Artouris - Mapper/Spriter Application

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Re: Artouris - Mapper/Spriter Application

Post by Bmc777 » 26 Dec 2016, 23:52

This is a huge improvement. This layout is very nice to look at, and while there's still a large space, it's not so large and empty that it looks strange. Just the small wall and two windows separating cryo from the main room made a big difference.

Here's the changes I would make:
- MP office is too small and barren, extend it to the right one or two squares, and decorate it. Maybe make the floor completely red. You'll lose some space but it's worth it for the effect.
- The Sleepers aren't used much, but they're too far out of the way. I would swap them with the lockers in the leftmost room and make it a Sleeper room instead.
- Throw out the med vendors in the freezer room and replace them with freezer crates.
- CMO office is too cramped, extend it out one or two tiles to the right. I would also replace the right windows with walls and add button controlled shutters to the windows for flavor.

Other than those relatively small adjustments, I'd say this, along with your other works, are a pretty good indicator of your abilities. Assuming you're as receptive to feedback with all future works as you have been so far I'm giving my +1.

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Re: Artouris - Mapper/Spriter Application

Post by apophis775 » 31 Dec 2016, 17:14

APPROVED.
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