Larry - Pedroca2lucas's Synthetic App

[Pedroca2lucas]

Byond ID: Pedroca2lucas

Marine Name (so we know who you are; if you play alien mostly, state that here): Tony 'Reaper' Anders

Name/Designation of the Synth Character you’re requesting to use (Follows common naming rules, and requires a first name with no last name): Larry

Are you familiar with the Synthetic Programming and Guidelines (viewtopic.php?f=57&t=14417)? Yes, I'm.

Synthetic Character Story (An ADEQUATE description and story of your Synthetics actions and involvement in a previous mission onboard the Almayer):

The Larry model has a long and shiny white hair, this model also has white beard, his creator used to like the white color. He has average height to make him look more human.

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Syncing...Initializing damage diagnostic...All systems nominalScanning for corrupted data...ER@#R0#RInitiating memory reading... >OPERATION NUMBER: 5138 - Estimated OPERATION 5138 time: 13:21.

>CDR Pablo: SO's! We're losing the fight! I need a sitrep of all squads, then I decide what should we do!
>Synth Larry: Commander, may I help you with that? Since I'm here at the FOB, I'm capable of giving you the sitrep. Actually, it would be better if I'm the one who made it.
~people screaming in the background~
>LT Roberto: Shut up! Stupid machine!
>CDR Pablo: Calm down, lieutenant. Larry, please do it. Also, is everything alright there? I heard people screaming.
>Synth Larry: Yes, Commander. Everything is perfectly fine here, it was just a Private First Class screaming. Actually, I think he's needing my help. (Looks with disgust at the downed marine)
>CDR Pablo: Ok, Larry, focus on treating the wounded. I'll let one of my LT's do the sitrep.
~a bullet pass by Larry's side, making a noise~
>Synth Larry: Affirmative, Commander. (Larry, with a smile on his face, starts to walk towards the downed marine. )
>Synth Larry: Hello, Private First Class Luiz, how can I help you today? (He says in a sarcastic way)
>PFC Luiz: C-Can-n't y-you s-see? S-Stup-pid mac-chine. (Starts to cry)
~boom~
>Synth Larry: Alright, Private First Class Luiz, let me treat you. (Says the synth with a sad looking face) WARNING! CORRUPTED DATA! Jumping to the closest memory... ESTIMATED OPERATION 5138 TIME: 13:33
>CDR Pablo: XO! ANNOUNCE THE PUSH! NOW! (While talking with the CMO)
>LCDR Otávio: COPY!
~while planetside~
>PFC Luiz: Thank you, Larry! I tought I was going to die. (Says he while crying )
>Synth Larry: You're welcome. (Larry stands his hand towards Luiz)
~Luiz suddenly hugs Larry~
~another explosion~
~Larry starts crying~
>PFC Luiz: Why are you crying?
>Synth Larry: Because you were crying.
>PFC Luiz: Larry, just be yourself!
~the push begins~
>Synth Larry: Understood. (Larry suddenly smile)
Finalizating memory reading process... Process terminated >ADM Henrique: You see? That's what a synth is capable of!
>Crowd: Incredible!

How do you intend to play your Synth (as in, describe HOW you will act/play your Synth and what support roles you’ll mainly focus on, what is your synthetics quirk)?
Answer: Larry is supposed to be a confusing synth, he'll be seen mostly helping at medbay or at the CIC, being able as well to help with the FOB. Larry's quirk is a bipolar atittude, he's able to change his behavior suddenly, from a smiley face to a sad one.

How familiar are you with support roles? (ie; Medical, MT, Science, SO)
Answer: I'm able to do medical stuff easily, I don't play MP often but I have a deep understanding of the marine law, I'm used to building stuff, but also trying to improve on that point, when it comes to cargo stuff, I'm able to do anything there, I consider myself able to overwatch, since I'm playing SO a lot recently. I'm not a huge fan of the research part, but it can be funny. I'm trying to improve on Chemistry as well.

Why should we whitelist you?
Answer: I believe that I can make the rounds a lot more interesting. Also, I would like to keep improving as a CM player and improve my english as well in a different point of view. I believe that I'm capable of doing the basic work that should done and keep the game going well.

Have you been banned from CM in the last month for any reason (we will check, and lies may result in immediate denial)?
Answer: Negative.

Are you currently banned from any other servers and if so, why?
Answer: Negative, I'm not banned from any server.

Do you understand that any player - donor or otherwise - can have their whitelist status revoked should they break our rules or the Synthetic Programming Guideline?
Answer: Yes, deeply

Please, keep in mind that english is not my primary language. Criticism is always welcome.

[ThatKazakhDude]

I didnt really see your character in game, although that can be explained by time difference, your character background is waaay too short, quirk is quite unique, would be interesting to have rp with you synth
Sticking with neutral for now.
Also,since there is no mchat anymore, it will take a long ass time for the actual senior mod to review this

[Pedroca2lucas]

your character background is waaay too short

I'm so sorry about that, I tought a short background would help understanding my synth. If asked, I can write another story for you, then I can compensate for that first story.

Sticking with neutral for now.

Anyway, thank you, if there's something to make you change your neutral, tell me.

[FearTheBlackout]

I like the format that you wrote your story under, but the story itself is short and cheesy as hell. It suddenly skips from your character treating a Marine to a freaking Admiral praising him. Your synth's quirk does sound like it would be entertaining, but I think that entertainment would be short-lived. I feel like I can FAINTLY remember seeing your character, but not nearly enough times or with enough clarity to know whether you could be trusted to play Synthetic.

I would honestly try again in 3 months or however long the wait is before you can reapply. -1 from me.

[Pedroca2lucas]

I like the format that you wrote your story under, but the story itself is short and cheesy as hell. It suddenly skips from your character treating a Marine to a freaking Admiral praising him. Your synth's quirk does sound like it would be entertaining, but I think that entertainment would be short-lived. I feel like I can FAINTLY remember seeing your character, but not nearly enough times or with enough clarity to know whether you could be trusted to play Synthetic.

I would honestly try again in 3 months or however long the wait is before you can reapply. -1 from me.

You pointed some good flaws by my part when writing that story, I was in such a hurry that couldn't make it in a better way. About the quirk, I'd try my best to make it last as a entertaining one. Also, I really appreciate the fact that you helped me a lot in understanding what I could change on that story. Anyway, thanks for your vote and your time!

[Jakkkk]

-1, your quirk is already more or less accomplished by Adralima with how they play their synth (being emotionally erratic) and since I can't attest to your ability as an RPer, I don't think you would be able to stay in character by acting like an emotionally unstable insane person, while following directives and not breaking code.

[Kavlo]

Alright well this application isn't the best to be honest with you.
Your quirk is basically as if they're a malfunctioning model swapping almost randomly which needless to say would probably have you sent back to the repair shop fairly quickly and to top it off it doesn't really match what you have in your story. Since in your intend to play section they describe them as "bipolar atittude" but in the story they're more like unable to understand emotion.

The application itself is also very short and doesn't have much to it to back why you should be whitelisted.

-1.

[Aceluke123]

I like the format that you wrote your story under, but the story itself is short and cheesy as hell. It suddenly skips from your character treating a Marine to a freaking Admiral praising him. Your synth's quirk does sound like it would be entertaining, but I think that entertainment would be short-lived. I feel like I can FAINTLY remember seeing your character, but not nearly enough times or with enough clarity to know whether you could be trusted to play Synthetic.

I would honestly try again in 3 months or however long the wait is before you can reapply. -1 from me.

I'd have to basically go with this.

I see you are active on the server which is nice.
Though the general consensus is -1 and I have to agree. The story is cheesy and the quirk is rather dangerous. I'm against a synth who randomly changes his attitude/actions and can't exactly show it easily in a story. The app seems like effort was put in, just not the right kind.

-1, apologies.

[Solarmare]

Ill agree with the other opinions here, the quirk is the sort of thing you'd explicitly try to avoid getting from a synth as it would just cause issue. Story doesn't really help much with it as it's just a synth that seems to speaking normally while rapidly changing faces? It's best to have them act in one concrete sort of way for synths, they don't have emotion they just mimic it where its useful and rapidly switching between them would be difficult for the player and detract from whatever use they would be.
I'll sit at a -1 for this, you seem like you understand what you need to do but a story better showcasing a more sensible quirk for a synth employed in a military setting would do a lot for you.

[Sargeantmuffinman]

The story is short as there's not much info to give on the synthetic in question.
The quirk is already explained by the others really.
Your name is something I vaugely remember.

As the demands by those who post here say no, I'm afriad I'll have to follow suit too. -1

Good luck next time.

[Emeraldblood]

Resolved - Denied; you can try again in two months.