Corbray, with 2 "flavours":
  • The younger Lynn, used to play Engineer, Specialist and Standard Marine; nicknamed 'Fuse'.
  • The older, more experienced but still bald Lynn, nicknamed 'Clockwork', used to play XO, SO and CMP.
Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use:
Cassie

Examples of acceptable names:
Hector, Axel, Helen, Jamison, Trevor, Darius, Agatha

Examples of unacceptable names:

Dracula, Trump, Amigo, Wireson, Boardley, Tin-Tin

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines?
Of course. I wouldn't be posting this whitelist, if I wouldn't be familiar with the Synth rules... wouldn't I?
I am aware of the Synth combat restrictions, and of the fact that it must follow Marine Law flawlessly.

Physical description:
Upon examining the synth, you notice that...

...Cassie looks like a pretty tall, young and slim Caucasian woman, standing at 1.8 metres high. She has blonde hair, the colour of gold, and blue eyes.

Upon close examination of the synth, you find a serial number on it's neck:
WY-SH-LFC-C:45513

Synthetic Character Story:
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How do you intend to play your Synth?
Cassie's personality makes her a humble synth which is extremely protective with it's crew. Since she's unable to use ranged weaponry, and because her programming prioritises healthcare and engineering jobs, this means that you'll usually find Cassie on the FOB, building up defences and manning the personally-built field hospital. She prioritises helping the wounded above anything; even though you have just a bruise, she'll abandon anything to come heal you up.
She will also collect any unsecured weaponry and ammunition on the Almayer, in order to prevent harm to the marines. She'll just take the weapons back to the prep rooms. She'll do this after she's done with her other jobs.

I plan on doing engineering and medical jobs while playing Cassie, especially planetside and on the frontlines, where the Synth's high pain-tolerance and high engineering expertise will make building cade lines a very easy job. If the FOB is well-built and there are no wounded soldiers, I will try to engage in RP with the CIC staff, CL, or the Researcher.

How familiar are you with support roles?

Requisitions: I have played CT and RO for quite some time. I can load supplies on the pads and Alamo fast enough, and I order only stuff useful for the marines, avoiding wasting Req points.

Medical: I have played a lot of Medical roles, on CM and other SS13 servers. I enjoy surgery and chemistry, and I can brew chems and finish surgeries quite fast. I've never OD'd someone, and I only perma-lost 2 patients. I love being a squad medic aswell, but the constant double-teaming kills my fun.

Engineering: Apart from Command roles, this is my favourite department to play in. Engineering is very fun for me, and I get creative with FOB layouts, and sometimes I build secondary R&R rooms as CE. I'm fairly experienced in Engineering, and I've played Atmos Tech and Engineer roles on other stations; I enjoyed optimising Atmospherics (with a space-cooled Waste loop, with an optional cooler loop), and optimising the SM crystal to max capacity. I enjoy CM engineering aswell.

Security: I've played MP and CMP several times, and I really enjoyed it. I love performing interrogations, and great investigations, looking for evidence in order to arrest someone. MP is a RP role aswell, in my opinion; you get to know the survivors, record them in the security database, accept their bribes when you see them murdering the CO etc.. I enjoy playing as a detective-like MP.

Command: That's one fun, but demanding and tricky, department for me. I really enjoy playing XO and SO; I can make good battle-plans as a XO, change the said plan depending on the circumstances, and I can Overwatch more than 2 squads. I used to be a very try-hard SO when I played as one, ordering constant regroups and pushes; nowadays I tend to be a more relaxed one, giving the XO information, launching SB's and OB's and suggesting pushes, regroups, retreats etc.

Research: On low-pop, if I play a Researcher, I try to do surgeries, chemistry and such, so I get to oil up Medical and make the Medbay less of a hell for marines. On high-pop I try making interesting chem combos, like super-lethal toxins, combat-stims and I try RP'ing dissections on alien corpses, eventually testing transmitters and radios on live aliens to find out the Hivemind's frequency, in a bad effort for Research RP.

Overall, I am quite familiar with support roles. I feel that I'm actually better at all of them compared to combat; that's why I'm choosing to write the Synth app, rather than the CO app.

Why should we whitelist you?
I believe that I am a good support role player, and a good RP'er.

I can provide both efficient support for marines, by doing Requisitions jobs, keeping the marines' health in check and doing surgeries, and providing top-notch engineering work, and I believe that I can provide good roleplay. I do tend to be a try-hard sometimes, especially when playing command, by pushing the marines to charge constantly, or when playing doctor, choosing to heal as many marines as possible, and as fast as possible.

If I would get whitelisted, as a Synth, I could do all these support jobs, with great efficiency. If all support departments do not require help, CIC is completely manned, and the FOB doesn't require a field hospital or engineering work, I can try to help the MP's with forensics, especially if they're dealing with survivors, or I can try RP'ing with the command staff, CL and marines with Cassie's original quirk.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason?

I've never been banned on CM.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
No, I haven't been banned from any SS13 server.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?
I am completely aware of this fact, and I don't plan breaking the rules or the Synth Programming Guidelines if I get whitelisted.

Note: I eagerly await your feedback!
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Jakkkk » 12 Aug 2018, 17:53

I'm surprised no one has replied to this yet.

Y'know how I review apps, I list what's wrong, yadda yadda yadda, then I write a paragraph on what you can do better and wish you luck. I don't need to do that with this.

Your story shows your quirk rather well, doesn't bore me, and overall it gives me a good sense of how you'll play your synth and what to expect from them. This is a perfect application in my eyes, good formatting, good player, good story and I like how you didn't just copy and paste the names, you listed okay and not okay names from scratch. That isn't hard to accomplish, the names, but it is a small detail that I greatly appreciate. My only issue is that your synth has numbers on their neck, that doesn't make any sense to me whatsoever, but if you want to rock that detail it's all you.

This is a big +1, I'll be happy to see you on the Almayer.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Lil Mayo » 13 Aug 2018, 02:20

Jakkkk wrote:
12 Aug 2018, 17:53
I'm surprised no one has replied to this yet.

Y'know how I review apps, I list what's wrong, yadda yadda yadda, then I write a paragraph on what you can do better and wish you luck. I don't need to do that with this.

Your story shows your quirk rather well, doesn't bore me, and overall it gives me a good sense of how you'll play your synth and what to expect from them. This is a perfect application in my eyes, good formatting, good player, good story and I like how you didn't just copy and paste the names, you listed okay and not okay names from scratch. That isn't hard to accomplish, the names, but it is a small detail that I greatly appreciate. My only issue is that your synth has numbers on their neck, that doesn't make any sense to me whatsoever, but if you want to rock that detail it's all you.

This is a big +1, I'll be happy to see you on the Almayer.
Wow, someone actually replies! Thank you! :D
About the number on the neck, firstly it's a colour which blends in with the skin (that's why you have to carefully analyze the synth to see it; it'll be identified more via RP and Me" rather than normal analysis, which identifies most obvious elements). Secondly, the numbers are really small, and, thirdly, Cassie's long hair covers them up.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by MattAtlas » 14 Aug 2018, 09:22

My IC experiences with you have all been solid. Story's good, the formatting's also good and the story shows the quirk well.

Solid +1.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Lil Mayo » 14 Aug 2018, 12:03

MattAtlas wrote:
14 Aug 2018, 09:22
My IC experiences with you have all been solid. Story's good, the formatting's also good and the story shows the quirk well.

Solid +1.
Thank you for the feedback!
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by LaKiller8 » 14 Aug 2018, 14:37

A great roleplayer that has done many different quirks believably and perfectly and is 100% ready for the role of a synth. The story is the perfect length and has good pacing to show what you are trying to do as a synth.

+1
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Lil Mayo » 14 Aug 2018, 17:08

LaKiller8 wrote:
14 Aug 2018, 14:37
A great roleplayer that has done many different quirks believably and perfectly and is 100% ready for the role of a synth. The story is the perfect length and has good pacing to show what you are trying to do as a synth.

+1
Thanks, Thomas!

Can't wait for your Synth or CO app, you're an amazing RP'er!
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Kavlo » 14 Aug 2018, 18:15

This is just a really good application overall.
Backstory, quirk, activity, role playing, etc, it's all really good.

+1.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Lil Mayo » 15 Aug 2018, 03:34

Kavlo wrote:
14 Aug 2018, 18:15
This is just a really good application overall.
Backstory, quirk, activity, role playing, etc, it's all really good.

+1.
Thanks for the feedback! :)
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by ChengChan » 17 Aug 2018, 18:56

I know her very well and she's good at roleplaying and a competent player every role. +1 Good luck, Lynn.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 17 Aug 2018, 19:00

Looks good to me, and the player can roleplay with the best of them
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Solarmare » 17 Aug 2018, 21:16

"But, before she could feel anything, she found herself in the CIC.
An assault on the FOB by potential UPP reinforcements would've meant their demise. But that didn't matter anymore for her; she had to save the soldier, now. She couldn't think about anything else, than the treatment he required."
Uncertain on these two lines, synths don't have emotions so to implying feel at all is a bit odd in a synths story and the other is implying a decision based along those lines? Other than that the app seems fine.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Lil Mayo » 18 Aug 2018, 09:08

Thanks for the feedback, everyone!
Solarmare wrote:
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"But, before she could feel anything, she found herself in the CIC.
An assault on the FOB by potential UPP reinforcements would've meant their demise. But that didn't matter anymore for her; she had to save the soldier, now. She couldn't think about anything else, than the treatment he required."
Uncertain on these two lines, synths don't have emotions so to implying feel at all is a bit odd in a synths story and the other is implying a decision based along those lines? Other than that the app seems fine.
Now that I read these lines, I realise that they're quite cheesy and require some explanation. Should've expanded the context or edited them, in order to make them better. Thanks for pointing it out!

The first line implies just the fact that she cannot feel anything at all. If she would've had emotions, these would manifest while thinking about being useless.
The second line portrays the fact that Cassie prioritizes the marines' well being over anything else. Instead of moving back to the Almayer to tend to shipside problems and avoid any potential damage to her systems, she stays to take care of the wounded.

Thanks for the feedback, though!
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Solarmare » 21 Aug 2018, 02:21

I'll wait for more feedback on this but you don't need to respond to every post in it.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Mvp777 » 23 Aug 2018, 09:23

Obviously well made and well thought out, i like it +1
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Frans_Feiffer » 26 Aug 2018, 00:10

I don’t tend to comment on synth apps, however i’d like to start giving feedback, as it’ll probably help speed them along, as well as give me reason to read through and learn something for when I finally get to it, hehe. So to start, your formatting is done well, and makes the app flow well. For your story, it shows your quirk off very well, and is enjoyable to read. Not gonna lie, when I first started reading, the impression I was given during the first half by your wording made it seem as though your synth had emotion, at least more then normal, but this was dealt with later on, and I can see where this is not the case. You have a lot of time in support roles, and from my experience ingame with you, I think you have what it takes to meet the requirements for RP as a synth.

I’d be more then happy to have you as a Synth, so all that’s left to add is my +1. Good luck Cassie, and here’s to ensuring that the men aboard the USS Almayer make it back home safely.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by 420MYK » 07 Sep 2018, 10:54

Oooo yes please. well written backstory and character log. Plus your awesome in game , you easily know your stuff and are fun to RP with and play alongside. Add in the fact that IMO we need more active synth players this is an easy +1 good luck :)
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Sleepy Retard » 09 Sep 2018, 16:29

Jakkkk wrote:
12 Aug 2018, 17:53
me jakk me ugly me dumb me gay me jakk
what jakk said but cooler, +1 i like it
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Solarmare » 09 Sep 2018, 19:13

Enough positive feedback to accept and you should understand what synth entails, so I'll give this a +1 now.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Omicega » 25 Sep 2018, 13:17

I'll echo what Solar said, although I'd honestly like to see more of a med-highRP tone from you in your synth gameplay especially. Committing grand theft Jones more or less every single MT round is a bit on the nose, and I can't honestly recall ever seeing your older/more serious character taken out ever, even when you play XO. Maybe it's just me.

The story is fine and it works. The quirk is especially unimaginative and pretty much says "I'll do what every groundside synth does" -- telling us you'll do medical and engineering duties and also act as a sort of humble crew guardian is like telling us you'll shoot aliens as a PFC.

Neutral, but best of luck.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by SovietKitty » 25 Sep 2018, 16:31

+1

Everyone else said the things.
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Re: Cassie - Whitelist Application

Post by Emeraldblood » 25 Sep 2018, 18:08

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