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Pedroca2lucas - Yuuki - Second Synth APP

Post by Pedroca2lucas » 16 Oct 2018, 22:41

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Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Tony 'Blank' Anders

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name): Yuuki (Snow)
Examples of acceptable names: James, Mason, Xavier, Felix, Otto, Allan, Jessica
Examples of unacceptable names: Obama, Jesus, King, Dragon, Godly, Snyper, Circuits

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (http://www.colonial-marines.com/viewtop ... 57&t=14417)?

Answer: Yes, I'm.

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):
Description: A female body, with a long white hair, 5'5 tall, it has white eyes along with a cold aura.
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How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?

Answer: I intend to play Yuuki as a extremely descriptive synth, that's including what type of action she's going to perform while talking, like a question or an answer. She would be mostly at the medbay, helping with whatever is needed, Yuuki won't remain all times at the medbay, as I'll try my best to make her assist every department that requires assistance, from engineering to requisitions.

How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO)

Medical/Science - I'm playing doctor a lot, no need to look on the wiki or such a thing, so let's say that I mastered it.
MT/CE - It surely is my second home if medbay doesn't have a spot for me, easy to get the job done.
RO/CT - I believe that I'm a pretty good RO, I'm pretty sure that'll remember where everything is.
Command - I'm pretty aware of what do it, the consoles, orders and everything.

Why should we whitelist you?

Answer: I've been playing CM for a long time now, I think that I've 'learned' the way it works and I believe that I'm capable of withstanding a new challenge, while trying to make the round funnier but also trying to improve as a player.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?

Answer: Negative, I didn't receive a ban last month.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?

Answer: Negative, I'm not banned from any server.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?

Answer: Yes, completely.
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Post by MattAtlas » 17 Oct 2018, 05:27

If a commander tells you "Stop acting like a goddamn 90s robot and speak normally", what do you do?
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Post by Sulaboy » 17 Oct 2018, 10:31

I'm against the name because it might be from an anime. I'm against the quirk because it makes communicating difficult, and your story showcases just how it would make communicating difficult. The answers to your questions also end up with you application looking very bare. Also I'm assuming this synthetic would be a older model, you didn't specify, but a synth with white hair and white eyes doesn't do a good job of blending in with the crew. -1
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Re: Pedroca2lucas - Yuuki - Second Synth APP

Post by VortexGaming » 17 Oct 2018, 11:12

I’m going to agree with sula on most parts about this besides the whole it would make communication difficult. Sure someone might feel odd talking to you but you can still communicating decently, more than others. I’m going to go go with a neutral leading towards -1 I wanna hear what the council has to say about this one
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Re: Pedroca2lucas - Yuuki - Second Synth APP

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 17 Oct 2018, 11:21

Why not just use Yuki which means snow? Why the double UU

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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 17 Oct 2018, 12:09

ThesoldierLLJK wrote:
17 Oct 2018, 11:21
Why not just use Yuki which means snow? Why the double UU
I thought that "Yuuki" refered to snow, totally my bad. It's Yuki then
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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 17 Oct 2018, 12:15

MattAtlas wrote:
17 Oct 2018, 05:27
If a commander tells you "Stop acting like a goddamn 90s robot and speak normally", what do you do?
I'd consider two points, and would ask if I should tune it down only when talking with said CO or if it includes the whole crew. If the answer is only with the Commander, I'd stop using the 'prefix' that I'm supposed to use and would focus only on being as descriptive as possible only when talking to said CO. If it includes the whole crew, same actions would be made.
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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 17 Oct 2018, 12:21

Sulaboy wrote:
17 Oct 2018, 10:31
I'm against the name because it might be from an anime. I'm against the quirk because it makes communicating difficult, and your story showcases just how it would make communicating difficult. The answers to your questions also end up with you application looking very bare. Also I'm assuming this synthetic would be a older model, you didn't specify, but a synth with white hair and white eyes doesn't do a good job of blending in with the crew. -1
The name wasn't meant to refer to an anime, i tried to refer to snow, but, apparently, I wrote it wrong, so the correct name would be 'Yuki', meaning snow. I don't see how it would make communicating difficult, I mean, It's supposed to make clear that asking a question or answering something, I'd use the ':' to make it easier as well, and with the description, it's indeed an older model, the white hair and white eyes would make reference to it's name, also, assuming it's an older model, it could be interpreted as a flaw on it's design, meaning not to be perfectly human but to be useful as a first generation model.
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Re: Pedroca2lucas - Yuuki - Second Synth APP

Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 17 Oct 2018, 12:23

Mallik wrote:
17 Oct 2018, 12:09
I thought that "Yuuki" refered to snow, totally my bad. It's Yuki then
If you're gonna pick a name that's foreign and exotic, I would at least do some research because in Japanese "Yuki" means snow.
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Post by Sleepy Retard » 19 Oct 2018, 09:37

A couple of questions/statements.

First gen synths can only have black hair. Does this change your plans at all?

It's said in your story your synthetic is beautiful. In game, assuming you are accepted, you'll be made fun of for being a snowflake bitch. Do you think a synthetic with a Japanese name, white hair and white eyes will fit?

Building off that last question, do you think people will take you seriously as a Synthetic?
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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 19 Oct 2018, 10:41

El Defaultio wrote:
19 Oct 2018, 09:37
A couple of questions/statements.

First gen synths can only have black hair. Does this change your plans at all?

It's said in your story your synthetic is beautiful. In game, assuming you are accepted, you'll be made fun of for being a snowflake bitch. Do you think a synthetic with a Japanese name, white hair and white eyes will fit?

Building off that last question, do you think people will take you seriously as a Synthetic?
Awesome, thank you for your questions!

1 - Since I didn't about know that, it's quite surprising for me, but no, it doesn't change my plans at all, the hair color would only be to make reference to the snow theme, I would only come to be more attached to the white color, trying to always wear white equipment, like a labcoat or a snow uniform.

2 - While reading some other apps, I saw that we've got some other exotic names, so I do think that the name won't matter that much, about the visual, I do think it would fit, and it'll also bring attention to the synth, making RP scenarios easier for me and due to what you said before about the hair, only the eyes won't make any problems, but I do hope that I can get the white hair.

3 - I believe that if I'm accepted, it should take some time to get some reputation among everyone that plays, but after playing a lot of the Synthetic role, which is what I'm planning to do if accepted, I'll end up being someone that will be taken seriously, and if not, I'll just keep doing my job to make the game funnier for everyone, as the synthetic that everyone laughs about.

Also, thank you for your time.
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Post by Jakkkk » 19 Oct 2018, 18:08

This is kinda sick, the whole all white synthetic thing appeals to me for some reason. Programming leads them to gravitate towards white objects is odd, but quirks don't have to be run of the mill speech difference or, and thank GOD we don't have another "cheery/optimistic" synth. My point is that it hasn't been done before, and that's great. I don't have any concerns with the Question/Answer thing, I like it.

After running through your synthetic application from last time, this is a MAJOR improvement. You deserve it Anders, this is good work and you should be proud of it.

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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 19 Oct 2018, 18:22

Jakkkk wrote:
19 Oct 2018, 18:08
This is kinda sick, the whole all white synthetic thing appeals to me for some reason. Programming leads them to gravitate towards white objects is odd, but quirks don't have to be run of the mill speech difference or, and thank GOD we don't have another "cheery/optimistic" synth. My point is that it hasn't been done before, and that's great. I don't have any concerns with the Question/Answer thing, I like it.

After running through your synthetic application from last time, this is a MAJOR improvement. You deserve it Anders, this is good work and you should be proud of it.

+1
Thank you! I really appreciate your feedback!
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Post by MattAtlas » 20 Oct 2018, 01:51

Your answers are satisfying. Don't think there can be harm in giving you a shot, and I do like the quirk.

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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 20 Oct 2018, 09:18

MattAtlas wrote:
20 Oct 2018, 01:51
Your answers are satisfying. Don't think there can be harm in giving you a shot, and I do like the quirk.

+1
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Post by VortexGaming » 20 Oct 2018, 19:00

Changing from neutral to +1 you managed to turn it around answering the questions.
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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 20 Oct 2018, 20:01

VortexGaming wrote:
20 Oct 2018, 19:00
Changing from neutral to +1 you managed to turn it around answering the questions.
Thank you!
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Post by ThesoldierLLJK » 21 Oct 2018, 09:50

Yeah even though you didnt do your research on a proper name, I'll give you a +1 for turning it around.

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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 21 Oct 2018, 11:07

ThesoldierLLJK wrote:
21 Oct 2018, 09:50
Yeah even though you didnt do your research on a proper name, I'll give you a +1 for turning it around.
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Post by Sleepy Retard » 21 Oct 2018, 12:11

I personally dislike the app, but I'll let another synth councilmen answer this in my stead.
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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 21 Oct 2018, 12:17

El Defaultio wrote:
21 Oct 2018, 12:11
I personally dislike the app, but I'll let another synth councilmen answer this in my stead.
Understood, thank you for your time though!
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Post by Vampmare » 21 Oct 2018, 14:40

I have seen you ingame, but I don't think we have really interacted, so I can't attest for your RP skills.

Story was fine, but the rest of the application was a little bare. I would have liked some more fleshed out answers.

The Japanese name bothers me a little. I don't mind off-track names but its more the Japanese theme, but I'll let the council on that one. Quirk is nice and its something new.

Why do you want to play as a synth? if you could elaborate a little on that.

Neutral for now. +1, a really solid response. I'm sure you'll do great.
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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 21 Oct 2018, 15:10

Vampmare wrote:
21 Oct 2018, 14:40
I have seen you ingame, but I don't think we have really interacted, so I can't attest for your RP skills.

Story was fine, but the rest of the application was a little bare. I would have liked some more fleshed out answers.

The Japanese name bothers me a little. I don't mind off-track names but its more the Japanese theme, but I'll let the council on that one. Quirk is nice and its something new.

Why do you want to play as a synth? if you could elaborate a little on that.

Neutral for now.
Thank you for your time.

So, let's go, it's not going to be focused on a Japanese theme, only it's name is Japanese. The theme itself is related to snow, the white color.

To the main question now.

Everyone after doing something for a while wants to improve, get a chance to experience new things and everything like that, I think that I've been around for some time now, since I started playing CM earlier in 2017, but had some issues and stopped playing, I can say that I improved a lot, both my english and my knowledge about the game, when I saw that the game was going to get a new role, the synthetic, I already knew that I had to try that out, I tried to get the whitelist some time ago, failed miserably, after that I studied a lot of the game, about the synthetic role, read guides about it and did my best to keep everything in mind before applying again, If accepted, I would try my best to improve everyone experience about the game, trying to make every moment special for everyone, it's true that it wouldn't be all good moments, but that's why I'm trying to get the role, I'm willing to have some fun while making others have fun as well. I'm fighting for it, like everyone before me did, some had a easier path to get it, others didn't.

Once again, thank you for your time!
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Re: Pedroca2lucas - Yuuki - Second Synth APP

Post by SovietKitty » 28 Oct 2018, 17:18

Japanese names are fine, due to the Company having a Japanese theme in itself. What I do like is your answers, showing you pretty vested in making a good impression that this is something you want to take seriously. I think your English is fine. You've put in a lot of effort and have earned my.

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Post by Pedroca2lucas » 28 Oct 2018, 18:25

SovietKitty wrote:
28 Oct 2018, 17:18
Japanese names are fine, due to the Company having a Japanese theme in itself. What I do like is your answers, showing you pretty vested in making a good impression that this is something you want to take seriously. I think your English is fine. You've put in a lot of effort and have earned my.

+1!
Thank you!
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